Aaron Alan Addams

Another great chapter. I enjoyed the "Love on the Rocks" references. I've missed Mike, Tyson, George and family since "Five years on" ended. Your characters, in these very entertaining stories about CJ and extended family, have genuinely warmed my heart. Thank you for sharing your time, talent and efforts.

The "Like Police" say I have reached the maximum of positive comments for the day. So... I just wanted to let you know I like this chapter.

I know you posted this story over a year ago and I did read iit at that time. Unfortunately, I was dealing with, or more accurately, not dealing with an intense personal issue and could only remember that I thought it was a good story. Just wanted to say. Loved it!!!

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I like your story. Unfortunately, when I tried to hit the like button, I got a message that I've reached my quota for the day. Keep up the great work.

Well deserved. I love your work.

Ran out of space? Well, I ran out of likes. Just kidding. You got my like. Although, one sad, rainy day, I read and liked so many stories, I did run out of likes. As for Doc and Chip, I hope there is some other explanation but at the same time, I'm glad the negative drama has shifted its focus away from CJ. Fighting at a biker rally, may to some, seem like negative drama but I believe it will be a transitional moment for him. CJ is affectionately considered as the vulnerable son of a friend who must be watched over and protected. Standing up to this bully will prove to the group that he is now a man, an equal with the friends his father has chosen as family. Thank you for sharing your time and talents. AAA

I enjoyed book one. So, looking forward to book two. Your new character, Qaim, promises to lighten the mood to what has up to now been, a darker story. Qaim's innocence and wonder should brighten the spirits of this wandering band of warriors as they travel closer to a battle that even they seem have doubts of winning. I imagine, to everyone's surprise, the innocent, harmless appearing, Qaim will somehow play a pivotal roll in the upcoming battle. Love your work by the way. Thank you for sharing your time, effort and talents.

Who you gonna call? Ghostbusters!

Welcome to GA, I've read your stories on several other sites and enjoyed them very much. Are you planning to start this story from the beginning or continue on using this chapter as a starting point?