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  1. LitLover

    Chapter 2

    Damn, just when their lives are actually coming together and they are finding love and comfort, it turns out this could be the calm before a major storm. I can understand why Dave is worried, how can he not be? His whole life is that little farm, and Jae. At least Jim was able to give them some sort of warning. Maybe they can prepare and defend themselves? I wonder if Barry's son has been trying to (unsuccessfully) send Dave signals for a while, and Dave didn't realize? I like Barry and his family, so I hope nothing bad happens to these people
  2. LitLover

    Chapter 1

    I can't believe I missed you posting this story! I love the premise. It's something I could really see happening some day, especially with the superbugs out there. That alone gives this story a realistic vibe, So far I like what you've done with the two MC's. Dave seems very lonely, which is understandable in this new world. and Jae almost seems lost, or at loose ends. I think at the very least Jae and Dave can offer each other comfort. Great start, tim!
  3. LitLover

    Chapter 26

    I guess you'll have to read on to find out It's great to hear from you lakjehboh. I appreciate the review
  4. LitLover

    Chapter 26

    lol yeah it can be typical of head offices. They can sometimes forget/not care that their employees might have lives. I think it'd be kinda hard to miss how happy Jason is right now Thank you for your support and your review, B.
  5. LitLover

    Chapter 26

    Thanks, Dugh she might be a little overbearing and nosy but she does love her boys . Thank you for your review and your support
  6. LitLover

    Chapter 26

    Would I do that to you . Don't worry about Jason buying the cottage without consulting Corey. He won't do that. I actually took out that they did talk about it, but hadn't made a decision. As for the axe? Thank you for your review and your support, Tim
  7. I already loved Tobyn, but my respect for him shot up a few notches. I like the fact that he wants his and K's lovemaking, when it does happen, to be on their terms and because they want it, not because biology is forcing their hand. It must take a lot of willpower not to just give in, but he wants to do this right, and that is incredibly admirable. And it's not like they're being completely celibate while they wait I'm trying to figure out why their energy is higher than Denver and Elinor's. is it because K is already so strong and a healer? I have a funny feeling that strong energy and connection is going to come in handy when they're out in the wide world again. I wonder what brought Fendral back? Is he drawn to the new energy? Will it be strong enough to bring him back to humanity?
  8. LitLover

    Chapter 26

    From experience with larger companies, they don't often take their staff's personal lives, or conflicts into account when scheduling meetings and engagements. It is possible Jason could have gotten out of the meeting (or teleconferenced) if he had something urgent that conflicted, but a trip to visit friends wouldn't have earned him any sympathy. Thank you for your review and your support, Lisa
  9. LitLover

    Chapter 26

    After read your review I heard the ominous "bu bu buh!!" from old thriller movies. lol Who knows what will happen when they're separated. It'll be a new experience for both of them Thank you for your review and your support, tim
  10. LitLover

    Chapter 26

    Some people seem to have a knack for finding a silver lining... they're eternal optimists. Funny thing is, i don't think Corey was much of an optimist before Jason. Thank you for your review and your support, LadyDe
  11. Simply beautiful (happy tears)
  12. LitLover

    Chapter 26

    As I said in my response to Gary, I guess you'll have to tune in next week to see where this weekend goes, and what happens as a result. thank you for your review and your support, Lux
  13. LitLover

    Chapter 26

    The connection between these two men is fun to write, and it makes me happy that other people feel that connection between them, too. I guess we'll have to wait until Wednesday to see what I have planned for the weekend away Thank you for all of your support and another wonderful review, Gary
  14. LitLover

    Chapter 26

    Thank you Kitt. I'm happy I made you smile
  15. LitLover

    Chapter 25

    They did need to work through their regrets. Jason was absolutely right, they weren't ready for this relationship back then. They are now. I'm pleased you like the blend of playful and romantic. Thank you for your review and all of your support, Tim.
  16. LitLover

    Chapter 26

    Chapter 26 “You look happy. I guess things are going well with Corey?” Jason turned his head to look at his mother as they walked along the waterfront. Her arm was looped through his as they strolled behind Corey and Jason’s father, who were having an in-depth discussion about baseball injuries. “It’s going very well with Corey,” Jason acknowledged with a smile. “And when am I not happy?” “You weren’t yourself at Christmastime,” Ruth Sedor lowered her voice and slowed down slightly, f
  17. LitLover

    Love On Hold

  18. LitLover

    Chapter 25

    I think mom realizes that the boys will probably want their space... and maybe she wants her space too I'm happy you enjoyed the move. It was important for me to have them discuss some of their past and this was the perfect opportunity Thank you for your review and your support, Reader
  19. LitLover

    Chapter 24

    Thank you, Reader! I appreciate all of your support and your reviews
  20. LitLover

    Chapter 24

    Lunch picnics can be a lot of fun with just a little imagination Thank you for your review and your support, Def
  21. LitLover

    Chapter 24

    I agree that Alek and Liam are in for a rough ride. I have met men like Alek's dad and believe me, hearing that his son has gay or gay-friendly clients would do little to curb his bigotry. Some people refuse to change. Congratulations on the prolific reviewer status! I know how supportive you are of so many authors here. Thank you for your review and you support, Tim.
  22. Denver's story made me so sad. Not only did he have to mourn the loss of two children, but he had to mourn the loss of a wife he thought had killed herself in her grief. Knowing that she was murdered doesn't exactly make it better, but would make the loss more bearable, especially knowing her murder has been avenged by his new stepson. Finding his earth mate will also help him get past the loss and be happy again. Its satisfying to see how supportive Kellar and Tobyn are, and how in tune they are to each other's feelings and needs. One great example is the cabin. Tobyn realized there was something bothering K and wouldn't let him get away without talking. I love the idea of Kellar's cabin being a lover's getaway for these two, although I would be extremely cautious in that area if Reznick's nephew is still around. Having two sets of earth mates around seems to be doing wonders for the pack. Ms. Sybil almost seems like a new woman now that she has her "sight" back. For her it must have been like the rest of the pack losing their sense of smell. Now... on to Adelin and Warren! I want to see if that man is redeemable.
  23. Such a beautiful way to say goodbye. I can't really say much more, so I will leave you with a
  24. LitLover

    Chapter 25

    lol I have a scene in my head. I'll have to find a way to work that into a chapter soon Thank you for your review and your support, tim.
  25. LitLover

    Chapter 25

    Well they are human, so someone is bound to do something to mess up, even if it's forgetting to pick up their wet towel off of the bathroom floor Thank you for your review and your support, Lisa
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