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Thank you, Lux. I'm pleased you've enjoyed the story. It was a lot of fun to write.

Thank you, Def, for your kind words, and all of your support.

haha thank you, Drew! I'm thrilled you've enjoyed the story. It's very special to me.

Wow... I can't believe Jae would leave like that. Dave could have been dying and he just left? I know they argued, but how could he not wait until he was sure Dave was going to live. Feeling a little disillusioned where Jae's feelings are concerned right now

It is a fairytale for Warren. Not only is he gaining a home, a job, a great girl, and an extended family, but he has a brother. It sounds like he hasn't had anyone care about or have faith in him for a long time and now he has an entire pack. He must feel like it's a dream. It's a fairy tale for Kellar too. Not only does he have his mate, but he a pack, and has an actual caring brother. Both men have been alone in different ways for a long time. I can only hope that warren continues to live up to the trust being put in him. I have faith he will continue to be a good mate and brother, but there will be trials. Giving up drugs isn't easy, but at least he has people in his corner now. Another wonderful chapter, Gary . Now to see what elinor has to say

I truly enjoyed this story, Puppi! Even though you couldn't understand him, you could tell Perry was a sweetheart. There's just something endearing about a klutzy alien I know Reuben's feelings developed quickly, but I think what drew the reader to Perry, drew him in too. Add in an isolated and probably lonely life, Perry would have been a welcome breath of fresh air. Have you decided to continue the story? I would love a sequel to see where they can go from here. Maybe Reuben decided to visit him in the stars? But for now, they can talk.. hopefully those investigators don't find his gift.

Bahaha that was awesome! I do love a visit with Faris and James and the pups. I once had a dog that chewed through the drywall to get to a mouse so I laughed when I read about what Francis and Larry did Oh, and I'm sure that Faris' payback will be right up James' alley

Ah it's great to be back with the boys again I agree with Gary, the resistance Evan and Russ have put up with being sheltered by their mom again goes to show the amount of confidence they've gained. Their visit to the grandparents also shows the courage and determination they have developed. I think calling Evan passive aggressive (and one other reviewer has done) is bang on. It was a dare to say something to their faces... to their big, protective boyfriends' faces. It was well done I do hope Kristen won't be too upset with Tor, and am hoping him mentioning not wanting Jacob insulted will show her that this wasn't just about him trying to protect or coddle her. Finally... I still love Chris

Well I have to say the triad was unexpected. I think when Oliver finally wakes up he's going to be most upset that Adam, the one he loves so much he fought to live the life he wanted, loves another... has a connection with another. Of course he's also going to have a hard time adjusting to his new existence, but I think being able to help people will appeal to him after the shock wears off. Although menages are really not my cup of tea (if that is where this is going), I suspect Oliver will eventually accept Zaidu... especially if he doesn't want to lose Adam again.

I felt badly for Ryan in this story, but I also felt for Brady. I know Ryan felt as though he was being used, and he kind of was, but at the same time this whole thing had to be terrifying for Brady. It must be hard to come to grips with your sexuality at that age, especially when your desires go against what is considered the 'norm' for a high school football jock. So although I understand Ryan's anger and walking away, I think It took a lot of courage for Brady to go after Ryan the way he did.

This was a very gripping, if bleak look at a different earth. Something like this could easily happen for various reasons, and the idea holds some morbid fascination with readers, including myself. I was like Myles as a teenager. I could fish, and maybe hunt in a pinch, but overall living off the land would have been difficult. I could not imagine being a teenager in that world, wondering if I was the only one left alive. The fact that he found Ben, and there appear to be other teens out there makes me wonder what could have killed off everyone except for adolescents? I wonder what made Ben selectively mute? Has he always been that way? Will he ever speak to Myles? I would like to see more of their developing friendship. I'm with the others. I would love to see this story expanded. There are so many questions to be answered and I want to know what becomes of the boys

Epilogue 18 months later Corey Corey couldn’t believe his and Jason’s anniversary was coming up in two weeks. Only a few short years ago, he would’ve never believed he would be in a loving, committed relationship with the big-hearted blonde. Now, after getting over a few bumps in the road early in their relationship, he was happier than he’d ever been in his life. Bundling his coat tightly against the chill, he walked quickly to his favourite diner. As he passed the coffee shop next

Haha now I have an image of mini-Corey pounding on the door to his brain, trying to get its attention Jason does need to forgive himself. He made a terrible mistake, but he's changed for the better, and needs to let himself get past his past. Thank you for your review and your support, Tim

I agree with you, if there was a break between Jason and Corey, then Corey would have made no progress with his trust issues. Thank you for joining me on this ride, and thank you for your review Rnddmrunner.

This was a great story, Def! You should be proud! It was a lovely slow dance watching Brian and Nate become closer to one another, to the point their attraction could no longer be denied. I like Nate. He's tenacious, and wasn't going to compromise, which was exactly what was needed. Otherwise, I fear Brian would have dragged him into the closet beside him. I think I agree with Tim. I would have an easier time forgiving Carl for cheating on his wife (and I really hate cheats) than I would Harvey for the damage he did to his sons. The man is a hypocrite. He knew first hand how damaging it can be not to have the support of your family, and he turned around and did the same to his children. Hopefully, both Kurt and Brian can break the cycle of emotional abuse, although Kurt might have a tougher road, having to battle addiction without a supportive partner at his side.

I knew these two had something! I've missed these guys. I love reading about their missions, and it makes me want to hear more about some of the couples they've encountered. The viking, in particular, sounds like an interesting story to read some day. You could see the gradual progression these two have from enemies to co-workers, and then friends...and maybe more? I wonder... will they have a team assigned to them?? wouldn't that be interesting! An imp convincing Angie to take Imp to his bed, and an Angel trying to make Imp declare his affection? I smell another story!!

It can be so easy to let things slide when you're in a relationship... put off a conversation here, a date there.. and suddenly you've drifted apart and the chasm can seem insurmountable. Both of these men made mistakes that contributed to where they are in this story. Duncan shut down instead of confronting Leon about the appointment and his commitment to parenthood. Leon made the incredibly boneheaded decision to kiss someone to make Duncan jealous... so many mistakes... little ones that will slowly kill a relationship. I think these two owe their friends a great deal for not only recognizing they needed to talk and clear the air, but also having the courage to risk their friends' wrath to make that happen. I think Carl got off much to easy considering all of the heartache and pain he caused over the last few months, but both men, by not being open and talking to each other allowed the door for someone like Carl to walk in. I loved this story, Gary. I could so easily see this happening in real life, and makes me want to sit down and talk to my husband, just to make sure there is nothing we haven't talked about

It can be life altering to find out someone you put so much trust in isn't who you thought they were... whether it be a friend or a lover. Trust after betrayal can be difficult to recover. Your poem shows how difficult this can be.

Honestly, I think Luc saw Jason as a challenge. Having someone say 'no' is probably a little foreign to him. It's like a kid not wanting a toy unless someone else wants it. As for Corey running... sometimes people react without any thought, and Corey reacted by fleeing. The question is, when will he stop? Thank you for your review and your support, Tim

lol well the noise was pretty loud. The distraction came at the best time thank you for your review and your support, Tim.

Thank you, Kitt

lol thank you for forgiving the cliffies and thank you for your wonderful comments. Although Jason made the initial mistake, both men have had a lot of growing to do, and they have. Thank you for your review and your support, Spikey

Jason did deserve a chance to explain. Nothing made me happier than having Corey give him that chance. Thank you for your review and your support, Def.

Jason's would have been going through hell, wondering where Corey was, and if the man he loved was going to leave him. One thing no one has ever seemed to pick up on though was that, in my mind at least, Jason needs to forgive himself for what happened with Pierre. Thank you for your review and your support, B

Breakfast should be tasty Thank you for review and your support, dugh.