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  1. LitLover

    Chapter 21

    A clip around the ear might do him some good. lol The poor guy means well though. I think you're right... P has been around long enough that he knows what Corey has been through with his parents, so he would understand Corey's motivation to protect his mom. Thank you for your review and all of your support, B.
  2. LitLover

    Chapter 21

    Chapter 21 Corey leaned against his car outside Dr. Tremblay’s office and rubbed the heels of his hands over his face. Their latest session was a rough one. This had been his third meeting with the therapist, and they’d gone over a lot of painful ground. She’d given him plenty to think about until his next appointment in a couple of weeks. With a sigh he pushed away from the car and opened the door. He needed to shake this mood before he met up with Jason. Today was the day they were d
  3. It makes me sad to think someone could make you feel like you should hide your talent away. I'm pleased you're rethinking posting your poems again. I know people say you should just ignore the haters, but it isn't always that easy. Hateful words hurt. Just know that there are a lot of people who care about you.
  4. I'm late to the party, but congrats on the shout out Puppi! I really loved Thaw... what's not to like about a hot, blonde hockey player?
  5. LitLover

    Adieu

    I love to read what you write, and although I'm not a poetry expert I can see that what you write means a great deal to you and comes from sometimes painful places inside of you . Like others, I hope you change your mind and continue to grace us with your words, but ultimately, this has to be for you and no one else. Make the decision that is best for you.
  6. I am so happy that Tobyn finally explained his reaction to the news about K and T being mates. His explanation makes sense, given what we know about him. He had carefully laid plans and a belief system firmly entrenched. Finding out there are earth mates and HIS was a man, no matter how much he was attracted to that man, would crumble the reality he carefully crafted for himself. I hope this experiences teaches him to stop using running away as his go to response. k is a very understanding man, and if asked, he would give T space to process, as long as he knows the guy isn't going far and will be coming back later to talk. I also kind of get why he didn't realize they were mates.... There was some willful ignorance there. He knew he was attracted but refused to allow himself to exam why he was attracted so quickly and developed feelings so quickly. Again, I hope this experience teaches him to have more of an open mind. He's right though... they're young and he will probably do something bone-headed again The two young earth mates will be good for the pack. How old are they again? I guess right now they feel drawn to each other as best friends, and after their shift those feelings will develop into something more? Having k and t around as male mate role models will be great for them. another wonderful chapter, Gary. Make sure K has a paper bag handy for the hyperventilating Tobyn is sure to do when his mom announces a pregnancy
  7. LitLover

    Chapter 20

    What can I say? When these two decide to resolve issues, they go all out Corey did know he was wrong, but I don't think he ever thought Jason would know and he'd have time to ease his mom into this... Maybe he was delusional about that, but he thought he was doing what was best. When Jason found out, Corey did what he had to to fix it. I hope the therapist helps him too... there are a lot of issues to be discussed. Thank you for your review and your support, BuffyWillow
  8. LitLover

    Chapter 20

    They admitted they loved the each other to themselves, but not to each other. Jason was talking things slow, and was protecting himself too. Corey did hurt him over Christmas so he's naturally cautious. Corey would take things slow, not wanting Jason to think he's rushing. They can both be clods, but many are when protecting their hearts Thank you for your review and your support, B.
  9. LitLover

    Chapter 20

    Jason does learn some lessons well and he learned with Luc how important communication was. He didn't want to make a decision without giving Corey a chance to explain, but he was ready to walk away if he felt like he had to. Corey didn't keep them a secret to hurt Jason and realizing what he could lose made the decision easy for him. Thank you for your review and your support, Lux
  10. LitLover

    Chapter 20

    They are pretty good at making up aren't they? Sorry about the tormenting, but it did work out in the end. lol Thank you for your review and your support, Reader.
  11. LitLover

    Chapter 20

    We do do stupid things to protect people... sometimes hurting those we don't mean to in the process. and no, I don't think that movie is in the cards for them Thank you for your review and your support, Puppi.
  12. LitLover

    Chapter 20

    One of the things I've learned over the years in my marriage is that the other person can't read your thoughts, nor should they be expected to. Jason learned the hard way with Luc what happens if both partners don't communicate and aren't on the same page. He loves Corey, so he was willing to hear the man out. If Corey wasn't willing to be honest about them, then he would have had to decide if he could live with that, but at least he would know where he stood in the relationship. Thank you for another wonderful review and all of your support, my friend.
  13. LitLover

    Chapter 20

    Thank you, Parker Corey is determined not to screw this up, even if he has been stumbling lately. The therapy may help him to realize what he is responsible for and what he needs to let go, because he does take too much on himself. Thank you for your review and your support.
  14. LitLover

    Chapter 20

    haha why do I hear cheesy soap opera music when I read this review I hope that Corey's mom is accepting, although she may believe she has some advice for her son, given her past experience. thank you for your review and your support, tim.
  15. LitLover

    Chapter 20

    Chapter 20 Jason hurried outside, waving at his secretary as the door swung shut behind him. It’d been another busy day, but he didn’t have to disappoint Corey by cancelling again. He’d felt badly at how often he had to disrupt their plans over the last two weeks, but it couldn’t be helped. Luckily, his boyfriend was very understanding, and had even surprised him with some late night, naked fun last Friday. Now the new contract was signed, and the client was happy. There was still plent
  16. LitLover

    Brownie Points

    Hahaha I loved this! I remember leftover days... days when then entire family earned their brownie points from mom. This had me giggling. Thank you
  17. LitLover

    Chapter 19

    I like that both men were comfortable enough in the relationship that no one jumped to conclusions or made insecure assumptions. Corey seems to have finally realized that 20 year old Jason and this Jason are not the same guy, and I don't think that Jason has ever been the jealous type, and he already trusts Corey. I hope that Jason and Corey can be good role models, but you never know how people will react to fear, especially fear of losing their family. Thank you for your review and your support, Tim
  18. LitLover

    Chapter 18

    Some of my favourite scenes involve either Drew and Jason, or Drew and Corey. He's a fun character to write. I was happy they were loud and proud about their commitment too. Jason was too happy to keep this from his family Thank you for your review and your support, Tim
  19. Thank God Tobyn pulled his head out of his ass in time! I was worried he would start back-peddling again and try to distance himself from having a mate, but he really stepped up here. Not only did he bust a hump to get back to Kellar, he assured the man he was done running now and was going to stop denying their connection. Heck he didn't even take Kellar's "blood brother" easy out. I was proud of him in this chapter. I was imaging the scolding he received from the women of the pack. I think Keller may still going to have some moments of doubt... He was denied by his mate and hurt, but they are definitely on the right path now. I worry about them leaving "evidence" behind. I can't see that hunter going after Kellar without telling his nephew. He hasn't been alive and didn't make that many kills by being stupid cocky. Hopefully the added strength of having two mated pairs will give the pack enough strength in the inevitable fight. Wonderful, felling good about the future, chapter, Gary
  20. Sometimes what we mean to write isn't always what appears on the page. Although you might not always write about ''pretty" things, you put a lot of yourself on that page, and I, as a reader, appreciate that effort.
  21. LitLover

    Love Song

    I do adore your love poems to Mike. They always make me smile for the rest of the day.
  22. I really enjoyed all of the scenes you've described, but I think my favourite was Craig's confrontation with Carley. For so many years he'd allowed her to get her way and take the lead, and in that moment he not only stood up for himself, but for the man he loves as well... it also allowed him to take another step out of the grief that consumed him for so long. It showed amazing growth and strength in his character.
  23. LitLover

    Chapter 19

    lol so far in the closet he's in Narnia... I love that! haha I think the dinner invite might be good too, but who knows, some people cling to the closet with a death grip. The ending was fun to write, and even more fun for Jason Thank you for your review and your support, Lisa.
  24. LitLover

    Chapter 19

    With someone so deep in the closet there is bound to be drama, especially dating someone who is pretty open about being gay. I'll have to think about their story but I do have a lot of ideas. The cabin interests me too. I can picture some of the scenes and conversations already. Thank you for all of your support and your wonderful words, spikey
  25. LitLover

    Chapter 19

    lol maybe someone should tell him that being out of the closet means he might be able to expect a naked welcome home Thank you for your review and your support, tim.
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