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Sometimes the best gifts are the ones you didn't know you could hope for.
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I'm all out of likes (so early in the day!), but I wanted to say thank you to everyone for your kind birthday wishes. You guys really made my morning
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Happy Birthday!! I hope you have a wonderful day
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Happy Birthday! Have an awesome day
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Merry Christmas, Tim (and Michael too ) Christmas should be about being with those you love and counting the blessings that you have in your life. I think all of us probably get a little introspective while shoveling snow. lol
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Tanka- Another Victory
LitLover commented on Drew Espinosa's story chapter in Tanka- Another Victory
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I really love the email exchange between Nate and Josh. It was great that Josh apologized and Nate was able to let go of some of the hurt by being able to forgive Josh and realize that he is in a much better place right now. And the teasing in the kitchen close families love to do that to each other. M & K were so sweet all sleepy in bed together Their half asleep conversation made me smile
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Poor Noel! I am so happy he was able to protect himself finally though. I really hope that docs death is a painful one. I wonder about this Andra woman. She seems like she is trying to help Noel. Maybe she's one of the McGill's that is actually loyal to the King? Who is the man who grabbed Noel? I have my guesses, but I won't say anything here. And another cliffhanger to have me anxious for Monday (and I don't generally like Mondays)
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Poetry Prompt 5 – Rhymes and Couplets
LitLover commented on Mikiesboy's story chapter in Poetry Prompt 5 – Rhymes and Couplets
These are good (not that I'm a great judge of poetry lol). The line about the long underwear had me giggling -
This was great, Drew! Congrats on your first Tanka.
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Chapter 2 Honor Thy Father
LitLover commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 2 Honor Thy Father
I feel so much anger reading this... anger at the man who claimed to be your father, and anger at other men who I know do the same. You lived through hell, but you came out a better man on the other side. I've always said that your children were very luck to have you as a father, and I believe that even more after reading this. It could have been so easy to fall into the familiar... many do. You were and are a stronger man than that. -
lol, yeah I think it's a toss up right now who is more bothered by it, but having the half naked object of your desire sleeping only a few feet away will test his willpower lol. Thank you for the review and your support, B. I appreciate it
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It is still a possibility for any one of them to get hurt at this point. Sometimes the possibility of losing someone can give you clarity. Maybe that will be the case here? Thank you for your review and your support, Val. I appreciate it
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Thank you, Def They will have to do some digging to find out the answers of why, but they will try to get answers. Jenson will probably get a little more protective, but I think Merrick will as well. Thank you for your review and your support, Def. I appreciate it
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Thank you, Gary Jenson was loyal to Kel for decades, so getting past that was never going to be immediate. With his conversation with his sister I hoped that could show that he is getting there, but still feels a little lost. The threat of danger can either heighten surrounding drama or make it unimportant. I think with Jenson, it gives him more clarity on his feelings for Merrick. Thank you for another wonderful review and all of your support, Gary. You're still amazing
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Haha I saw your red shirt comment and immediately thought of Star Trek. It's never good to be a red shirted ensign. lol I have doubts that even if the Alectarans knew about the threat they would deny it. We will see Thank you for your review and your support. I appreciate it.
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Thank you, Dugh. I'm glad you are enjoying the story Hopefully, they will figure out how to deal with the threat before they lose anyone else. Thank you for your review and your support, Dugh. I appreciate it
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The danger of battle has historically seemed to be an aphrodisiac. We'll have to see if it works for these two Thank you for your review and your support, John
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I'm really happy the action in this scene worked for you The flauros are pretty intimidating (google flauros demon and you will see the inspiration for them. Thank you for your review and your support, Drew. I appreciate it
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It's true that diplomacy goes both ways. If you remember, that was one of their concerns about having Audra accompany them. She is the captain of the ship and would have to meet the Alectarans. To not do so would have also been considered rude by their society. They were also not going to lie and say that her second officer was the captain. I think Audra did her best, and tried to be cordial, but ultimately lost her temper. Thank you for your review and your support, tim I appreciate it.
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Chapter 15 “Shit,” Merrick swore out loud, leaning back in his chair. “Are you sure? I don’t think anyone has seen a flauros in the flesh for hundreds of years.” “I’m positive,” Jenson said, rubbing his temples. This mission had just become far more complicated than he’d ever anticipated. “What do you know about flauros?” he asked, leaning his forearms on the table in front of him. “I know they came from the planet Ecera, and were said to be highly intelligent creatures, but extremely
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Such a great story! It's not the big gestures that matter it's the little things... taking care of someone you love when they need you, taking what your partner needs into consideration. This story showed that. Bryce knows how lucky he is to have Kevin and Kevin shows his appreciation for Bryce being in his life by taking care of him when his migraines become too much too take.
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This was a wonderful story, Drew! I hope you think about a continuation. I'd like to believe that Adam's reaction was simply from shock and when he has time to think about everything he will realize what he could be giving up if he pushes Luke away. Luke was very brave to finally come out to his best friend, especially given how religious Adam's parents seem to be. He is a stubborn and determined young man. Regardless of whether or not Adam gets his act together or not, Luke will be just fine in the end... he is too strong not to be. Great job, nephew
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Adi, this was amazing, but so heartbreaking. My heart stopped with Julian's when he heard the news and it broke when Romeo didn't remember who he was. The fear of almost losing him the first time, the hope when he survived the first few days, then the devastation when their love was seemingly gone in the blink of any eye. Such a roller-coaster of emotions. Romeo remembering bits and pieces and his mind seeming to know Julian, without even realizing it, made me finally hope that they could find each other again. (Still pretty teary eyed though)
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Such a beautiful story of love overcoming insurmountable odds. He fought so hard to go back to his life and his love. If only everyone could experience that depth of love in their lives. You had me teary from the first paragraph.
