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Larry you sly 'dog' This was great, tim. Thank you! They are such a nice family... and now they have Francis too I love how teasing Faris and James are with one another. You can just feel the love between them. Poor James needs to stay out from under fences though (the neighbour is a jerk by the way. I don't care that he apologized.)

The first thing I thought when I read this was that I felt cold.. of course I had just come from outside and it was nippy. lol The next thing I felt was that the author was determined... determined to meet his goals and wouldn't let anything, including cold or time, stop him. Another well done poem, Gary

A cliffhanger, Adi? Seriously, great chapter... very hot It's wonderful that Diarmid and Noel are getting closer and embracing their connection. I am surprised that after all of Noel's reservations about going to his mass that Diarmid's security team didn't insist on not going... of course I'm sure Diarmid is stubborn. Now why did he bite him prematurely? Something must be affecting him?

Some people who lie to themselves and refuse to see their own faults or just don't care about anyone's feelings or needs but their own. You captured that well here. You are very good at wielding powerful words.

I remember the movie about that... 'The Ghost and the Darkness' I believe? That was a horrific time. The fact that these creatures are there at all is a concern, and so is the fact that the Alectarans are hiding something. Thank you for another great review, and your support. I appreciate it

I think you really 'get' Audra. She is fiercely independent and she is very proud of what she has accomplished in her life. If the doc wants to win her over he's going to have to keep that in mind (as well as the fact that should COULD take him down if she wanted to). Perhaps someone who knows her will give the poor man a clue? Her fault is that she is too sensitive about these issues because of the times she's has to defend herself against chauvinistic males. I'm working on the 'more' now. Thank you for your review and your support, Tim. I appreciate it

You wrote me a poem? Let's see if I can address what you wrote: Yes, love is on simmer, but Merrick gets why. It's too soon. Audra is blind to the redhead, but he does seem to approach her the wrong way. Maybe someone needs to talk to him too? The greet was formal and tense and something is waiting. You will find out what very soon. Thank you for the poem, B. I loved it!

There is despair and loneliness and even regret in your words, but there also seems to be a flicker of hope. Maybe the hope, if given some room to grow, will win out?

I'm pleased that the pace is working for you. I don't want to frustrate readers, but some things really can't rushed. Dr. Forbes, I think, is pretty misunderstood by Audra. I like him too. He is going to have his hands full trying to win over Audra. lol Than you, Gary. I really appreciate your support and, as always, I love your reviews.

Your 'No Comment' is duly noted Lit

I think everyone expected the greeting they received, even if they didn't like it. I know I was very vague about the flauros, but more details will be coming soon. Thank you for your review and your support, Val. I appreciate it

lol I admit, I didn't give a lot of detail about the flauros, but you'll find out more about them soon. The Alectarans are a male dominated society where females have no rights. It makes interacting with other societies very difficult for them. They may come to regret their attitudes... we'll just have to see where this leads. People are funny. They notice things about their friends and family, but often miss something so seemingly obvious in their own lives. Thank you for your review and your support, Def. I appreciate it.

Audra is very proud of her accomplishments and won't stand for anyone disrespecting her. Unfortunately, she's convinced herself that the doc doesn't respect her. Hopefully this month will give them a chance. J and Merrick do need to open up to each other more, especially the stubborn vampire. He's been so used to shouldering his problems alone that he needs some prodding to open up. Thank you for your review and your support, Drew. I love to read each one

I giggled when I thought of Mikey looking like Brad Majors Jay and Mikey are going to be in for an interesting evening, seeing RHPS for the first time. lol I'm pleased they're getting to work on the truck now. I think it will be great to have both dads involved. Mikey and his dad need something to bond over, and I think this could be it. Jay's reaction about Jerry is understandable, but Mikey is right. Jerry knew how much Jay looked up to him and would never want to influence him. Personally, I think that Jerry is probably bi... or even just curious. I guess we'll find out soon enough when he comes to visit.

No, you're right... this guilt he's carrying isn't for Kel's benefit. It's to punish himself for what happened. I hope he figures this out soon too. Thank you for your review and all of your support, tim. I appreciate it

Chapter 14 Merrick had been tossing and turning for quite a while before he finally gave up and threw the blanket off of his naked body. He couldn't keep his mind from returning to what happened in the exercise room...how Jenson's powerful frame had felt… his weight pressing him into the mat. He had been so turned on that he couldn’t decide between friction against the mat below him, or pressing back against the vampire’s hard cock. The shower had been an even bigger test of his willpowe

They are both pretty bad at relationship, aren't they? haha The difference with the two is that Audra has no interest in a relationship. She's enjoyed her life for years and doesn't see any reason to change. Jenson is anchored to the past and that has kept him from being free to love someone else. Hopefully this trip will get them both on the right track. Thank you for your support and this great review, B. I appreciate it

CoTT always puts me in a romantic frame of mind, and this chapter is no different. Michael and Kendall are beautiful together. They are big, strong men, but they aren't afraid to love each other with everything they have. Having Kendall make love to Michael in their first apartment was as loving and beautiful as it was hot. The apartment may have seen the start of their lives together, they and their family are growing, and so their home is growing with them to hold all of the new memories they are going to make. Agnes was great She did make a lot of sense, and although it is a lot of money, it is something Kendall's parents almost seem to NEED to do. Agnes wants to make a special place to spend time with her grandbaby and Carson wants to make amends... and this is a way for him to balance things out... in his own way. It was great to see Chet again and hear how happy he still is. Thank you for another wonderful chapter, Promising Author

Best News!!!!! Congratulations my friend! I'm very proud of you! :D

A very, very happy birthday to one of my best friends, my mentor, the best editor a gal could ask for and one of the very best men I know HAPPY BIRTHDAY, GARY!!!

Merrick is doing what he knows his friend needs right now. He knows Jenson needs time before he can move on. About Audra... I don't think she knows how to handle the feelings she has gets defensive. Hopefully her talk with her brother will help Thank you for reviewing and your support. I appreciate it

I'm a little late, but: HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!

Aww, such sweet and hot private time between Nelson and Eric. Even when they're making out fairly hot and heavy they are so considerate and sweet with each other. Thank you for my romance fix for the day

LOL Don't worry, I got the lecture on soap already. I don't think it was an actual option as much as a desperate idea. Merrick is showing a lot of restraint, but I think he is Jenson's friend first and realizes how hard this entire situation is for J. And yes, the walls are coming down, so that helps. Thank you for the review and for reading, Puppilull, I appreciate it

Yes, I think Merrick has served notice to Jenson. He will be patient, as long as there is a chance for them. We'll have to see what Jenson does with that information. Audra did need her own wake up call. I hope that what Jenson said to her wakes her up. Thank you again for working so quickly on this chapter for me, and all of your support... and of course, for another great review