I've missed your comments and how in depth you get into a story. It is very rewarding for me. Gran is a character who felt real the instant I envisioned her. She was my monster, my creature for the feature, but we needed to know why that was. Human monsters are most often made, but yeah, some seem to come out of the womb miserable. In my mind, children should always be protected and nurtured to be their best self, and it shouldn't matter to a good heart who they choose to 'lie' with.
Which came first? Was her husband destined to stray, or did he give up on marriage to this surly, hateful woman? Was gran once a sweet wife, twisted by indiscretion? We will never know, but I believe there is a good chance Moss's grandpa was driven away. And yes, I don't believe he died. I choose to believe he had a good life with a good man. That said, maybe he was an asshole.
Gran was weak. Even betrayed, if she was, I don't think it excuses cruelty. Even if her husband was heartless, there was no reason to push any sins onto the child. It was evil to have such hate for such a natural function as a boy's privates.
Bearpaw. Yeah, I knew your brain would try to work out some connection. And yeah, the town of Salvation was a ruse... the real salvation was the self- acceptance and love Moss... and Link... found on their journey. So.... there is a connection to Bearpaw, something fun for just the writer really. The last chapter of Bearpaw was called "Caught', and I thought it fitting (Moss was 'caught' out for peeking) and a little sneaky to use that title for this solo chapter.
As always, I thank you for always being in my corner where life and my writing are concerned. I consider you a dear friend, and wish you nothing but the best.