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skinnydragon

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  1. Thanks Def! Oh man, do you have our hero pegged. He IS coming to realization and it IS slowly, at his own pace, but it IS happening. Randy's great. Now come on, do you really think he's going to go all the way with Alex? Not if Randy can help prevent it ...hehe. Chuck and Curt. Could they stay out of Matty's club? I guess we'll have to wait for next weekend to see, when Chuck's back in town.
  2. Thanks Hunter! Maybe it's good Alex is pushing the sex so fast because you're right, David doesn't want sex with her. At least this will bring things to a head, if you'll pardon the expression. Maybe he'll start making more sense of those feelings you referred to. Erik as predator. Interesting point. Thanks for sharing!
  3. Thanks jess! David IS beginning to 'un'straighten and you're right, Randy is the perfect guy to help. Although there's one more character, who we'll soon see, who will also help. It's going to take something big to get David back in Dr. Keating's office. stay tuned. Chuck. What can I say? It must be those genes he shares with Danny.
  4. Thanks CG! Aw come on, Alex was only in two short paragraphs! You're right about Randy though. He's going to be very good in helping David. I think Chuck had been dreaming about Curt all week from the few minutes he saw him at breakfast last week. He sure has blossomed, and we can thank Matty for that. I don't think Matty wanted to screw Chuck or anybody, he's pretty happy to be a bottom.
  5. Thanks spikey! I think there was no time for the intense "talk" David wants -- plus, as is his custom, he probably wants to review these concerns before presenting them. Don't sell David short re: sex with Alex. And don't sell Alex short re: actual concern for David.
  6. Thanks oxala! Curt and Chuck play well with friends? We'll have to watch and wait. Well, the heavy crap is behind, so things can involve more fun now. Watching David work everything out will be interesting -- if we just didn't have that ominous deadline from Danny.
  7. Thanks Parker! What a great comparison to bring to our attention! Thanks so much for you analysis.
  8. Thanks Tim, I don't think Matty was too concerned about not poking Chuck. Matty is pretty much a bottom. It's probably why he 'recruited' Mark to do the job, as if Mark needed much recruiting.
  9. Thanks Carl, No matter what Randy's motives, I think he'll be good for David if for nothing else, David will actually be talking to him about his 'feelings.' Yes, once little shy Chuck got his engine started, he seems to be leading the race.
  10. skinnydragon

    First Kiss

    Well, if you want to write more chapters, go ahead. But to me, the story ending as it does, is perfect. We have all of Tyler's fretting and anguish leading to what he thought was going to be confirmation his friend could leave and forget him, but instead he found his love returned and with a pledge to come back for him. How much better could it possibly get? Very nice situation and resolution Emi!
  11. On Saturday, March 16, I decided to stay well clear of the apartment. Gary was in full preparation mode for my birthday, although I had no idea what was in store. Saturday is normally my drawing day, but I headed out earlier than usual. I had quite a list of potential sketches from Abigail and, I must admit, I was beginning to feel the demands of getting this portfolio in order. To save time, I took my car. I looked at the key ring and saw Merle’s Christmas present, the Chevy shield engraved wi
  12. skinnydragon

    Chapter 10

    Well, it wasn't neat and it wasn't surgical, but it seemed final. I'm glad you presented it from Alex's POV, since we already have a pretty good handle on Devin. Again, it could never really have worked. Thanks for this final glimpse from Alex.
  13. Yes, I agree with Val and will be looking for it myself. That guy is going to need a serious friend to help him. Well! I'm guessing at your story already, see how inviting it is!
  14. Very nice Carlos! The letter was epic for two reasons. First, it helped CJ sort things out, putting it all down for Owen to understand. So it not only showed him maturing with respect to these events which had been preying on him, but actually helped him do just that. Second, it was a great summary for we readers who have little memory lapses as we age and you only post every couple months or so. OK, the previous statement may not be completely true, as Comsie always says. But it was nice to make this little pause because CJ's life feels ready to shift into another gear. Thanks for sharing this chapter!
  15. What lies in our power to do, lies in our power not to do Aristotle *** No dream last night! Well, that is except for one I’m not too proud of. But at least it wasn’t about Burch or fishes! And I didn’t wake up tangled in my quilt and all sweaty. And I didn’t wake up yelling or screaming or anything. OK, I’ll admit, it was about Chuck. But that’s not a problem, cuz it was the same dream as last time. That is, the last time I had a dream about Chuck, with him naked and jerking off
  16. skinnydragon

    Chapter 11

    Wow -- poor guys They are both where they think they can't be, but for different reasons. But there they are!
  17. Thanks for the review oxala, and welcome back! David would welcome you back too except he's got this girl all over him and he's been a little distracted lately. I'm sorry the story has lost some of its lightness, but those were ugly times. Anyway, tomorrow morning's stream of consciousness from our clueless hero may give you a smile or two!
  18. Gary, I certainly hope you continue to verb and noun my garden. OMG, I didn't mean that to sound dirty!
  19. skinnydragon

    Chapter 14

    It seems as much as Colton was in fear of his father's 'discoveries' they might have just come across a powerful ally. It'll be interesting to see how the law decides what to do about the gang warfare in this little town. I have a feeling it's not going to be the way Bobby's 'father' would expect things to go, since he, ostensibly, has God on his side. It's Bobby's mother who is the strange one here. She can't possibly be dumb enough to be in league with they guy she's defending. When will she see the light, so to speak? Nice chapter Ron!
  20. skinnydragon

    Chapter 29

    Just a super story all the way through Ron! Every chapter was great. They all led inexorably to this fitting final act! Bravo!
  21. Thanks Milos! Yeah, there always seems to be just a little more going on than meets the eye.
  22. Thanks Def! Randy will offer some critical insight for David. I can't say any more now. Danny and Chuck bros, wow. That's something. Danny's warning is one David better pay attention to -- but we know how his mind wanders. The only hope for 'PPF and her' is to be hiding somewhere in the jungles of Brazil.
  23. Thanks jess! You know, you have asked all the right questions. I know they are because I can't answer them without giving stuff away. So keep reading (hehe), but most of the answers will be rolling around pretty fast, well as fast as things get in David's world.
  24. Thanks Carl! Joining Danny is, unfortunately, a distinct possibility if David doesn't start getting less clueless - fast! I think by the end of the chapter, clueless David finally put vixere all together. He won't be surprised if they end up dead.
  25. Thanks lux! Multiple victims, including Erik? An interesting proposition. You're right. I think out little pause for breath after his assault has now come to an end. Now where are those seat belts?
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