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One of my favorite bands and one of my favorite songs
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Gabriel Foster grabbed the pistol from Tom Pavone’s waist and unloaded it before he shoved it in his pants. Tom moaned and his eyes fluttered open. Gabriel allowed the man to sit up and then pushed him roughly against a car. Tom checked the back of his head tenderly and asked, “What the hell, Tommy?” “It’s Gabriel now,” Gabriel growled then added, “What the hell are you doing?” “Damn my head,” Tom said as discreetly checked for his weapon. When he couldn’t feel it, he look
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Everyone is calling for a rematch of Gabriel and Sean, but you all are beginning to know me that sex isn't a huge part of my storytelling. So that's probably not going to happen. Was Tom set up? I think @akascrubber brought up some good points. But things are starting to heat up and we only have twelve more chapters to go to find out. And it looks like I post on Thursdays, people see it on Fridays and read it on Saturdays. So technically I'm sticking to my original claim of posting on Saturdays.
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So I am in contact with a time traveler? That's so cool, do you know who won the big sports balls match?
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Things do start to be moving quicker now. We shall see what tomorrow brings. who knows my schedule. I posted on Thursday and you thinks it’s friday. I’m so confused.
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Oh, so Sean and Gabriel should flip flop? I like it.
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I think these are answers Gabriel is going to have to figure out. Luckily, it will be in the next chapter.
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I know, if an old friend could do that, who else? And if Tom is involved, that means the Senator and his entire itinerary could be compromised. Gabriel has a lot of catching up to do and not a lot of time left to stop this from happening.
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My first Star Trek reference, I'm pretty proud of myself.
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“We have a real situation here,” Scott Nevison informed Gabriel as he pulled the dark curtain open to see how big of an outage they were dealing with. The building down the block had power as well as the building on the other side. Gabriel could hear the tension in the man’s voice. He looked over at the blond woman standing next to him. He smiled pleasantly. “Can you give me a moment please? I have to take this.” Tiffany Barns smiled. “Of course.” Gabriel walked to the other si
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I only wish there was an emoji that accurately portrayed my thoughts and feelings. I'm sure there isn't one showing me bashing my own head in with a wrench, but just know, those are my emotions right now
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This is my least favorite time of year. We have the stupid basketball thingy that takes about nine months to finish and its the start of baseball where guys are overpaid to hit a little ball with a stick. Down with sports balls!
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Why does everyone ignore question two??? That has never worked, not once, and I use it all the time.
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The trick is to look suspicious. As well as having a metal plate in your shoulder that always sets off the scanner. They have to wand you then...
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That's why I don't like them. If they knew how Malik felt, hiding it from him was shady. Bad friends!
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I always did enjoy getting felt up in those TSA lines.
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So i really wanted to be the first one to comment. And when I read it this morning, I had to rush out for work. So though I'm mad at not being first, @chris191070 is amazing so I'll allow it! I already read the sneak a few weeks back so we didn't get too much in the way of new information. But the small pieces we got were impactful. Malik, right off the bat, we find out he's quite a good boxer. And we see a bit of the psychology that goes into boxing, it's not just throwing punches but a careful assessment at each stage of the fight, when to block, counter, and finish the fight. Malik doesn't have a good home life; his stepfather is a bit brutal, maybe that's the catalyst for joining the boxing team, self-preservation. We get a few quick moments when we see that Malik uses abandoned buildings to escape. In brief paragraphs, we see right away that his life isn't easy, and why he relies so heavily on his two friends. We see he has a bit of skills, lock picking, which is easier than most people think, and he enters a room. Here is the emotional punch: when Malik goes back to find his two friends and finds them making out. Since he has a thing for Sal, he runs back inside the room and gets sucked into somewhere else. I am hoping the two friends do not join him on this adventure, as I am not a fan of them. But we shall see what happens in the next chapter. Question One: Do you say where in the world this is happening? Question Two: Did you read the new policy on this site that forces all writers with a name beginning with the letter "C"? If not, I'll briefly outline it for you. You must send me all chapters of your story early so I can ensure they are "C" worthy for "GA". I'll await these new chapters, early, at your soonest. Looking forward to seeing where this will go.
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So I finally managed to upload a photo thanks to @Kileoli. It's of Sean and can be found under images.
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Weekly Wrap Up (Mar. 8 - Mar. 14)
Jason Rimbaud commented on wildone's blog entry in Gay Authors News
Isn't that just based on numerology and thirteen being unlucky? Many myths had the gathering of 13 humans as the reason for calamity. The last supper, some norse legend, and the templar thingy. But to prove your point, you'd have to account for all the other bad or unlucky things that happened not surrounding the number 13 or all the other days of the week/month/year. . -
Weekly Wrap Up (Mar. 8 - Mar. 14)
Jason Rimbaud commented on wildone's blog entry in Gay Authors News
I'm also past the age where I wear my favourite green undies and reveal them when someone asks where my green is . I can't with you right now. I'll never get too old to show anyone... As for the Irish thing, I don't understand it; it's stupid. Not the people, I'm sure they are fine. It's the parades, the drinking, the green beer; it's unnecessary. Did anything untoward happen to you or someone you know Do people still believe in that superstitious nonsense? That's like saying the month you are born can somehow affect your personality and make you incompatible with people born in different months. . -
I'm worried about Scott as well. Let's hope he survives.
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Let's hope they meet up again.
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So I give up, I've been trying to upload a photo and I can't figure out how to do it.
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And knowing the perv I am, there will be many more opportunities for them to engage in silliness
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I hope things keep getting interesting, lots more to come Silliness of course, it’s me.
