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The Amazing Kreskin, I am And yes, I did enjoy this very much. Jules Ross is a cool character.
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Just a quick aside before I get into the chapter. I googled a Suzuki Samurai and I think this vehicle fits my image - and yours I’m guessing - of what Detective Ross looks like and how he carries himself on the daily. Excellent choice, tim! 👍🏻👍🏻 This line says so much! You have a very clever way with words, tim. Bravo! PS: I could read more of this it’s so engaging. 👍🏻👍🏻
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Somehow, I missed this the first time around. My bad… I have say, I did enjoy Detective Ross’s character and his approach to everything he encountered. Now on to Part II.
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I’m so sorry, Wayne,
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Apple spice cake does sound yummy. You should add that to recipes when you have a moment. Just saying…
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This “someone”, I like!😊
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That’s the plan and I hope it’s the same for you and tim.
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Same for me Ugh, it’s the same for me, but I notice the temp is supposed to be above freezing for you and me for most of the rain, so maybe it won’t turn out as bad as the are predicting. Having said that, I’m glad I did my grocery shopping today. 🤞🏻🤞🏻 xoxo
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I saw snowflakes floating in the air earlier today, but that was it. I’m glad we both don’t habe any shovelling to do.
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The thoughts and feels were plentiful in this chapter leaving me sitting here just absorbing them all. Thank you, tim, for sharing such a wonderful story with the rest of us.
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Same, though I did at one point David had existed, but died young. What a tangled story this is.
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Sorry to hear that, I got virtually no snow. It only stayed a bit on the grass, and weirdly, on my three porch steps. The driveway, porch and other walkways completely clear. Mind you, it was a bit on the windy side.
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Damn, I heard that loud and perfectly clear.
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I hear you. I was looking at the snow coming down and hoping there won’t be enough to accumulate, so it will disappear (ie., no shovelling required) on its own.
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You feeling all right, tim? 🤔
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Why do I think this was “dear old dad’s “ intention all along? 😡 Jokes on him though, so now he gets to spin in his grave for all eternity. So, three cheers all around!
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Okay, I didn’t see that one coming. Nicely done, tim! Though, I do wonder how tnat fits in with his father’s attitude and the reference to the land.
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Carlos would have loved and appreciated this passage. On a gloomy day, thanks for making me 😊as well.
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Uh,oh, he’s getting attached, so we all know what tnat means… Amirite? ETA: Well, that didn’t take long. Wrong, I am. Oh wells, better “guess” next time.
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Gotta love those silver linings!
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It’s absolutely gorgeous, tim. You've got mad skills!
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Poor Lonnie. He's having a hard time finding his way. Just when he thinks he is going the right way, he realizes he' taken a wrong turn. Even though he backed out of the "date" with Keve, I think he will be brave enough to try again with Keve.
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I was giggling before Lonnie was, let me tell you. Loved that show! I could hear the helicopter blades starting up, but I’m glad they “powered down”, because I don’t think hovering parents are what Lonnie needs right now. Still, they seem to have their hearts in the right place. ETA: Gotta say, tim, your story has a nice easy flow to it, which is making it a pleasure to read. The serious bits and the lighthearted bits gel really nicely as well.
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Can’t argue with you there. 👍🏻👍🏻
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Can I quote you on that?
