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Hi Everyone! Play on while I get some sleep! Tell Drew to keep the noise down and wait to set of the bombs until morning. I request a wake up call at 7 AM to make my appt with the eye doctor tomorrow. OK?
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Chapter 35 - Chance Encounters II
raven1 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 35 - Chance Encounters II
I can see there is a lot of empathy for the four boys. In my own mind, the natural pairings are Tristan and Jesse, then Artie and Scottie. Artie is to Scotty as Tristan is to Jesse. Artie's reaction is so much like Tristan it would make sense to have a Lori and Michelle intervention to help Artie confront his own fears and lack of confidence. Jesse is much like Scotty and could advise him how to win Artie much like Jesse has won Tristan. The truth will come out eventually, so there will be teen angst no matter if it is today to next month. Loved the chapter. Fortunately for Scotty and Artie, I am well out of hearing range, so they couldn't hear me laughing at their awkward attractions and hidden things. -
Chapter 34 - The Level Of Wow
raven1 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 34 - The Level Of Wow
Artie and Scotty together are so cute and amazing. They have a natural chemistry, kind of like Tristan and Jessie. They also have a lot in common. I hope Scotty realizes that Artie is his man and decides to claim him. It is cute that Tristan is developing an affection for Scotty as a little best friend brother. -
Chapter 33 - Boy Meets Boy Meets Boy
raven1 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 33 - Boy Meets Boy Meets Boy
Star struck, then jealous Scotty was so adorable. When he met Artie and stuck his foot in his mouth was so comical. Looking forward to how Scotty and Artie deal with each other. I love both of the characters and hope they find happiness together. -
Chapter 32 - The Wheels On The Bus
raven1 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 32 - The Wheels On The Bus
What a delightfully fun chapter! I suspected Scottie was a fan of Jesse and Artie. His expression at the door is probably that of a star struck fan. I am sure he will be quiet for a while until Artie gets there. Hope Artie gets there soon. 😛 -
Chapter 31 - Giggles And Candy
raven1 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 31 - Giggles And Candy
I can wait for Scottie to meet Artie. Tristan has certainly warmed up to Scottie. However, I think that Tristan will be a little upset, briefly, when Scottie turns immediately into an Artie fan and ignores Tristan. -
Hi Albert!
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I hope this week goes better for you.
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Tristan has a way to give Jesse something even greater that JJ has given him. Tristan needs to show his support by appearing in the video celebration. No Brainer! It is funny that Tristan now uses the funny teen logic on his hormonal self to justify his jealousy of JJ. Great chapter. These kids are so true to the hormonal teen mindset and behaviors. Half the time I am laughing about my self as a hormonal teen sooo many years back.
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Chapter 29 - Pray For Sunshine
raven1 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 29 - Pray For Sunshine
Evil authors do as they will, but I am still hoping the vid clip Scottie sent to Tristan showing Justin Bieber getting punched in the eye was foreshadowing. Lori said just the right things to get Tristan to seriously consider the video. I hope he can make up his mind and tell Jessie Yes! -
Hey Drewboy! Good morning.
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Watch out Clo! Drew is hinting at Imperial rustling of your herd!
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Chapter 28 - In A Perfect World
raven1 commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 28 - In A Perfect World
Yes the date was excellent. It definitely left Tristan in La La Land with a diamond drill. Tristan does need to get over himself and just talk to mom! She is sending all the signals, but Tristan is acting like child. Kid's can't talk to adults about adult feelings and sex? Not as long and they are kids wanting to stay children and not be treated as adults. Scottie will make the same kind of awesome friend for Tristan as Artie is for Jessie. They will make a cute couple of couples! Can't wait for that to happen. -
Hey Page, I hope your have a great week ahead. PS I left you some advice at Jessie 101 I also caught your twins comment, but kept my mouth shut on that one. 😉
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Hi Clo! Hope your week is off to a good start also!
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Tristan is getting more confident as he spends time with Jessie. I like the fact that the PDA hardly bothers him now. I had to laugh at him, when he realized that mom wants him to be happy with a boyfriend. Tristan has all the piece in order to appear in the video if he just tells his mom first. Or, he could used the video to show his mom then talk about it after.😉
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Hi @Page Scrawler Remember you said that in a few years time.!
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Jessie's idea for a celebration is great. Tristan knows he wants to do the video, but realizes he also needs to come out to his mom if he does the video. He is slowly warming to the idea. It helps that Tristan's mom would probably be delighted if he shared his secret with her. I think that Scottie would also be pleased. I think that Lori should know so she can help support Tristan during the whole time. Then all Tristan and Jessie have to do is get Artie to meet Scottie. I agree with @Page Scrawler. The meeting will sound like screaming fireworks.
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Getting sleep patterns reset is not easy. I wish you well!
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I hope you guys go out to celebrate. After all, it is a family reunion. 😁
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So now you have written your own dictionary? I should have known! I bet a new Drew Encyclopedia will be published soon. 😛
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On luxury imports like high end appliances, cars, electronics, alcohol and some foods. Anything that might cut into sales of Thai business. 😠
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Chapter 21: Conspiring Chairman
raven1 commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 21: Conspiring Chairman
Cyrus and Kaplan's moving day actually went very well. Kaplan reliving sad memories as he unpacked was quickly dealt with by Cyrus. That Cyrus ask for the chance to assist Kaplan in bringing closure with his parents is so respectful and loving. Dave and Stacy having a long weekend vacation is special. I though Dave would wait for the right moment to propose to her, but he didn't have the patience. Happily Stacy agreed to be turned. Dave mentioning Team Edward was funny, and natural to give her something familiar and non-threatening to ease her into the idea he was a wolf shifter. I do disagree with @centexhairysub about Edward. Trust me I was not distracted by the script or his acting, and was total focused on the man and his wolf. Wagner has an interesting meeting with Tillman and has tentatively agreed to pull out of the investigation, but explain to Cyrus the situation. It is Cyrus who must make that decision, but it seems like Wagner is in so deep already that pulling out will be very difficult. Cyrus may count by offering to work with Bryce on the case. Great chapter!- 27 comments
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Wow! It is spectacular. I love orchids. I raised some in the US and again here in Thailand. I had some success, Like pets that need attention 24/7 I just couldn't leave home for a week or two, so I gave them up.
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I know you are probably very excited to have Max home. I hope you and Morgan made the most of the private time you have had. Now back to normal house with a lively boy to raise.
