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  1. Hi Drew! Hope you had a fun day playing.
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    Chapter 96

    Like others have commented, I also believe that there will be a second attempt. Garjah is very aware of this and has put Essell and Asas in what Garjah knows to be the safest room to protect them. The fact he also placed Bouncer and the mech with them was just for added protection. Now he needs to waste no time getting the investigation going in order to eliminate the danger. The Kardoval as a group or some individuals may have instigated the attack at worst, but know they are under suspicion. That seems a possible reason for their silence. At least they are leaving Garjah alone to do his job. Although there has been no direct conversation about Bouncer's intelligence, I also suspect that Garjah is well aware of it. I hope Garjah will succeed in finding out who is responsible quickly.
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    Chapter 2

    We all know how very good you are at Hide and Seek!
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    Chapter 2

    Thank you for the cover pictures. They both fit Elijah, the boy next door, and Kage, the international spy and assassin. They are both Hot! That would explain the quick sexual attraction of the two, however, the way you wrote about that attraction made it seem to be likely more. I suspect that we may find out later that they are true, destined mates. They are related to animal shifter who have this kind of bond. The fact Kage's Fae boss referred to Elijah as Kage's toy would indicate he senses at least the attraction between the two. Kage's surveillance of Elijah at work and tracking him is also interesting. He needs to find out more, and is also staying very close to Elijah to find out more information. Is this only to do his job, or a way of getting closer to Elijah? You have written a very intriguing chapter, and no cliffhanger. Anyone for a game of cat and mouse? It seems the story might have several players in the game. Guess which parts Kage and Elijah will play!
  5. Hi Bucket! Did you have a good day today? I hope it gets warmer for you soon.
  6. Quokas are so adorable with their built in smile.
  7. Good Morning Albert!
  8. Grumpy is doing a great job of teaching Vincent how to be an investigator. He uses positive affirmations when Vince has a good idea, observation or insightful comment. Grumpy also does not immediately tell Vincent what he should or should not do about his profile. Instead, he told Vincent what he, Grumpy does, the gives a counter example of Cyrus and tells Vincent it is up to Vincent what he chooses to do. The meeting with Reardon and his beta was interesting, and I hope that Reardon will become a friend and ally. Wagner continues to get in the middle of the whole mess in New York. That is leading to more information and leads, but does slow the process of justice. In the long run it will hopefully make the solution more effective and comprehensive by catch all the major players and not just Harold. Great chapter!
  9. Such a dramatic entrance! Definitely fit for a queen.
  10. A very nice walk down memory lane. I would have liked a friend like Lori and her sister when I was at that age. This was a very fun chapter to read.
  11. Scottie sent a YouTube video of Artie's heartthrob getting punched? Maybe Tristan should send one back of Logan Lerman getting punched in the face. 😂 I think @Wattelec's idea of the 'unknown' being Scottie may be spot on. I am sure that Artie recognized Tristan on the elevator. Jesse seemed to be very interested in Tristan. I wonder if Jesse takes the down elevator as Tristan takes the up elevator. A very fun chapter!
  12. Tristan has scored big points with the question he asked Jesse! Jesse even requested that Tristan write to him. Lori's idea is good and I'm glad Tristan wants to go to the mall again. ❤️
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    Our Destined Life

    We'll go pick on @kbois for a while so you can bask in your well deserved praise.
  14. Word nerd first. Sclaff is Scottish for a slap, and is probably an onomatopoeia. Since Scottish golfers thought the sound of a club scraping the ground sounded similar, they used the word for that kind of shot. First known use of the word as a golf term was in 1893. I think it would be interesting to use in literature also. Example: His biting words and rude gestures were sclaffing a hole big enough to bury my love for him. (Or maybe a word to describe the sound of Arnold Horshack's laugh on "Welcome Back, Kotter.")
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    Justice

    I hadn't thought of Anna, but you are so right! I love Armistead Maupin's books. Have you read Baby Cakes? I hope you start writing soon. You have got me very excited.
  16. Hi Page! How's day 11 of missing Max? Four more days to go. Will you and Morgan survive? Hope the weather is good there.
  17. Where can I buy it for my phone?
  18. Drew probably thinks you are referring to him as the lone star. 😂
  19. You bad! Best one yet!
  20. Either my skills of prediction are fading, or Drew's ability to aim has greatly diminished. I'll go with the later. 😈
  21. Wow! You do think BIG! That spiky top looks like it would hurt however. Do hope you have a medic on call.
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