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Chapter 23 Horse of a Different Color
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 23 Horse of a Different Color
This was another one to add to the "Greatest Western Hits"❣️💯 I think we should start calling your western lit..."Besterns"...yeah that works for me🐎 Sir Gary ...Augie may have roped the moon...but you're still roping your fans, and we love itBy the way, I did notice with a huge smile, the chapter title...kudos and love, my friend! -
Chapter 22 Kings and Pretenders
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 22 Kings and Pretenders
Delightfully unexpected, but sitting here clapping in glee, like I just won the lotto💸 Couldn't happen to a more deserving entity..."Here sits Albert Cooley, May he RIP (Rest In Prison)" -
Chapter 21 A Carving and a Contraption
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 21 A Carving and a Contraption
Grandpa's uniquely colored horse 🐎 ('horse of a different color'): A distinct WELCOME to his uniquely different, awesome grandson, he never got to meet...finally you and yours are HOME🌚 💞- 36 comments
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Chapter 20 Honey and God's Glory
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 20 Honey and God's Glory
You are such a treasure, my friend!!! Laughing and smiling and thinking about the 'old' horses and the revamped wagon leaving Enniskillen and rolling smack dab over Albert (Evilene) on the way down the 'clay brick road'...UNSTOPABLE loveHmmm, Brewster's wizard is a winner😜 -
Chapter 20 Honey and God's Glory
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 20 Honey and God's Glory
...and the hits keep rolling in, each chapter solidifying this brotherhood, this newborn family, identifying each's strength and character💯 I can honestly say that our guys have landed in OZ, with Glenda the Good Witch (Grandma Harriet) guiding and providing...Augie (Dorothy) leading the way and kicking off the no longer needed glass slippers at the gates of Barnswallow, no one desires 'returning' to that town (Kansas) of despair...Fletch (The Tinman) having found the heart that had been in front of him for years, now safely captured in his chest, protected and loved...Willy ( The Scarecrow) whom everyone assumed brainless and witless, being smart and cunning enough to arrive safely by himself, ahead of schedule, the brain retrieved and working superbly...Runyon (The Lion) no longer needing to cower and feel inferior around his brothers and new Grams, being a LION and standing tall‼️So, Sir Gary, your munchkins (loyal readers) are more than ready to "Ease on up the Rope to the Moon", you've provided -
I've enjoyed every line you've written and am sad that those that want more for free, of something that is quality and satisfying as what they would've pay for, would have the audacity to whine, _itch, or moan about any of the quality writers on this site‼️I wish you the best, your mind is imaginative...and quite brilliant
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Chapter 19 Grouse, Chickens, and a Pry Bar
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 19 Grouse, Chickens, and a Pry Bar
🤗 We'll call this chapter "POSSIBILITIES"...everywhere you turn‼️The caring and sharing is growing every minute...the brotherhood and love, by the second Chef's kiss for this one, Sir💯 Glad you're feeling a bit better and hope you continue on the recovery...nothing but love from all of us- 40 comments
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Chapter 18 It Sounds a Good One
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 18 It Sounds a Good One
I must agree with everyone else, the storytelling...as usual is superb💯, the descriptions of the land, the rivers, the house, the barn...all came alive‼️ The emotions expressed, secrets acknowledged and exposed (to everyone's delight) is like a journey to peace, not without a few hiccups of course🤷🏽♀️ In any case, I'd say Roping The Moon is showing us 'love ascending...hate descending' in real time, chapter by chapter💗 Thanks again, Sir Gary 🤗 -
Chapter 17 Ain't No Place Like Home
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 17 Ain't No Place Like Home
Geeeeezzz. it's like our guys have been gifted a virtual "Working Heaven‼️And I'm thinking that Augie might have roped the Moon and a few Stars also, with that magic rope of his💯 This couldn't have been described any better, for sure, Gary❣️ Although, I'm a bit suspicious about some of the items being so well kept (the harnesses?), who's been around⁉️🤔- 46 comments
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Chapter 16 Dark Thoughts and Dark Clouds
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 16 Dark Thoughts and Dark Clouds
OMG👏🏽 So happy with this awesome chapter, Sir Gary🥰 Runyan was almost a runaway 😅 This is soo what I hoped for and they can now have both houses to inhabit, after repairing the burned one for Willl and Run 🤗 This was great, thanks for the Early Bird, and I sure hope you're feeling better and taking care of yourself, Gar...🙏🏽 -
Chapter 15 Trousers and Cigars
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 15 Trousers and Cigars
The Tale of Two Grannies She became my "sheroine" when she corrected him about the 'what we are'...Nooooooooooo...it's WHO you are‼️Letting them know right away that they are not things or inanimate objects but human beings choosing to love who they love...can we please clone these two lovable ladies💯 Beautiful chapter...though not for Runyan🥹...yet⁉️- 43 comments
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Chapter 14 The Eyes Have It
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 14 The Eyes Have It
It appears Gran is quite a bit more well-off than Augie assumed, and certainly more attuned to who her wonderful grandson is than he thinks (like people share like minds, maybe)🤗 I'm getting a little concerned about Willy, hoping he's hiding out waiting on everyone at the farm🤞🏽This was a very nice meet and greet for Gran and the fellas, and I think she's about to make Augie and Fletch very wealthy young lads💸💯 So very happy to see an early chapter, but hoping you'll feel better soon, Gary🙏🏽- 57 comments
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Chapter 13 Fox and Other Tales
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 13 Fox and Other Tales
Oh geeezzzz, I hope Willy is safe and sound and living it up waiting with Gran🤞🏽 We'd all be quite devastated (more like murderous}, if Willy didn't get his chance to smile❣️Another excellent chapter, Sir💯 -
Fabulous introduction to two new characters of 'love on the run 💯🔥
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What a beautiful and sensuous wagon full of memories these two are sharing...in the open, in the rain, under a canvas and a full moon🔥 Just love and laughter, with a bit of problem solving, TOGETHER💯 Thank you, Sir Gary, this deserves a gyrating moment in the end zone...TOUCHDOWN❣️❣️
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Wow...another greatest hit chapter I was especially elated to see August surrounded by so much love and understanding, from his new and true family members, the word "son" has a whole new meaning for him...thank goodness❣️ Can't wait to see how Willy outsmarts Daddy Demon, to make his exit. Hoping Runyon takes flight immediately after speaking with Willy, rather than sticking around for the "picnic" being planned for him🤞🏽 Encore applause chapter, for sure👏🏽💯
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Love it🥰 I knew good people would not leave Willy and Run in a life or death situation without trying to help! Fletch and Augie should advise them to leave in the dead of night, with Run leaving immediately!!😬Taking separate routes is so smart, wish everyone had a dad like Fletcher's💯 Job well done, Sir Gary
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Ok...this chapter is the cliffhanger extraordinaire...and it's only Monday😭 Can NOT wait to see how this plays out, because more help with the farm is sorely needed, and who better than our wonderful new best friends, Willy and Runyun⁉️ I must say, Runyun's dad gets the DAF award for the decade...is he by chance a runaway from D.C.??? Fabulous chapter, thank you, Sir Gary💯🔥
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Sexy, sensitive, sensual and quite scintillating💯🔥
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Not trying to break anybody's rules, just stating an opinion to an opinion that was made...if that's a rule break, then by all means, let's examine the rules and the comment without animosity...and about the " itching" part...matter of opinion and judgement, dressed a bit crudely...but, just "calling you out"..😇
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Hmmm, not really, just an observable fact...no "fake news" here...🫡
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Chapter 6 Like a Thrown Lariat Over Horns
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 6 Like a Thrown Lariat Over Horns
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Great chapter, thank you, sir! And if i must say, 'peace' is in the eye of the beholder...so should judgemental comments trying to restrict others thoughts🤔...ANYWHOooo, your stories are enlightening, enjoyable, and thoroughly entertaining...as always!! Again thank you for Granger(always a teach able read) and the ever loving antics of dear ole Will
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Chapter 5 A Day of All Days
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 5 A Day of All Days
Well, let me be the ultimate romantic here and express my deep appreciation for the "diabetic" sweetness of the chapter 💯 Of course I loved the master class manipulation Augie performed on that huge ego of 'DAF Daddy'...loved it Now to watch this new woman come in and wreck the entire Cooley 'ego'system! Should be quite interesting, but hopefully Augie won't have to be a part of that meet and greet...take all you asked for and Fletcher and 'step away' from the coming Cooley chaos🔥 Wonderful chapter designed to show us another aspect of Augie's intellect...off the cuff brilliance❣️ -
Loved the connection, the confusion, the confessions...and the Kiss....very well done, 3-pointer at the buzzer, for sure❣️
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