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Wow...another greatest hit chapter I was especially elated to see August surrounded by so much love and understanding, from his new and true family members, the word "son" has a whole new meaning for him...thank goodness❣️ Can't wait to see how Willy outsmarts Daddy Demon, to make his exit. Hoping Runyon takes flight immediately after speaking with Willy, rather than sticking around for the "picnic" being planned for him🤞🏽 Encore applause chapter, for sure👏🏽💯
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Love it🥰 I knew good people would not leave Willy and Run in a life or death situation without trying to help! Fletch and Augie should advise them to leave in the dead of night, with Run leaving immediately!!😬Taking separate routes is so smart, wish everyone had a dad like Fletcher's💯 Job well done, Sir Gary
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Ok...this chapter is the cliffhanger extraordinaire...and it's only Monday😭 Can NOT wait to see how this plays out, because more help with the farm is sorely needed, and who better than our wonderful new best friends, Willy and Runyun⁉️ I must say, Runyun's dad gets the DAF award for the decade...is he by chance a runaway from D.C.??? Fabulous chapter, thank you, Sir Gary💯🔥
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Sexy, sensitive, sensual and quite scintillating💯🔥
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Not trying to break anybody's rules, just stating an opinion to an opinion that was made...if that's a rule break, then by all means, let's examine the rules and the comment without animosity...and about the " itching" part...matter of opinion and judgement, dressed a bit crudely...but, just "calling you out"..😇
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Hmmm, not really, just an observable fact...no "fake news" here...🫡
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Chapter 6 Like a Thrown Lariat Over Horns
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 6 Like a Thrown Lariat Over Horns
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Great chapter, thank you, sir! And if i must say, 'peace' is in the eye of the beholder...so should judgemental comments trying to restrict others thoughts🤔...ANYWHOooo, your stories are enlightening, enjoyable, and thoroughly entertaining...as always!! Again thank you for Granger(always a teach able read) and the ever loving antics of dear ole Will
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Chapter 5 A Day of All Days
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 5 A Day of All Days
Well, let me be the ultimate romantic here and express my deep appreciation for the "diabetic" sweetness of the chapter 💯 Of course I loved the master class manipulation Augie performed on that huge ego of 'DAF Daddy'...loved it Now to watch this new woman come in and wreck the entire Cooley 'ego'system! Should be quite interesting, but hopefully Augie won't have to be a part of that meet and greet...take all you asked for and Fletcher and 'step away' from the coming Cooley chaos🔥 Wonderful chapter designed to show us another aspect of Augie's intellect...off the cuff brilliance❣️ -
Loved the connection, the confusion, the confessions...and the Kiss....very well done, 3-pointer at the buzzer, for sure❣️
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Chapter 3 Grasshopper on a Fishhook
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 3 Grasshopper on a Fishhook
LOL..I stand corrected, my friend 🫠...we'll go with the Conniving Cooties, in lieu of disparaging the Crawley's good name❣️😘 And as for this journey, suffice it to say, probably the only journey I'd be adverse to joining you on is one going to 1600 PA. Ave...just picky about the disease now running rampant in that area..."delusional lying" appears to be quite contagious 🤗 -
Chapter 3 Grasshopper on a Fishhook
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 3 Grasshopper on a Fishhook
I feel like this chapter is a prelude to the showdown...because with Albert and Rob...it's about to get quite ugly😬 They will not let their unacknowledged work horse go gently off into the sunset! I'm just afraid of what they may do to 'persuade' him to stay, ie...hurt his beloved horse or worst, lock him up 😔Very nicely done ... now let's snatch Fletch up and ease on down the road away from the Creepy Crawlers...oops I meant Crawleys😜 -
Another great hit…for sure💯 You’re right about the wealthy and arrogant usually not getting their “just rewards”, just look around us nowadays…but I digress, let me add my ‘prayerful’ wishes to looking forward to the horrific demise of these two demonic species…Albert and Rob😇 Although, I think leaving those two to run that farm would be just as catastrophic for them and probably more fun to watch the collapse 🫶🏽 Just saying…🤭 This chapter..🌟
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OMG🤫 The 'drought is finally over!!!! Gar is back and with the Western love we've been a missing so muchThank you, thank you for this, in these awful days...Gary to our rescue. The Augie and Fletch Saga begins...once we knock off that dad, of course🤗 WB, Gar...glad you're well and up to entertaining again...we truly did miss you❣️
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Headstall is undoubtably the "Western Master", but all of his tales are 5-Star, Homerun, Slam Dunk, Golden Buzzer hits!! "Journey To Salvation" is a beautifully done journey to love and understanding!!
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OMG!! You never, ever disappoint us We must have all channeled our thoughts and wishes to you for an uplift with love, in these hateful, chaotic times...and you came through for us like a champ, with this beautiful little Bear Paw shorty❣️Thank you, from the heart...all of ours Hope all is well with you and you're healthy and safe...much love from the friends from afar...ALWAYS💖
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Excellent, let's give John the chance to finally do better, especially with his children, like we gave his father-in-law! By now, I think he needs to recalibrate his life, look the mirror straight on, stop looking for exit signs, or sneaking around to be you!!
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Thank you for both this heart-wrenching and heart-warming story❣️ You've made many of us more aware of the dangers that our kids face in such an intentionally cruel world we live in...we've experienced the anger, all the rage , the flood of tears, unbelievable evil in some humans, and you've shown us what love, kindness, integrity and nurturing hugs can accomplish I look forward to updates on the wonderful characters introduced to us, and the fate of the evil and corrupt as well 🙏 This was an amazingly well written, well constructed story, wish that we all possessed this kind of talent💖
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Chapter 2: Trouble in Gael and Carlos' perfect lives
Onim commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Trouble in Gael and Carlos' perfect lives
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This was was indeed a journey worth traveling, thank you so much for allowing us to meet and fall in love with your characters and to hate with all within us, your villains❣️ The writing...plots, character development, romance, pain, tears...just amazing💖
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Chapter 30: A love that heals. A journey complete
Onim commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 30: A love that heals. A journey complete
Thank you for this one...the characters, the plot twists and turns, the evil villains, the exciting trials in the woods, the fires, and bombs, the interweaving of lives and families, the tragedies...all leading to an impressive ending of love reigning supreme over evil -
Absolutely stunning chapter, now to find Dexter and make sure they have adjoining electric chairs!!! This was such a suspenseful chapter and very well written❣️ So, please have a fitting end for good ole Dex the Pest, he'll try and scheme and murder his way out of all of this, of course😬Moving right along, Jeff and Eric could be cuteness personified...yeah?😍
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Phenomenal chapter❣️ The foundation is going to be a thing of beauty...can't wait to see Roger blissfully raising all of his sons
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So done with “The Weakest Link” (Jeremy) and his evil clan, let Dexter have that perpetual little boy! I just feel sorry for the kids that will have to grow up in that toxic environment, for they’ll surely turn out just like their dim witted, spoiled entitled dad‼️Carter if you can, take your dad, your Aunt and Eric, and escape the Jeremy insanity🙏🏽😢
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Your writing is amazing, to bring forth a flood of tears and murderous rage at the same time💔 I'm sitting here feeling as if I'm at that scene with one thought...MURDER them all...but not before torturing them verrrrrry slowly!! Get those innocents as far away from that scene as possible and let the torture begin. Give the good ole boy militiaman a medal 🙏 Great chapter, as they all have been...
