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Happy Hour is Always Popular
Onim commented on garfwiz's story chapter in Happy Hour is Always Popular
It just keeps getting curiouser and curiouser...and Better and Better!! I keep thinking Tala is going to have to unleash the "Kracken" on a couple of greedy lil thieves sooner than later... Very nicely done, can't wait for the next chapter! -
Such a beautiful story for such tragic circumstances and events! So in tune with today’s corrupt, lawless, soulless “money talks…” society. True As It Can Be is just that…true as it can be!! Thank you for this 5 star sort masterpiece
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Exactly my thoughts, purrbaby!! You nailed it!
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This has been an awesome journey! I am one of the teary-eyed ones, not looking forward to this story ending, but knowing that Matt and Trent and of course Mr. London, will take care of Hayden! So happy Matt has an inheritance and hopefully, he'll use most of it to help himself and the people he loves! Sueing that Judge would be the least of his worries, if I had my 'dreams come true'! ☹️
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Chapter 14 Crossing the Bridge
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 14 Crossing the Bridge
So, so NICE...this cleared up a few bubbles in my lil mind...the past and how they each evolved, the here and now feelings, and my biggest concern...who's giving up whose home space...milling or farming, by the river or in town!! You handled it JUST right🤗...they will NOT be apart again, no matter what or where!!🥰 Great job, Gar!💯- 70 comments
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Ok...Cyn is fine and has come into his own..Hugs for him!! I knew he would see Shea's distress and getting fighting mad!! My concern now is Sam...poor, heroic Sam seems to have been forgotten in all the 'Eike chaos'. Please let my little guy be ok 🥺 Stunning chapter, literally had us on the edge of our seats. EXCELLENT!!
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Thank you, Gar...what an appropriate setting for these two men to finally allow themselves to just ...be in love!! Perfect scene, perfect resolution...perfect 10 chapter!!
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Oh geezzzz Gary...what a fabulous office visit with a 'real' doc that listens with more than just an ear!!! That exchange between the doc and Mitch was so well done...typical "Garrific"(stunningly terrific)!! Made the day, and now we just have to wait and see how long it takes Mitch to get his priorities in order, given this second chance...drop to your knees, thank whomever you please, and get your butt over to Will's ASAP! 🙏 Awesomeeeeeee chapter, Gar...good luck at the dentist, hopefully he won't use the 'string tied to the doorknob' method's of Mitch's old doc🥰
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The Truth is Going to Leak Soon
Onim commented on garfwiz's story chapter in The Truth is Going to Leak Soon
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A brilliantly written chapter...handled so smoothly, even though you had people lined up around the corner, trying for a field goal kick using Mitch's arse!! Does he not see that Will is going to suffer whether he lets him near him or not...that's the nature of the love beast...so, let's put the Tom Cruz/Cameron Diaz theory to work here..."with me ---, without me ___(high or low) your choice Blue Jr(Mitch)!! Again, a high anxiety chapter, masterfully done, Master Gary ❣️
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Chapter 9 Speak of the Devil
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 9 Speak of the Devil
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This variation of Beauty and the Beast is just STUNNING...well constructed, beautifully written with careful thought out!!! A-MAZZZZZZZZZZZING!! ❣️ Kinda like the 'beast' we've all dealt with for the past couple of years...always getting away with chit, never held accountable! 😇
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Chapter 8 Stuck in the Same Corral
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 8 Stuck in the Same Corral
I mean, I'm all for patience but let's not forget(or rather let Mitch forget) that there may not be a lot of time for the patience factor 😢😨!! I just want them to get to the point where Coy and Boone are, too fast, I suppose! Loving these guys...besides, I want them all in one place, so when trouble with jealous, homophobes happen up on them, they'll have each other's back...NOT looking or asking for trouble, but you know all types of jealousies rise up when others are happy AND doing well! Just saying...🤔 A wonderful, 'permanent smile' chapter, Gar, ❣️- 82 comments
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Excellent!!❤️ I’m thinking Beau is going to need a few self defense classes, say a couple of ‘Karazor’ lessons and a few ‘TiGunDo’ sessions to deal with our local, out of control sociopath! Though violence should never have to be an answer, self defense by any means necessary may Have to be the answer to this unchecked, narcissistic, danger to society!! Leave it to adorable little Chip to balance out my need to ‘speak’ with Gary in a dark alley, with next-day garbage pick up.
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Chapter 7 A Bark with No Bite
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 7 A Bark with No Bite
Obstinate, stubborn, or just plain ole bull-headed...that'd be our resident good ole sheriff!!! Geezzzzzzzzzzzz, can we just lock he and Will in the cabinet for the weekend...let Blue stand guard...one ole stubborn mule to another!!Fabulous 'nother one, Gary❣️...going to have to put in a formal request to Coy's "good Lord", and hope that this won't be a 3-tissue box ending! 😇 -
Personally, Corbin's Mom is one fry short of a happy meal en route to a looney bin, she's definitely NOT Mom material!! I pity the kids and hope they're able to find decent people like Jerry to influence their lives, and let's face it, Zoe is not quite wrapped as tight as she should be either, at this point. Leah the Liar and drama queen needs to ease on down the road and find herself another host to leach off of. Don should be headed to prison...pronto...he won't stop until he's forced to! Another riveting chapter, brilliantly done!
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I agree with Corbin...'she should have gotten rid of him long ago'!!! Mom needs to stop making excuses for herself and that sorry sack of nothing she's forced her children to put up with, pretending he was some type of father! He's psycho and she's psycho-dependent and I feel sorry for the kids...Leah needs to get her a life from the nearest dime store and stop trying to create a 'happy-happy' scenario, that hasn't been there for a long time...another darn weight around poor, confused Corbins' neck...he's going to drown if he doesn't rid himself of the anvil's around his neck and reach for the lifeline that Troy is throwing him! Whewwwwwwww...enough ranting...😁 Great chapter, wonderful dysfunctional characters you've so adeptly brought to life!
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Chapter 5 Sweet-talking Ways
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 5 Sweet-talking Ways
Great chapter...I must say that I'm on the Coy bandwagon, big time!! I think he did exactly what needed to be done, after all, how mad can Mitch get, he interfered with Coy and Boone, and look how awsome that turned out to be!! I would appreciate if Mitch would let his head escape from his butt, for just a little, to breathe in some common sense, PLEASE!!🙏 You're sick, Mitchell, let go of the anger and...get well, with your man who still loves you! Ok...just saying😊 Love these guys!! Thanks, Gar.. -
Brilliantly done…first to last word!
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Curioser and curioser....me and Coy!! 😂 Very nice, Gar...Coy and I will try to be good..🤐..or...NOT!!
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First and foremost, I hope that you and yours are feeling better and recovering very well, so sending you guys lots of positive energy and love from all of us “FD” (Fourth Down and FrankD) addicted fans!! This story wonderful and the writing is amazing, thanks for sharing your talent and time to give us these loyal, loving, “homemade” family members! Take care…be well…💕
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BTW, huge CONGRATS on being a ‘millionaire’!!! Thanks for sharing your amazing talent with us, Gar, and providing us brief respites from a lot of the ugly in the world today, even through your painful recovery! I know it’s not your job to provides us with chaotic relief, but you’re so damn good at it!! We appreciate you and a few other authors more than you’ll ever realize! So again, thanks for the brilliant million…hugs n love!
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Not giving up on Mitch...he deserves a HEA😭 I'm truly hoping that the air quality and the escape from all the grit clogging his lungs will give him at least a decent chance at some time for a little romance and a bit of happy!! 🙏 In any event, I'm hoping that I don't have to hit the PUFF"s before the 50th chapter😇 Another stunning chapter, Gary...keep the hits coming...I'm thinking if we threw out Tuesdays and Wednesday's , we could substitute those two days for Mondays...yeah?? More Mondays, more Boone, Coy, and Mitch...yeah?? Hugs for ya, my friend!!
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Thank you so very much🤗
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I'm probably mistaken, but isn't Patrick's middle name Hunter??? Just asking...
