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  1. Onim
    Loved the connection, the confusion, the confessions...and the Kiss....very well done, 3-pointer at the buzzer, for sure❣️
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    LOL..I stand corrected, my friend 🫠...we'll go with the Conniving Cooties, in lieu of disparaging the Crawley's good name❣️😘 And as for this journey, suffice it to say, probably the only journey I'd be adverse to joining you on is one going to 1600 PA. Ave...just picky about the disease now running rampant in that area..."delusional lying" appears to be quite contagious 🤗
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    I feel like this chapter is a prelude to the showdown...because with Albert and Rob...it's about to get quite ugly😬 They will not let their unacknowledged work horse go gently off into the sunset! I'm just afraid of what they may do to 'persuade' him to stay, ie...hurt his beloved horse or worst, lock him up 😔Very nicely done ... now let's snatch Fletch up and ease on down the road away from the Creepy Crawlers...oops I meant Crawleys😜
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    Chapter 2 Purgatory

    Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 2 Purgatory

    Another great hit…for sure💯 You’re right about the wealthy and arrogant usually not getting their “just rewards”, just look around us nowadays…but I digress, let me add my ‘prayerful’ wishes to looking forward to the horrific demise of these two demonic species…Albert and Rob😇 Although, I think leaving those two to run that farm would be just as catastrophic for them and probably more fun to watch the collapse 🫶🏽 Just saying…🤭 This chapter..🌟
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    Chapter 1 Enemies?

    Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 1 Enemies?

    OMG🤫 The 'drought is finally over!!!! Gar is back and with the Western love we've been a missing so muchThank you, thank you for this, in these awful days...Gary to our rescue. The Augie and Fletch Saga begins...once we knock off that dad, of course🤗 WB, Gar...glad you're well and up to entertaining again...we truly did miss you❣️
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    Headstall is undoubtably the "Western Master", but all of his tales are 5-Star, Homerun, Slam Dunk, Golden Buzzer hits!! "Journey To Salvation" is a beautifully done journey to love and understanding!!
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    Chapter 1: Caught

    Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 1: Caught

    OMG!! You never, ever disappoint us We must have all channeled our thoughts and wishes to you for an uplift with love, in these hateful, chaotic times...and you came through for us like a champ, with this beautiful little Bear Paw shorty❣️Thank you, from the heart...all of ours Hope all is well with you and you're healthy and safe...much love from the friends from afar...ALWAYS💖
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    Retirement

    Onim commented on empath's story chapter in Retirement

    Excellent, let's give John the chance to finally do better, especially with his children, like we gave his father-in-law! By now, I think he needs to recalibrate his life, look the mirror straight on, stop looking for exit signs, or sneaking around to be you!!
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    Epilogue: Beginnings

    Onim commented on empath's story chapter in Epilogue: Beginnings

    Thank you for both this heart-wrenching and heart-warming story❣️ You've made many of us more aware of the dangers that our kids face in such an intentionally cruel world we live in...we've experienced the anger, all the rage , the flood of tears, unbelievable evil in some humans, and you've shown us what love, kindness, integrity and nurturing hugs can accomplish I look forward to updates on the wonderful characters introduced to us, and the fate of the evil and corrupt as well 🙏 This was an amazingly well written, well constructed story, wish that we all possessed this kind of talent💖
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    First two chapters…very well done, looking forward to more‼️💯 Hoping Gael leaves and makes them regret treating him so disrespectfully🫶🏽
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    Kept Boy to Made Man

    Onim commented on empath's story in Fiction

    This was was indeed a journey worth traveling, thank you so much for allowing us to meet and fall in love with your characters and to hate with all within us, your villains❣️ The writing...plots, character development, romance, pain, tears...just amazing💖
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    Thank you for this one...the characters, the plot twists and turns, the evil villains, the exciting trials in the woods, the fires, and bombs, the interweaving of lives and families, the tragedies...all leading to an impressive ending of love reigning supreme over evil
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    Absolutely stunning chapter, now to find Dexter and make sure they have adjoining electric chairs!!! This was such a suspenseful chapter and very well written❣️ So, please have a fitting end for good ole Dex the Pest, he'll try and scheme and murder his way out of all of this, of course😬Moving right along, Jeff and Eric could be cuteness personified...yeah?😍
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    Cosa Nostra

    Onim commented on empath's story chapter in Cosa Nostra

    Phenomenal chapter❣️ The foundation is going to be a thing of beauty...can't wait to see Roger blissfully raising all of his sons
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    So done with “The Weakest Link” (Jeremy) and his evil clan, let Dexter have that perpetual little boy! I just feel sorry for the kids that will have to grow up in that toxic environment, for they’ll surely turn out just like their dim witted, spoiled entitled dad‼️Carter if you can, take your dad, your Aunt and Eric, and escape the Jeremy insanity🙏🏽😢
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    Shared Burdens

    Onim commented on empath's story chapter in Shared Burdens

    Your writing is amazing, to bring forth a flood of tears and murderous rage at the same time💔 I'm sitting here feeling as if I'm at that scene with one thought...MURDER them all...but not before torturing them verrrrrry slowly!! Get those innocents as far away from that scene as possible and let the torture begin. Give the good ole boy militiaman a medal 🙏 Great chapter, as they all have been...
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    Stand your ground, Carter❣️ Use your heart AND your common sense this time, please🙏🏽 Do not lose another person that loves you, by letting others influence your decisions. Laura has to be stopped and deposed from her reign of terror! Excellent chapter❤️‍🔥
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    I feel as if Carter is repeating the same mistake with Leo as he did with his deceased father...not giving their voices a chance to even be considered or given reasonable thought to...it's unfair, and I hope he'll be able to pull his "whoa is me" act together and realize who the real danger is, before he loses another parent!! Stop taking "concepts of a weapon" to an AK-47 gun fight...with Laura and Dexter😵, ask Elena and Ethan how that worked out?!!
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    Chapter 7

    Onim commented on lilansui's story chapter in Chapter 7

    Sooo worth the wait
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    Awww...ready for this one!!!!
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    Chapter 9 - The End

    Onim commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 9 - The End

    PERFECT…in every aspect❣️💯💯Thank you, sir and long or short, we’ll be lined up for Jacob’s story🫶🏽
  22. Onim
    I whole-heartedly agree with everything wallycleaver said‼️A book 2 could present Carter/Jeremy POV’s, and definitely deal with the unreasonable hatred of both Laura and wannabe fiancé Dexter 🤦🏾‍♀️ Plus you have the wonderful Jeff, who has been in Carter’s corner from day one…🥰 Please continue 🙏🏽💯
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    Chapter 3

    Onim commented on wolfwriter's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Brilliantly put in her place by a caring father who is determined to not let anyone or anything keep him from getting and loving HIS girls!! 🙌
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    Chapter 4

    Onim commented on P. E. Knapp's story chapter in Chapter 4

    Absolutely LOVED this story❣️❣️❤️‍🔥 PLEASE continue…💯🙏🏽
  25. Onim
    Poor Carter...can't catch a break from chaos and mayhem surrounding on all sides 😢 Hopefully some force will find him and send Lopez to join his brother...the psycho and the sociopath united in hell‼️...Okkkk, it was just a "dream" (or a plea) Maybe they could coerce Dexter to join them...more fuel for that ever burning fire⁉️ Enough wishful thinking, back to the story...amazing chapter...keeping us on the edge as usual
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