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Chapter 9 Speak of the Devil
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 9 Speak of the Devil
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This variation of Beauty and the Beast is just STUNNING...well constructed, beautifully written with careful thought out!!! A-MAZZZZZZZZZZZING!! ❣️ Kinda like the 'beast' we've all dealt with for the past couple of years...always getting away with chit, never held accountable! 😇
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Chapter 8 Stuck in the Same Corral
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 8 Stuck in the Same Corral
I mean, I'm all for patience but let's not forget(or rather let Mitch forget) that there may not be a lot of time for the patience factor 😢😨!! I just want them to get to the point where Coy and Boone are, too fast, I suppose! Loving these guys...besides, I want them all in one place, so when trouble with jealous, homophobes happen up on them, they'll have each other's back...NOT looking or asking for trouble, but you know all types of jealousies rise up when others are happy AND doing well! Just saying...🤔 A wonderful, 'permanent smile' chapter, Gar, ❣️- 82 comments
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Excellent!!❤️ I’m thinking Beau is going to need a few self defense classes, say a couple of ‘Karazor’ lessons and a few ‘TiGunDo’ sessions to deal with our local, out of control sociopath! Though violence should never have to be an answer, self defense by any means necessary may Have to be the answer to this unchecked, narcissistic, danger to society!! Leave it to adorable little Chip to balance out my need to ‘speak’ with Gary in a dark alley, with next-day garbage pick up.
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Chapter 7 A Bark with No Bite
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 7 A Bark with No Bite
Obstinate, stubborn, or just plain ole bull-headed...that'd be our resident good ole sheriff!!! Geezzzzzzzzzzzz, can we just lock he and Will in the cabinet for the weekend...let Blue stand guard...one ole stubborn mule to another!!Fabulous 'nother one, Gary❣️...going to have to put in a formal request to Coy's "good Lord", and hope that this won't be a 3-tissue box ending! 😇 -
Personally, Corbin's Mom is one fry short of a happy meal en route to a looney bin, she's definitely NOT Mom material!! I pity the kids and hope they're able to find decent people like Jerry to influence their lives, and let's face it, Zoe is not quite wrapped as tight as she should be either, at this point. Leah the Liar and drama queen needs to ease on down the road and find herself another host to leach off of. Don should be headed to prison...pronto...he won't stop until he's forced to! Another riveting chapter, brilliantly done!
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I agree with Corbin...'she should have gotten rid of him long ago'!!! Mom needs to stop making excuses for herself and that sorry sack of nothing she's forced her children to put up with, pretending he was some type of father! He's psycho and she's psycho-dependent and I feel sorry for the kids...Leah needs to get her a life from the nearest dime store and stop trying to create a 'happy-happy' scenario, that hasn't been there for a long time...another darn weight around poor, confused Corbins' neck...he's going to drown if he doesn't rid himself of the anvil's around his neck and reach for the lifeline that Troy is throwing him! Whewwwwwwww...enough ranting...😁 Great chapter, wonderful dysfunctional characters you've so adeptly brought to life!
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Chapter 5 Sweet-talking Ways
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 5 Sweet-talking Ways
Great chapter...I must say that I'm on the Coy bandwagon, big time!! I think he did exactly what needed to be done, after all, how mad can Mitch get, he interfered with Coy and Boone, and look how awsome that turned out to be!! I would appreciate if Mitch would let his head escape from his butt, for just a little, to breathe in some common sense, PLEASE!!🙏 You're sick, Mitchell, let go of the anger and...get well, with your man who still loves you! Ok...just saying😊 Love these guys!! Thanks, Gar.. -
Brilliantly done…first to last word!
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Curioser and curioser....me and Coy!! 😂 Very nice, Gar...Coy and I will try to be good..🤐..or...NOT!!
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First and foremost, I hope that you and yours are feeling better and recovering very well, so sending you guys lots of positive energy and love from all of us “FD” (Fourth Down and FrankD) addicted fans!! This story wonderful and the writing is amazing, thanks for sharing your talent and time to give us these loyal, loving, “homemade” family members! Take care…be well…💕
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BTW, huge CONGRATS on being a ‘millionaire’!!! Thanks for sharing your amazing talent with us, Gar, and providing us brief respites from a lot of the ugly in the world today, even through your painful recovery! I know it’s not your job to provides us with chaotic relief, but you’re so damn good at it!! We appreciate you and a few other authors more than you’ll ever realize! So again, thanks for the brilliant million…hugs n love!
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Not giving up on Mitch...he deserves a HEA😭 I'm truly hoping that the air quality and the escape from all the grit clogging his lungs will give him at least a decent chance at some time for a little romance and a bit of happy!! 🙏 In any event, I'm hoping that I don't have to hit the PUFF"s before the 50th chapter😇 Another stunning chapter, Gary...keep the hits coming...I'm thinking if we threw out Tuesdays and Wednesday's , we could substitute those two days for Mondays...yeah?? More Mondays, more Boone, Coy, and Mitch...yeah?? Hugs for ya, my friend!!
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Thank you so very much🤗
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I'm probably mistaken, but isn't Patrick's middle name Hunter??? Just asking...
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Well written, but too tedious and repetitive, to make the character sympathetic or likable after 31 chapters of being slighted, abused, misused, and behaving so cowardly...
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Who is playing with our money?
Onim commented on garfwiz's story chapter in Who is playing with our money?
I'm hoping Bjorn is more careful and doesn't end up a tragedy...I'd hate to see his wife go ballistic on whomever would try to harm him!🤭 Tala and Jay need more security while traveling, just in case they're met with more Dalton's with disruptive intentions. I also think they need to check in on Tobias more, to make sure he's ok, with that huge target on his back. I'm also a bit fearful of their stroll onto Alligator Blvd, too easy to go MIA and end up as a gator snack! Love this story...the characters and the writing!!💯 -
I'm with ya 'Spanky'...patiently(well, patiently might be a tad bit over stating), but you got the face and fingers right!! This was written beautifully...love how Cyn so effortlessly charms the pack and is growing by leaps and bounds; really loving the Arric budding love(saw that one coming); and loved the 'when predator becomes prey' lesson, just before leaving us hanging on the ole cliff by the finger!!!! Well done, you can spike the ball and 'end zone' dance on this one!
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Scratch the second ending for me, please! This has been one long tragedy after another for both guys, this story needs at least ONE hero...two's not so bad!!
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Chapter 24: Regret Recognized
Onim commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 24: Regret Recognized
Congrats on the new job...Be safe for you and yours...and us! 🌟 -
Chapter 24: Regret Recognized
Onim commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 24: Regret Recognized
Smooth chapter, giving us incite into the players being assembled (albeit subtly) for the upcoming battle!! Love this! Stuerm's arrogance has jettisoned his arse into some deep 'boo-boo' and I can't wait to see Ty 'light' it up properly...soooo, going to sit back and watch the Southern Fireworks now! Do what you do best...we'll wait...'patiently'.. -
Patrick is turning into a real sociopath, my empathy for this spoiled little 'blame my crap life on everyone else', just went out the window! Right about now, cheating Ford should be running away, instead of sneaking around...either way, their relationship is toxic and headed for deadly!
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One of the best, MsG has done it again, master storyteller, checking all the boxes, with beautiful characters showcasing their strengths, flaws, vulnerabilities, with LOVE being the ultimate conqueror!! Loved from beginning to end...a couple of times!
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This is definitely worth a double read, great plot twists and turns, just the right amount of humor, some tragic moments (eliciting anger and tears), a fair amount of steamy Kyle/Jett sex (beautifully done), cute scene-stealing scenes by the pups, and an ending that was like leaning over a cliff with no railing!!! A must read...TWICE!
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Mom is a delusional, beast of a busy-body...talk about pot calling kettle black, what if she were pitched into just a smidgeon of poverty? Meaning well, does not always translate to doing well...🤷♂️
