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Sooo excited to see you back❣️❣️Very enthusiastic about our newest “Old West” tale…which we can all agree, NO ONE does better than you Already enthralled with Jubal and Lucas, sad about Kema and hurting for Jubal’s loss🥺, but along comes Lucas with a bit of sunshine peeking through his cloud of depression 🌦 So like the rest of your ecstatic fans…”Yeehaw”, “Saddle Up” and Let’s Ride❣️😍 Gary’s back in town 🌟
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So happy for the update...It's about to get REAL!!! Amber will be on the case now, and hopefully Jim's days will become like boiling lava, consuming him, his evil mother and stupid mother-in-law😈 Great story-telling❣️
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Shaking my d*** head! A town full of delusional, hateful, bullies with money...no morals, no empathy, no sympathy...nothing that signifies "HUMAN"! Run while you can Amber, whatever your Mom and Ben's "acquaintances" have, may be in the water and quite deadly for sane peeps. Interesting chapter...looking forward to either Ben or David picking up a real pair of missing genitals, sooner then later
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Wonderful❣️❣️ Thanks for this update, nice chapter for the twins to finally detain the doctor, so that they may display their marvelous gifts of torture on her...and hopefully her mother!!
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At some point, Ben is going to have to get away from these narcissistic, sociopaths and decide that he's a man and doesn't have continue to be LapDog and WhippingBoy, his woe is me is starting to get old!! Borrow a pair from somewhere, and tell your spineless dad what is going on, at least let David in, so that he can show you what "living" and loving looks like!
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Not rough…intense and all encompassing, for sure❣️Definitely a lot going on simultaneously, but Tala is multi tasking quite adeptly and getting closer to identifying and eradicating the thieves…one domino at a time, they WILL fall! Great to have you back and hoping you’re feeling much better. 💯 Love the chapter, thank you❣️👏🏽
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Chapter 5: They finally meet. What's the way forward?
Onim commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 5: They finally meet. What's the way forward?
Like mother, like son...gimme, gimme take, take!! These two have mastered the AP Sociopath classes...Quick!!! Give sane people a chance to plan their demise in peace 🤔 Once again the father has taken one of his SOS (Stupid On Steroid) pills, before merrily joining his beautiful, sad son on the steps..."Are you ok?" "You seem sad." "Why aren't you inside?"...Can someone just slap Jerome and tell him that all the roles for "CLUELESS" were cast years ago...geezzzzz😬 On a lighter note 😜 Awesome chapter❣️ -
Sure hope Mom doesn't find out what Don The Moron did to her son...Mom's tend to take rape of their children a bit more seriously than Don's tiny little mind can contemplate! Very nice chapter!!!💯
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The WORST person in all of this is Jerome, the spineless, balls-less, scrap of excrement, that would allow someTHING like Elena to still be breathing, after all he’s witnessed of the things she’s done to his son…Ben is an innocent caught in the midst of this tsunami of pain and terror😭 David also needs to grow a pair and offer his control freak of a mother, one of two choices…attitude adjustment (AA) or lip and dental replacement(L&D)🤕 Nice chapter, though some things seem a bit implausible, they’ll mesh in the long run!
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This is an excellent start...I'm in❣️ Can't wait to see how he extracts himself from the infestation of manure, that are his petty 'friends'! But he's going to have to do some 'mental advancement' of his own also...a little self evaluation, much?
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Chapter 2: Destiny at work. Will it favor Jim or Ben?
Onim commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 2: Destiny at work. Will it favor Jim or Ben?
I’m going to agree whole-heartedly with “mfa” on this one…a nice, huge, semi truck speeding happily along would be option #1 for me, since No balls-No spine daddy Hernandez is ALWAYS a no show!! A father like him, money or none, is any kids’ worst nightmare! The Elena monster should and could have been slayed from day one…my anger and hatred towards the father almost exceeds that towards Monster E! Very nice chapter❣️ -
Nothing Clears the Head Like a Walk in the Moonlight
Onim commented on garfwiz's story chapter in Nothing Clears the Head Like a Walk in the Moonlight
I’m a bit confused about the duplicitous Avery, and whether or not her call was able to be screened from the other phone. Her lazy, disrespectful butt should fired…guess that will come when Matthew returns, hopefully he’ll get to do the honor🤗 Appreciating the long chapter…more than you know❣️ The Rancher..🤔🤷🏽♀️ -
Wow! What a tense-filled, exciting chapter…talk about cliff-hangers❣️ I’m thinking the owner of the oily blood donor could be Wolfgang helping his newly acquired Vamp friend! Hopefully, he was able to make it through the battle to assist his mate and return the favor to Kavan! Beginning to understand the Giddy one a bit better now, how the ‘angel’ in him was abused and left him cynical and bitter. 😢 Thank goodness our favorite little hard-headed Kav was ready and willing to jump in to help🤗👏🏽 Wonderful chapter
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Chapter 1: Enter the world of the Henandez family.
Onim commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 1: Enter the world of the Henandez family.
Very nice beginning...though the father is sickeningly weak, and can't wait until Ben lays a few fingers (preferably closed) on that reject from hell, mother! -
The only answer that comes to my mind...Zach!! Just watching Zach's career go down the drain, when Will gets done with him🤔Hoping it's not Buckface trying to assert his authority...because that would send Will into apocalyptic mode, involving the big guns...Steph and Gran, not to mention Daddy and Jake😨 Great chapter, beginning to end...looking forward to getting off the 'cliff' 😊
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The money stopped, or did it?
Onim commented on garfwiz's story chapter in The money stopped, or did it?
But I am confused as to why Tala would allow that Tony Sleazy and his disrespectful mate to still have a place in the pack...that's a recipe and main ingredients to the worst kind of fruit cake! Might want to keep the cages on standby...🤔 Great chapter, thanks for the update❣️ -
The money stopped, or did it?
Onim commented on garfwiz's story chapter in The money stopped, or did it?
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What more can be said...excellent writing, fabulous charcters, stunning concept...nail-biting cliffies and just left us gasping for more! The characters in her books dare you to open and read...you're hooked from, as has been said before, "from the very first paragraph!! Thank you...and on to the next book...PLEASE
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Just STUNNING...waiting patiently (after the cliffie, NOT cliffie, ending) for our next fix...I mean book🤭 It's been a journey that exceeded everything we thought it would be...THANK YOU❣️ 💯+
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Doesn’t get any better…beautifully written story❣️❣️ As always…🌟
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Hmmm...if Caspian does NOT make an example of these two narcissistic, desperados, then he may as well step down and let the "Scary" Blond do his thing...he would not hesitate to give both of them a bottle of sunscreen as a departing 'Good Morning' gift! Then that would give Kon the incentive to get rid of her minions left in the compound...so that he can marshal his forces and get ready for the _ _ IT storm coming their way from the mystery Asian. Can't wait for the meeting 🤤 As always, wonderful writing, superb storyline...Captivating Chapter❣️❣️
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Awesome! Unique and unusual, excellent vamp story❣️Love these characters, the brother’s loving bond, their differences, Doc and Emil, and of course my fave, the honorable Konstantin!! Hating the thirsty, power-hungry, narcissistic 🤬Mother, her demise can’t come soon enough, hopefully with enormous suffering and agony! 🙏🏽 Anyway…charming chapter, wonderful writing, superb storyline
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This is such an extraordinarily, well written story! Totally mirroring our societal ills, or at least a few ones, that are steeped in hate, ignorance and "ignore it and it'll go away" thinking. The characters made you love this story, not just the main players, but even the supporting ones, like Charley and the indomitable and unforgettable, lovable Myles❣️For you Myles...you'll be our thoughts for a while, for sure😢 Kudos, Ronyx, for this wonderful story to remind us of getting into 'good trouble', instead of ignoring evil!! A MUST READ...please
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Thank you for this "in the moment", beautifully written story! It was needed to remind us that LOVE can dominate and defeat hate, if we just allow love to do it's job❣️ I often wonder what the color black ever did to "Hate"...what loving someone of your choice ever did to "Hate"...what worshipping one god versus another ever did to "Hate"...what women wanting autonomy over their own bodies ever did to "Hate"😢 "Hate" has a lot of hate going around, with absolutely NO answers as to why...and since hate is without answers to justify it's existence, I shall continue to try and stomp it into the ground with LOVE!! Love to you all...stay safe and be happy Again, THANKS, Ron.
