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The only answer that comes to my mind...Zach!! Just watching Zach's career go down the drain, when Will gets done with him🤔Hoping it's not Buckface trying to assert his authority...because that would send Will into apocalyptic mode, involving the big guns...Steph and Gran, not to mention Daddy and Jake😨 Great chapter, beginning to end...looking forward to getting off the 'cliff' 😊
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The money stopped, or did it?
Onim commented on garfwiz's story chapter in The money stopped, or did it?
But I am confused as to why Tala would allow that Tony Sleazy and his disrespectful mate to still have a place in the pack...that's a recipe and main ingredients to the worst kind of fruit cake! Might want to keep the cages on standby...🤔 Great chapter, thanks for the update❣️ -
The money stopped, or did it?
Onim commented on garfwiz's story chapter in The money stopped, or did it?
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What more can be said...excellent writing, fabulous charcters, stunning concept...nail-biting cliffies and just left us gasping for more! The characters in her books dare you to open and read...you're hooked from, as has been said before, "from the very first paragraph!! Thank you...and on to the next book...PLEASE
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Just STUNNING...waiting patiently (after the cliffie, NOT cliffie, ending) for our next fix...I mean book🤭 It's been a journey that exceeded everything we thought it would be...THANK YOU❣️ 💯+
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Doesn’t get any better…beautifully written story❣️❣️ As always…🌟
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Hmmm...if Caspian does NOT make an example of these two narcissistic, desperados, then he may as well step down and let the "Scary" Blond do his thing...he would not hesitate to give both of them a bottle of sunscreen as a departing 'Good Morning' gift! Then that would give Kon the incentive to get rid of her minions left in the compound...so that he can marshal his forces and get ready for the _ _ IT storm coming their way from the mystery Asian. Can't wait for the meeting 🤤 As always, wonderful writing, superb storyline...Captivating Chapter❣️❣️
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Awesome! Unique and unusual, excellent vamp story❣️Love these characters, the brother’s loving bond, their differences, Doc and Emil, and of course my fave, the honorable Konstantin!! Hating the thirsty, power-hungry, narcissistic 🤬Mother, her demise can’t come soon enough, hopefully with enormous suffering and agony! 🙏🏽 Anyway…charming chapter, wonderful writing, superb storyline
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This is such an extraordinarily, well written story! Totally mirroring our societal ills, or at least a few ones, that are steeped in hate, ignorance and "ignore it and it'll go away" thinking. The characters made you love this story, not just the main players, but even the supporting ones, like Charley and the indomitable and unforgettable, lovable Myles❣️For you Myles...you'll be our thoughts for a while, for sure😢 Kudos, Ronyx, for this wonderful story to remind us of getting into 'good trouble', instead of ignoring evil!! A MUST READ...please
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Thank you for this "in the moment", beautifully written story! It was needed to remind us that LOVE can dominate and defeat hate, if we just allow love to do it's job❣️ I often wonder what the color black ever did to "Hate"...what loving someone of your choice ever did to "Hate"...what worshipping one god versus another ever did to "Hate"...what women wanting autonomy over their own bodies ever did to "Hate"😢 "Hate" has a lot of hate going around, with absolutely NO answers as to why...and since hate is without answers to justify it's existence, I shall continue to try and stomp it into the ground with LOVE!! Love to you all...stay safe and be happy Again, THANKS, Ron.
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Zach gets the smack down, literally and figuratively, that he's needed for a very long time!! To the curb with this loser/user, I don't think he ever really loved Will, just used and manipulated him, from day one it's been all about Zach, and what Zach needed and wanted and Will accommodated him at every turn! Zach forced Will to find his balls and get rid of him...this is all on Zach...and for me, I'm glad he's where garbage needs to be..."to the curb"!!! Love this story and it's characters...though I must confess, Zach will NOT be missed🤭
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The “relationship” with Zach, has always been a bit of a lopsided misnomer, with Zach being the ultimate beneficiary of having his cake and eating it too! Yet somehow, making Will feeling guilty for seeming to not support Zach in all his SELFISH glory! This maybe the “lightening flash” that may strike him into valuing Will more or the one that finally exposes Zach as the ‘all about me’ prick that he really is. Once you allow Zach’s brand of self centered, narcissistic behavior free reign, it Never ceases on its own, it feels entitled to continue…why not, it’s a perfect scenario for Zach to continue to guilt Will into believing this is ‘love’…it AINT!! Friend zone Zach, and explore your options Will…you deserve better…Zach has never been anything but a rocky road of pain! 🫣🤭
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Very happy to have you back, with a new chapter!! Thank you, after our weekend in Florida, this was like a brilliant light at the end of our horrific "Ian" tunnel! I'm hoping Tala will deal with Susan and Tony 'appropiately', if not in the harshest possible way, I fear they will be a constant threat to whatever stability they are hoping to gain for the Florida pack🤔 Wonderful chapter, again...THANKS❣️
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My sincere condolences on the loss of your Mum!! Hope you and family are staying close and doing well! Your Mum taught you well, as we can all attest to by your marvelous writing and imaginative mind❣️ Thank you for sharing your gifted talent...you're giving MsG a run for the top spot, for sure!
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Great story, on point💯...you're covering both sides of the proverbial 'coin', excellently and fairly!! Thanks for sharing!!!❣️
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Somehow, they want these kids just a bit tooooooooooo much for my brain to accept!! Do they know something (maybe ) about the kids that could result in a profitable windfall for these wicked retards?? Have they killed the father, invented lies about Hunter and Dale, tried several times to illegally obtain the kids...to what end...MONEY is a very good incentive for the "ignit bigit"! Check Preistley's background, she's hiding something pertaining to these children...just speculating...while waiting! 😊
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This reeks of another attempt by that horrid woman, trying to get her homophobic way, one way or another...after all it's her "God given right" to run everyone's life as she sees fit! Pudgy Fakerson is probably her husband or good ole boy pastor🤔...just speculating!🤫 Very nice chapter❣️
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Thank you for writing this story...it's needed!! Parker is in for a world of hurt, for that is the way cops deal with people that choose to see the real and try and help out in situations like this, no matter the color! Sadly, Parker has entered the world where he'll have the ugly label of "nigger lover", which is meant to be just as derogatory and degrading as "nigger", and if not careful, will get treated like me...and then will understand why we scream "Black Lives Matter"! It is not a question of whether all lives matter, because the average white person's life mattering, will NEVER come into play! White privilege will ultimately allow you the privilege of living without the fear of being murdered while driving, or walking, or just being WHITE! Not meaning any offense, just stating the truth in pretty simplistic terms. Great story, excellent chapter, Ronyx 💖
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What a stunning story by an amazing writer! You and your insightful characters were much appreciated, during some difficult times!!
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Joh, so hoping that everything is ok and that you are in full recovery ASAP, with no lasting complications!!💕 This is a great story, per your usual of course!❤️ There’s really only 3 things Damon should do BEFORE the Cali trip…extract head from a$$, go after Cole, and MAN THE F**K UP!!! It’s time to pull up the big boy ‘drawz’😁🤞🏽
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I’m thinking this was staged by our lords of brilliance, to lure whomever is trying to harm them, out into the open to be annihilated!! Just a wish….🤞🏽so sue me😇
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Going to go with 84Mags on this one...a "smiling anaconda" is just not my idea of goodness wrapped in a warm smile!! 🏃♀️Point me to the 'grinning Grizzly'! Here's hoping Robert survives all this madness and seeks 'asylum' with all of our guys! 😉 Great story, wonderful characters, fabulous chapter...the usual suspects with your work!❣️
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Fabulous ending to such a well written story! Okkkkkkkk...so I'm a fan of westerns after these two wonderful sagas!! Sooooo going to miss the guys...until they come back...it's ok, I can wait See you soon, Coy, Boone, Mitch, Will...LARKSPUR!! 🤗 Another "outta the park" one, Gar...thank you lots!👏
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Excellent...truly well written...you always tend to come up with the most unique and entertaining concepts and characters!! This one hit the "You're going to Hollywood" buzzer...wonderful characters with a stunning concept of "predator protecting and loving prey"!! I'm just waiting to see what's in store for our Alpha and Key (hint, hint 😉), because I know Shea and Cyn will join them in that adventure! As stated, Fabulous job...AGAIN!!🤩
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Definitely worth waiting for...this chapter was a Cat5 "happy dance" chapter!!🥰🤗 Thank you, Sir Garrific, for these 4 Bright Lights of love!
