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    Kept Boy to Made Man

    Onim commented on empath's story in Fiction

    This was was indeed a journey worth traveling, thank you so much for allowing us to meet and fall in love with your characters and to hate with all within us, your villains❣️ The writing...plots, character development, romance, pain, tears...just amazing💖
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    Thank you for this one...the characters, the plot twists and turns, the evil villains, the exciting trials in the woods, the fires, and bombs, the interweaving of lives and families, the tragedies...all leading to an impressive ending of love reigning supreme over evil
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    Absolutely stunning chapter, now to find Dexter and make sure they have adjoining electric chairs!!! This was such a suspenseful chapter and very well written❣️ So, please have a fitting end for good ole Dex the Pest, he'll try and scheme and murder his way out of all of this, of course😬Moving right along, Jeff and Eric could be cuteness personified...yeah?😍
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    Cosa Nostra

    Onim commented on empath's story chapter in Cosa Nostra

    Phenomenal chapter❣️ The foundation is going to be a thing of beauty...can't wait to see Roger blissfully raising all of his sons
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    So done with “The Weakest Link” (Jeremy) and his evil clan, let Dexter have that perpetual little boy! I just feel sorry for the kids that will have to grow up in that toxic environment, for they’ll surely turn out just like their dim witted, spoiled entitled dad‼️Carter if you can, take your dad, your Aunt and Eric, and escape the Jeremy insanity🙏🏽😢
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    Shared Burdens

    Onim commented on empath's story chapter in Shared Burdens

    Your writing is amazing, to bring forth a flood of tears and murderous rage at the same time💔 I'm sitting here feeling as if I'm at that scene with one thought...MURDER them all...but not before torturing them verrrrrry slowly!! Get those innocents as far away from that scene as possible and let the torture begin. Give the good ole boy militiaman a medal 🙏 Great chapter, as they all have been...
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    Stand your ground, Carter❣️ Use your heart AND your common sense this time, please🙏🏽 Do not lose another person that loves you, by letting others influence your decisions. Laura has to be stopped and deposed from her reign of terror! Excellent chapter❤️‍🔥
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    I feel as if Carter is repeating the same mistake with Leo as he did with his deceased father...not giving their voices a chance to even be considered or given reasonable thought to...it's unfair, and I hope he'll be able to pull his "whoa is me" act together and realize who the real danger is, before he loses another parent!! Stop taking "concepts of a weapon" to an AK-47 gun fight...with Laura and Dexter😵, ask Elena and Ethan how that worked out?!!
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    Chapter 7

    Onim commented on lilansui's story chapter in Chapter 7

    Sooo worth the wait
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    Awww...ready for this one!!!!
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    Chapter 9 - The End

    Onim commented on Jeff Burton's story chapter in Chapter 9 - The End

    PERFECT…in every aspect❣️💯💯Thank you, sir and long or short, we’ll be lined up for Jacob’s story🫶🏽
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    I whole-heartedly agree with everything wallycleaver said‼️A book 2 could present Carter/Jeremy POV’s, and definitely deal with the unreasonable hatred of both Laura and wannabe fiancé Dexter 🤦🏾‍♀️ Plus you have the wonderful Jeff, who has been in Carter’s corner from day one…🥰 Please continue 🙏🏽💯
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    Chapter 3

    Onim commented on wolfwriter's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Brilliantly put in her place by a caring father who is determined to not let anyone or anything keep him from getting and loving HIS girls!! 🙌
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    Chapter 4

    Onim commented on P. E. Knapp's story chapter in Chapter 4

    Absolutely LOVED this story❣️❣️❤️‍🔥 PLEASE continue…💯🙏🏽
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    Poor Carter...can't catch a break from chaos and mayhem surrounding on all sides 😢 Hopefully some force will find him and send Lopez to join his brother...the psycho and the sociopath united in hell‼️...Okkkk, it was just a "dream" (or a plea) Maybe they could coerce Dexter to join them...more fuel for that ever burning fire⁉️ Enough wishful thinking, back to the story...amazing chapter...keeping us on the edge as usual
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    Well, Dexter seems to be headed to the door of 'no return'...hopefully ASAP!! Of course, he won't leave without a bit of nastiness...its in his DNA😏 Sooo, we'll wait to see him and Carter's ex get karma due them both! Wonderful stage setting chapter ❣️💯
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    Excellent!
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    Chapter 13 - Adam

    Onim commented on Andr0gene's story chapter in Chapter 13 - Adam

    Agree with everyone else...BEAUTIFUL chapter, couldn't have been better❤️‍🔥 And don't worry, we'll just reread this chapter until you grace us with another...SOON
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    Carter will bring Jeremy and Oliver comfort and solace, if Jeremy will just allow his grief stricken heart to open for healing and the possibility of love❣️ Dexter is not a healer, more of an entitled grabber…he wants what he wants, FIVE years of trying does NOT entitle you to someone’s love, just stay in your lane and be a “friend”‼️Very nice chapter👏🏽💯❤️
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    Well done chapter, Mateo needs to leave all of them in their little bubble of misery!! Mark has proven to be a monster, NO EXCUSE, forgiveness is out of the question. Henry's too weak to handle his toxic snake, parading around as "the good wife"! She should know what a whore is, she's a first class one. Mateo needs to find himself and stop being the resident doormat for everyone of them...looking forward to the next chapter
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    Can't wait!!!!!! This is the most exciting of your stories...each of them awesome...this one is ❤️‍🔥💯
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    Just her attitude toward his father would have given me pause to not even let her through the door!! Let her husband deal with per privileged, nasty demeanor...away from my home, let them find a suitable B&B or something, but not near me! Dyl needs to grow a pair and kick the both of them to the curb, before she insults their father. But, maybe Sal will be the one to check her and her henpecked husband. Great chapter💯
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    Can NOT wait for the rope to tighten all the way around the three worst people ever and send them packing to hell! Hopefully when Jerome finally pulls his head fully from deep in his butt, he'll do something to dispose of his two minions of destruction...especially after he learns what they did to separate his son from his child that has caused Ben soooooo much pain!! And Claudia will regret the day she ever went against her own children to support two sicko's, David and Amber should toss the 3 of them in a jail cell for life!! Good Job, Vanalas💯
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    Chapter 25 Caught

    Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 25 Caught

    Beautiful wrap-up of this brilliantly written story Now take a week long bow and we'll see you Monday, for the next epic stunner...starring Billy and his sheriff❣️😉Thank you for sharing your talent, AGAIN...we are so fortunate
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    LOVE this one...one of those "let there be light" (among other things, 🤭)❣️❣️I ,must say I've been wanting Jubal to buy that land, since he recovered his money, so my smile is one shining light today🤗 Pretty happy Reid grew on me, now he'll make a great neighbor in our little "Cocoon Corner"....Nosey neighbors will be kept at bay by the acreage...or shotgun Fabulous chapter, Sir💯❤️‍🔥
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