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Agree with everyone else...BEAUTIFUL chapter, couldn't have been better❤️🔥 And don't worry, we'll just reread this chapter until you grace us with another...SOON
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Carter will bring Jeremy and Oliver comfort and solace, if Jeremy will just allow his grief stricken heart to open for healing and the possibility of love❣️ Dexter is not a healer, more of an entitled grabber…he wants what he wants, FIVE years of trying does NOT entitle you to someone’s love, just stay in your lane and be a “friend”‼️Very nice chapter👏🏽💯❤️
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Chapter 9: Mateo's life takes a drastic turn
Onim commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 9: Mateo's life takes a drastic turn
Well done chapter, Mateo needs to leave all of them in their little bubble of misery!! Mark has proven to be a monster, NO EXCUSE, forgiveness is out of the question. Henry's too weak to handle his toxic snake, parading around as "the good wife"! She should know what a whore is, she's a first class one. Mateo needs to find himself and stop being the resident doormat for everyone of them...looking forward to the next chapter -
More Colton, Some Dave, and a Conflict
Onim commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in More Colton, Some Dave, and a Conflict
Just her attitude toward his father would have given me pause to not even let her through the door!! Let her husband deal with per privileged, nasty demeanor...away from my home, let them find a suitable B&B or something, but not near me! Dyl needs to grow a pair and kick the both of them to the curb, before she insults their father. But, maybe Sal will be the one to check her and her henpecked husband. Great chapter💯- 36 comments
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Can NOT wait for the rope to tighten all the way around the three worst people ever and send them packing to hell! Hopefully when Jerome finally pulls his head fully from deep in his butt, he'll do something to dispose of his two minions of destruction...especially after he learns what they did to separate his son from his child that has caused Ben soooooo much pain!! And Claudia will regret the day she ever went against her own children to support two sicko's, David and Amber should toss the 3 of them in a jail cell for life!! Good Job, Vanalas💯
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Beautiful wrap-up of this brilliantly written story Now take a week long bow and we'll see you Monday, for the next epic stunner...starring Billy and his sheriff❣️😉Thank you for sharing your talent, AGAIN...we are so fortunate
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LOVE this one...one of those "let there be light" (among other things, 🤭)❣️❣️I ,must say I've been wanting Jubal to buy that land, since he recovered his money, so my smile is one shining light today🤗 Pretty happy Reid grew on me, now he'll make a great neighbor in our little "Cocoon Corner"....Nosey neighbors will be kept at bay by the acreage...or shotgun Fabulous chapter, Sir💯❤️🔥
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Chapter 23 In the Bright Light of Day
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 23 In the Bright Light of Day
This was certainly the amazing chapter we were all waiting for...you DID NOT disappoint❣️❣️ You brought the smiles, sexy, sensuous, sensitive, very very loving sides out of these two wonderful characters We couldn't have asked for anything better...because you always bring the heat, Sir...ALWAYS Can I say...Jubal is a surprise...cause he's as " smooth as Tennessee whiskey, as sweet as Strawberry wine.." and Lucas just loved every honest word that fell from his lips😘 Excellent chapter❤️🔥- 79 comments
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What a way to give us a Happy New Year's gift❣️ So happy Lucas insisted on Jubal giving him a chance to speak his truth and seek clarity on the "necklace" and why Jubal seems to always want to run for the hills. This was a difficult chapter, listening to Jubal describe his life🥹, brought a few tears and lot of anger at the evil of man... justified of course by his bible 🙄Thank you for the gift, Gary, brilliantly done...the sensual kiss at the end was soooo worth the wait💯 My hand is getting better, so I'll try and keep up with my reviews, this pecking stuff is for the birds 😂 HAPPY NEW YEAR🍾
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Very late, but present 🫶🏽 The thoughts running through Jubal’s head are on a constant loop, and keep him wary of everything, as he should be, judging from the ugly “jewelry” around his neck🤔 But I think once Lucas comes home and they finally have the much needed “talk”, hopefully they’ll start to realize that they’ve been reading the same book for a while now❣️❣️ The hunt and tracking for “his” herd was brilliantly done…his pain and anguish over the foal and it’s mom, was our pain 😢…and my rage😤 We shouldn’t rejoice over death, but I was ecstatic when Jubal shot those wolves and took the pelts, the horses deaths were slightly avenged🥹 This was an awesome chapter illustrating Jubal’s “flight or fight” dilemma in his head, with much clarity…stay and fight for that elusive, thing called love ❤️🔥 💯 for sure Gary‼️
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Chapter 6: More lies... Will David succumb?
Onim commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 6: More lies... Will David succumb?
Welcome back, so glad the father didn't die, even though he's got a lot to atone for!! Now if some of Elena, Jim, and Claudia's lies will just start biting them in the azz 🤔...and Issac is just as bad 🤨what's up with the "BFF"!?? Thanks for the update...very nice chapter❣️ -
Gary, my friend, this chapter was peaceful and tranquil...and hard work..whewwww, I'm tired from Jubal's hard work❣️ Somehow, we knew he'd want to finish Lucas's dream cabin, with the stairway to "heaven"(fingers crossed) I can see the grateful tears, streaming down Luke's face and the proud smiles gracing Jubal's ...can't wait for the next chapter Now, on to capturing those smart, elusive horses, that only come for the free drinks and lunches...and spending quality, alone time with each other, back to planning the future of the farm😉 Nicely done, Sir...💯
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Excellent, exciting, and very entertaining❣️ Well done
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Chapter 17 Holding on Tight
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 17 Holding on Tight
And Gar...please feel better, take the advice Doc gave Jubal...rest, fluids, and just feel better soon- 76 comments
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Chapter 17 Holding on Tight
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 17 Holding on Tight
I'm sure you'll probably guess how I'm feeling right now...but if there be any doubt whatsoever... Dancing all the way back home to kiss the chickens and hogs..and DINAH❣️ This was the perfect chapter, Gary- 76 comments
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I'm going to agree with Cincy, wholeheartedly, about the pace of this favorite tale...only for selfish reasons...I am most definitely NOT looking forward to Mondays without my Jubal/Lucas fix Soooo, I'm wanting Lucas to recover at soon as Jubal finishes the 'honeymoon cabin' 😜 Hey...we all can speculate and dream, can't we😇 Very nice, Gary...Lucas heals...Jubal works💖 Gotta love it❣️
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Okaaaaay, so some of us got Reid all wrong🫣and rushed to judgement too quickly😳…I’ll be having a serious pow wow with those individuals😇to set “them” straight‼️‼️ Reid is a good guy…just not THE guy, it’s ok❣️Very happy Jubal has all his funds back and now can purchase the land next to “their” farm, making it bigger and more private…maybe a “wake up” surprise for Lucas🤔❤️ Nice soothing chapter, seems Luke’s heartbeat was calming for all of those rush to judge folk😔in charge of the Huber brigade..shame on them😳Great job, Sir😍🫶🏽
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We're back on track💯...chapter still a 10, Jubal still the man, Sir Gary still reigning supreme as the very best...AND still hoping Luke will open those beautiful, warm eyes to focus on Jubal's loving ones, very, very soon❣️
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Chapter 13 If He Ever Does
Onim commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 13 If He Ever Does
It’s fine Sir Gary…most of us read the chapters more than once anyway🤭 So, as they say, no harm..no foul❣️ With this chapter, dare I say that the opaque windows showing the depth of Jubal and Reid’s true feelings for our Lucas is now crystal clear, with no animosity between the two, just a kindred truth revealed🥹 Brilliantly written sir‼️‼️ You’ve managed to make me respect, feel empathy, and kinda like Reid🤫…all in one chapter, just brilliant…I canceled his “Huber”😁 Hope you’re feeling better, my friend, cause we so love and appreciate you…ALL of us- 54 comments
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This was spectacular❣️ I felt every emotion, every pain, every strain, every fear known to man...the whole nine yards!! Now I'm in tears feeling Lucas's pain and Jubal's fear...but I'm shouting to myself that "Dinah's got this" 💯 Luke's gonna be just fine I must agree with Jubal...he should have gave the piece of evil a back massage with a bullet when he had the chance...guess I'm on the other side of 'noble'..🤭 Brilliantly written, Sir Gary
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Oh Lord NO...not my Gary, NEVER you, our favorite❣️
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My feelings towards my dear friend Reid 🤨 And I believe that Reid is going to be the catalyst to outing Lucas to Jubal 🥰 Great chapter...again❣️
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