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I have enjoyed reading your story and what a wonderful surprise to find CJ, Ozzie, and Chipper at the reception. I look forward to reading future stories.
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I'm hoping that your updating of the chapters is a sign that you will resume writings more chapters. I have really enjoyed this story and look forward to reading about the family's California adventures.
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Since the house, apartment, and barn have no heat, wouldn't a radiant heating system utilizing hot water from solar water heaters work?
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This chapter needed more research. Earlier, we were told the games were on the weekends - Saturdays and Sundays. So, the second set of games against Boise State were on Sunday. What court in the US has trials on Sundays? Also, what district attorney would put their victim on the stand without first meeting with them. Also, Boise State did NOT have a baseball team in 2012 or 2013! BSU dropped baseball in 1980.
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I know that I am late to this story, but I also found the choice of the days for Thanksgiving was strange. Most colleges would end instruction late Tuesday, not on Thursday! By 2010, most of the West Coast schools took off the entire week of Thanksgiving off. So, parents would be picking p their college freshmen on Friday afternoon.
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In the last book, Kyle and Blu quickly extended the house to include the pool, the jacuzzi, the outdoor kitchen, and better access to the garage. And they quickly added the Cadillac Escalade to the family transports. With the addition of Jonathon, Brody, and Sage into the family as well as Link moving out of the shared bedroom with Levi. is a new house addition needed with more bedrooms, en suite bathrooms, and a great room/game room where everyone can gather? Also, isn't a nursery needed for the new baby?
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Is there a reason Troy and Grant haven't a new dining room table with more chairs or even more living room seating? It sounds like the group is growing larger to eight persons. Otherwise, it is a great story and I hope that it continues - like fostering or adopting a son!
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I'm puzzled by the name of Devon's twin brother. In some chapters, he is called Josh and in other chapters, he is called Jeff.
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The sheriff is an officer of county government. He would not have any authority inside a U.S. District Court. U.S. marshals serve the bailiff function in federal courtrooms. This is the basis of the whole "sanctuary state" issue. Trump wants city police, county sheriffs, and state police to enforce federal immigration laws and then to house illegals in city/county jails and state prisons free of charge to the feds.
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Thanks for a great chapter! It was nice that you completed the reunion of these two men in one chapter rather than drag it out into two or three chapters. I liked that you gave us more into the backgrounds of Raymond and Daniel. These two have been taking it "slow" for too long. So, jumping into oral sex after some hot french kissing is appropriate. Also, if Daniel's only man-2-man sex has been on trips to Dallas, he has probably learned to quickly transition from kissing to sucking. Also, thanks to Jay T for the longer chapter!
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I've really enjoyed your stories about the Gang and their NOLA locale. I look forward to reading more about further adventures. Thanks!
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Thanks for a great story so far! FYI - the gay village of San Diego is in the Hillcrest area, not Hillside.
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Southern Decadence is the big gay festival for New Orleans during the Labor Day weekend/week. It is hard to believe that any gay bar in the greater New Orleans metro area would not already have some kind of celebration that weekend! Love the story!
