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Eddie just wants to make everyone happy. We'll see his POV later, so hopefully you all can tell me what you think of him and how he comes across.
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The impersonation throws them off for a bit, but there's one thing that Carol missed. And yes, her plans for Wyatt aren't pretty. (You'll have to let me know if my 'medical' stuff is believable enough when we get there )
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Yes, MD is probably going to get worse in everyone's eyes very quickly...You'll all have to let me know what you think of Eddie as you see more of him coming up in future chapters.
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Chapter 10 Bryan couldn't stop himself from pacing the length of his living room. He'd walk back and forth, plop down on the couch for a few minutes, stare at his phone—willing it to ring with Wyatt's number—and then pop back up to pace again. Sarah, for the most part, busied herself in the kitchen, making some sandwiches for them since he'd ignored his rumbling stomach. He'd just jumped up again, walking over to the fireplace he hardly used, when Sarah came out of the kitchen carrying tw
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Aww, that was sweet. It was different to see such a shy vampire--they are so often all 'alpha-like'. Great job!
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Chapter 9 "Are you sure there isn't something we can do?" Sarah intervened, leaning in towards the woman. Sarah obviously sensed his growing temper and was trying to diffuse the situation. Bryan stood impatiently at the counter of the police station, his irritation barely controlled at the woman behind the counter in her crisp blue police uniform and shiny badge who told him there wasn't anything they could do. "Anything?" "As I told you before, sir," Officer Neely's voice was becom
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Marc's dad does come into the picture next chapter. Sorry to keep you so on edge... well, sort of
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Yeah, I think Wyatt had hope that he could reason/argue/etc with Darrin because he knows how he works. This new guy puts his captivity in a whole new light for him.
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Yes, there are two sides running right now that will have to collide eventually... Hope I continue to do their story justice for you all!
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Yep, good guess! Bryan will have a hard time of it with his mom harping in his ear, but he has Sarah to keep him solid.
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The man is a bit of a mystery that will be revealed shortly, but you all are on the right track--can't throw you guys off for long! So glad you enjoyed it and I think I'm ahead enough to post twice a week now, so hopefully you won't have to wait too long.
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Yeah, you'll find out about the cab and Marc's dad soon (but you're right about him). I actually am a few chapters ahead now, so I think I can post twice a week now, probably Sun and Thurs. until I'm done (then I can do every day...)
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hehe, glad you liked it!
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Not knowing is pretty hard, which is why waiting even another 24 hours would be torture...
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So glad I was able to get across his terror and worry effectively. Thanks so much.
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I was hoping to portray his fear and desperation well, so I'm glad you think I did okay. I think that's how I tried to imagine it--what if it happened to my husband or girls, how would I feel? Probably why I'm going through so many tissues for this book...
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I think you're right about mom, she definitely thinks Bryan will get over Wyatt because she really doesn't understand true love. It makes me think I should delve into her relationship with her husband a bit for more insight (have to think about that...)
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I'm glad I was able to get the anguish/panic across well. Thanks.
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It is a long time. I can't imagine having to wait like that to find out about a loved one.
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Chapter 8 Grateful to Sarah for taking charge, Bryan followed her to Marshall Park a couple blocks away. If he didn't busy himself with something, he knew he'd be sitting at Wyatt's wallowing in his guilt. As they walked down the street, his phone rang and he jumped, grabbing it from his pocket. Both he and Sarah anxiously looked at the screen with hope flooding them. His mom. Damn. He felt Sarah deflate a bit next to him as he answered. "Hi, mom." "Hi, honey. How are you?" Her swe
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Happy Birthday! We miss you!
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Writing Tip Writing Tip: Conflict Is Key
craftingmom commented on Renee Stevens's blog entry in Writing World
Great advice! I love stories that wrench my heart. I think I'm managing to get some of that into my stories, at least I hope they aren't a 'snoozefest'. I like the thought of “How can I make this situation worse?” I should work on that -
now that would be a twist--Darrin and Bryan working together! Hehe Glad you are enjoying it.
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hehe, I think you know me well by now
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I think many are suspecting mom by now, not that Darrin doesn't deserve to be suspect after what he's done. So glad you are enjoying it!
