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My wishes; at the end of EVERY chapter there should be a button to return to STORIES. I much prefer chapters with names, not just numbers. This helps with remembering which I had read last. also, each chapter should have the publishing date, for the same reason. I wish authors would use a lot more tags! im looking forward to the revamped site already. For so many years you ve done an amazing job!
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William Harker’s Journal: Entry 27
IBEX commented on MrM's story chapter in William Harker’s Journal: Entry 27
Actually I was waiting for tragedy to befall his parents. They were the only obstacles between himself and immortality. Since no other friends than his dorm mate were ever mentinoed, only the parents would notice any changes in his habits and appearance. Although it seem that maybe foul play could have been involved - possibly by the adversaries of The Prime, and the last of His Childers - Vlad. Our young hero appears truly naive, if not borderline daft, if he not even considered making funeral arrangements..... or he is in a permanent fog and mentag haze, being controled by Vlad? Btw I feel in Chicago leadership might be a vacancy now? And Navius' ring is being retired? -
Cliffie BAD! That being said - did Zac's life force - upon touching Q's feather - just revert to Q? I'll keep watching this space...
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Violin sonatas & sex tips
IBEX commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Violin sonatas & sex tips
Bas serves the function of " Dear Diary..." Oh sorry - journal, it's blokes here, innit? Sadly, he never answers, full of wit and sass! But perchance he's a sleeper? Re-appearing at an unexpected / inopportune moment, as deus ex machina ,or some such literary device? Btw , for me as foreign, non-native reader, the style reminds me much of Nigel Gordon on Awesomedude.org - the Johnny series. I guess it is the locale? Similar language / idioms / landscape... Thoughts? Anyway, I love this slow burning story! -
"Agua...." and then I wept
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I'll ship Elion and Holden...
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Is this a re-write, or a continuation of the Carter Saga I read many years ago, I think on crvboy?
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Battle Royale (Part 3) Whole and Home
IBEX commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Battle Royale (Part 3) Whole and Home
I just HAD to look for a house in New Orleans! Found one on Zillow, suitably aged…. -
Chapter 10 - Cirrus clouds 10.4
IBEX commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 10 - Cirrus clouds 10.4
I must have slept during that lecture - what are The Federation, and The Empire? Both share The Academy, it seems. So who is the senate? -
Oh, Sweet. Finally. All is good in the five sectors now! Wedding bells in the offing….
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when regicide becomes an obligation...
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Thanks for the Matriarch! She currently is the only one that can reset Marc’s head!
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Marc appears now as a self absorbed entitled brat. Not communicating with “his fated Nate, the love of his life..” at all, yet expecting to be fully understood. He has no real corrective yet. All his family treat him as the second coming ( at least of his great grandfather), and he can do no wrong. He single-handedly forced the merger with the Alexander’s, without much auditing, or scrutinising. Whatever he wants he gets, or he marches marines to thwart an unplanned/ unwanted lunch! Enough with juvenile tantrums, Alex stop fawning, grow a spine, and give your mate a good talking to. Standing up for oneself should be something Marc might understand, and respect.
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Chapter 3 - Bread and Circuses 3.3
IBEX commented on RedMoon's story chapter in Chapter 3 - Bread and Circuses 3.3
Guys, help me out - “we wolves not meeting pack expectations…” - where and how is the two Nyxes outcast status explained? It seems they are just run of the mill black Nix pack members? -
In Arthur's homelands Richter means "Judge"
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I notice a lot of main characters are somewhere between Asperger’s, anger issues, or general erratic behaviour. Prone to overreactions. But at least they are all fluent in upwards of 4 languages, have great business acumen and experience, and typically are pretty loaded by the time they hit their early twenties. The occasional catamaran, or trimaran in their portfolio further endear them to me!
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Oh, and while frantically waiting for the next re-organized chapter, a good long new episode of Lone Wolf Ranch might do me some good!
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I feel chapter deprivation creeping in...
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… it seems Sevo has a serious abdominal condition. Maybe it’ll be up to Hansi to save his friends life this time around?
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..also you may want to decide if it's Caleb - or Carl!
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Cliffie bad! Only a longerer chapter, coming soonerer can make up for it!
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I'm disappointed. Truly, and deeply disappointed. That Kai, our not quite anal retentive, but very observant, and in his own way - which we happen to like so much - conservative and eloquent Kai ... confuses adapt, and adopt! Shame! Blasphemously confounded lapsing linguist! He'd better clean up his verbal acting, before shacking up with our not so retentive anally accomplished wordsmith. Before ADAPTING to fussy Adam's little quirks, before ADOPTING Arya in his heart....before! Mind you!
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While I’m happy to have my puns detected, and cherished by a discerning audience, your emphasis, almost a typesetter’s equivalent of blaring it out loud, is concerning! Think of the children! I trust you to keep your delight about the one with the golf reference, referencing to the randy doc’s good fortune muted now….
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What cruelty! What shameless, and utter cruelty! There comes a age inappropriately foul mouthed doc along - and gets a hole in one! Before our erudite prospective lovebirds even manage a first surreptitious phone call! Somehow I wanted Adam to visit his cherished pen-pal at Walter Reeds.... before the discharge.
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