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  1. Thirdly

    Chapter 1

    ...but could have also been written by like five other people. Glad you enjoyed reading it. Thank you. I just wanted to focus on that one snapshot of a moment and felt anything more would have been surplus. Flash fiction. I'm forever lacking the terminology. Thanks, Jason!
  2. Thirdly

    Chapter 1

    Success! If at least something made you laugh, I'm content. Glad you enjoyed reading it. It's nice to know when the other person feels the same. I was snickering the whole time I thought it up. I knew some others would also enjoy writing about hidden feelings and confessions, but I knew no one would have thought of a confession playing out exactly like that. Glad you liked it, Aaron! 🥰
  3. Thirdly

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    Right? His thoughts were going right there, too! 🤣 Thank you. They'll be fine. They have a strong foundation. Thank you, Gary! Thank you!
  4. Thirdly

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    Glad you thought so. Hope it made you chuckle. I had a hard time pinning the right people down this year, too, so I can't even say anything. I was one hundred percent the first entry (though I might not be next time to shake things up!). Gave the mods a good laugh about it and everything. I'm already picturing it played out as a sketch now. Thank you, Cane!
  5. Thirdly

    Chapter 1

    Thank you! I hope you join us next time, too! Just don't tell us if you are or not, as it still has to be a secret. I wish! 🤣 Hope I was one of them. You could have easily have written something like this, too. I knew you'd find me out somehow. I wasn't hiding as hard this time since last time I wasn't easily caught. "And I would have gotten away with it, too, if it weren't for you meddling kids!" 🤣
  6. Thirdly

    Epilogue

    Hopefully it was a smoother read than the first time if you did? You should have seen the look of complete and utter despair on my face when I realized that while the stories themselves had only one POV all the way through, each one alternated from first to third in the collection. I had to change this one, my anthology piece, Suspicious Seaweed, AND that one oneshot Sparkling Water. But I did it. 😂
  7. "Are you sure about this?" Cove asked, his voice trembling with a mixture of excitement and nerves. Golden sunlight streamed through the kitchen window, casting shifting patterns across the cluttered table. Instructions and tools were scattered everywhere—a testament to both our determination and uncertainty. "Yeah, it says right here that we have to use the Allen wrench for that part," I replied, tapping the pamphlet for emphasis. "We've been following along page by page…mostly." My hands
  8. Too cute. I loved it. 🥰
  9. That's one way of putting it. Think the short double drop of Busch Garden's Shiekra roller coaster.
  10. That's one way of putting it. Rut? 🤣
  11. Thirdly

    Prologue

    ...opens mouth to say something and closes it again.
  12. Do what you gotta do. 😂
  13. I was hiding to not say any spoilers.
  14. Thirdly

    Prologue

    That, too.
  15. Thirdly

    Prologue

    Lee steered the ship. I was the Smee to his Captain Hook. Wait, does that make sense?
  16. Thirdly

    Prologue

    See, we speak the same language.
  17. Thirdly

    Prologue

    Only if you ever have to publish it somewhere you plan to sell is when you'd have to deviate from naming brands or celebrities. Just changing the name a bit would work (example: Lion Allendes instead of Leon lol). It doesn't really matter here, though. Unless you're writing a premium story maybe?
  18. Thirdly

    Chapter 1

    I'd so be there (if you post another part or a spinoff).
  19. Thirdly

    Chapter 1

    I will never apologize for this. Ever. I'm also only like a quarter serious when I tell people they should have smuttier scenes. The stories don't really need the added smut. I'm just a perv.
  20. Thirdly

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    Now, now. Don't be afraid, hermano. My comments and reviews are always my candid first impressions. Anything outside of that is just me talking out of my bum. 🤣
  21. Holy crap! And I was still guessing all wrong left and right. 😂I also knew like 4 entries that I refused to list because they were freebies and everything! And yay, @impunity!!
  22. Thirdly

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    And that was before I even realized it was you that wrote it. I was so freaking impressed. You do just keep reaching new heights with your writing.
  23. Happy accidents lead to happy little trees? 😂 You can do it, Bennie.
  24. I would squish you between my boobs whenever you want. 🤣Likely while brushing and braiding your hair.
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