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  1. drpaladin

    Chapter 13

    It sounds delightfully frenetic. Finn fixes broken things.
  2. drpaladin

    Chapter 13

    RE: The Swinging Monkey Which one does Orel see standing on their head?
  3. drpaladin

    Chapter 13

    I hope you have a helmet.
  4. drpaladin

    Chapter 13

    Orel needs one of those really old movies. Theda Bara from A Fool There Was (1915). "Kiss me, My Fool."
  5. drpaladin

    Chapter 13

    Oliver has a lifeline his sense of duty is making him unlikely to grab. Finn is so obtuse to his lifelong inevitability to be Orel's one and only it's making us all scream. And poor Orel is overthinking the whole thing. Triple sigh.
  6. A life, like a house, is only as strong as its foundation.
  7. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    Thank you, Topher! Everyone please keep comments strictly within the bounds of the story, stay far away from threats and we'll all be cheerful.
  8. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    If I had cut corners, I wouldn't be so bummed out. I ate less then half of it, and part of that was chewed to a mass of fiber and spit into a bowl. I got ripped off by a faceless butcher. I waited a month to eat this trash. Rant over.
  9. drpaladin

    Chapter 19

    Hopefully before the dogs and cats have the yarn tangled into an unrecoverable mess.
  10. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    BTW- I was delayed in reading this chapter by the most disappointing steak of my life. Carefully aged, seasoned, and cooked; the taste was there, but the thing was tough as shoe leather.
  11. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    Artistry, real artistry, requires a profound fusion with the artist's emotions. We witnessed Tommy's strength here. He rebounded from fragility to resolute Warrior of Ice. He may be adopted, but he IS the son of his fathers. Andrew, looking down the toothy maw of the US Navy, was reduced to a tiny footnote. He didn't mind. I KNOW carries on to a new generation.
  12. We're in early 1802.
  13. Yes, 15 in October 1791, not sure of his birth month.
  14. George was fifteen in 1791, so he was born in 1776.
  15. You mean the large number after the $. At Hellmark, nothing is free.
  16. drpaladin

    Chapter 15

    No playing hockey? Did anyone say so?
  17. drpaladin

    Chapter 12

    The MIDL? Are they in it? The middle?
  18. drpaladin

    Chapter 12

    Orel would be horrified.
  19. drpaladin

    Chapter 12

    I recall running into the scion of one of the local prominent families. He was doing service calls for the cable TV outfit they owned sans silver spoon. No clue what sin he did to raise their ire, but it never stopped. His sister got the money, he died and didn't even get a stone in the family plot. Just erased from their line.
  20. drpaladin

    Chapter 12

    I don't know. Tarquin seems to be watching all the suspects. Vic even tailed Oliver. And Orel working atTimmies is likely the talk of the town. Another thing he'll see as an embarrassment.
  21. drpaladin

    Chapter 12

    OMG! I posted it here?
  22. drpaladin

    Chapter 12

    You really want to traumatize him?
  23. drpaladin

    Chapter 12

    Hmm... getting eaten could get interesting.
  24. drpaladin

    Chapter 12

    See post on waterproof keyboards.
  25. drpaladin

    Chapter 12

    The poor garage floor.
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