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  1. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    And I was off thinking Gilbert and Sullivan did well using handle rather than knob.
  2. drpaladin

    Chapter 3

    There you are!
  3. drpaladin

    Chapter 3

    Fenn has been beaten down so long he expects it now. He does need to brighten up. Nobody likes a scowly face and it seems a habit.
  4. Didn't you mean the No Bell Prize?
  5. drpaladin

    Chapter 13

    Welcome to the madhouse.
  6. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    With Andrew now an Admiral, this seems a good place for some Gilbert and Sullivan.
  7. drpaladin

    Chapter 2

    @dragonthusiast Where are you?? It's always nice to see the author kicking around in here.
  8. drpaladin

    Chapter 2

    Keeping someone in ignorance to maintain control and profit is the greatest sin of all. Nearly starving Fenn has kept him weak and unable to feel his full power. Ain needs him to face this new threat.
  9. drpaladin

    Chapter 1

    An intriguing start and we have yet to meet our hapless protagonist. This looks to be a good one.
  10. drpaladin

    Chapter 13

    Like Finn watches Pornhub.
  11. drpaladin

    Chapter 19

    Nah, just light an end and sit back to watch the glow.
  12. drpaladin

    Chapter 13

    Garment Aquisition Protocol? AKA GAP?
  13. drpaladin

    Chapter 13

    To keep us on the edge of our seat?
  14. drpaladin

    Chapter 13

    Poor Orel doesn't seem like a top. Perhaps it could be a total break from Finn's unfortunate past to lead for once.
  15. drpaladin

    Chapter 13

    It sounds delightfully frenetic. Finn fixes broken things.
  16. drpaladin

    Chapter 13

    RE: The Swinging Monkey Which one does Orel see standing on their head?
  17. drpaladin

    Chapter 13

    I hope you have a helmet.
  18. drpaladin

    Chapter 13

    Orel needs one of those really old movies. Theda Bara from A Fool There Was (1915). "Kiss me, My Fool."
  19. drpaladin

    Chapter 13

    Oliver has a lifeline his sense of duty is making him unlikely to grab. Finn is so obtuse to his lifelong inevitability to be Orel's one and only it's making us all scream. And poor Orel is overthinking the whole thing. Triple sigh.
  20. A life, like a house, is only as strong as its foundation.
  21. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    Thank you, Topher! Everyone please keep comments strictly within the bounds of the story, stay far away from threats and we'll all be cheerful.
  22. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    If I had cut corners, I wouldn't be so bummed out. I ate less then half of it, and part of that was chewed to a mass of fiber and spit into a bowl. I got ripped off by a faceless butcher. I waited a month to eat this trash. Rant over.
  23. drpaladin

    Chapter 19

    Hopefully before the dogs and cats have the yarn tangled into an unrecoverable mess.
  24. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    BTW- I was delayed in reading this chapter by the most disappointing steak of my life. Carefully aged, seasoned, and cooked; the taste was there, but the thing was tough as shoe leather.
  25. drpaladin

    Chapter 16

    Artistry, real artistry, requires a profound fusion with the artist's emotions. We witnessed Tommy's strength here. He rebounded from fragility to resolute Warrior of Ice. He may be adopted, but he IS the son of his fathers. Andrew, looking down the toothy maw of the US Navy, was reduced to a tiny footnote. He didn't mind. I KNOW carries on to a new generation.
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