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  1. drpaladin

    Chapter 10

    I get the feeling Graeme needs Sam as much or more as Sam needs him. Graeme touched him like the caress of a lover. Does Sam remind him of his former companion?
  2. drpaladin

    Chapter 10

    Sam got his wish, but be careful what you wish for. Graeme is offering much more than Sam expected. These fears of the unknown and the recent trauma will not be dispelled easily.
  3. drpaladin

    Chapter 24

    Curly Joe only met Madame Woo once and she left a permanent impression.
  4. drpaladin

    Chapter 23

    Not I, but I like danger.
  5. The sex in GA stories is typically quite vigorous.
  6. drpaladin

    Chapter 24

    They've just arrived and already thrust into two traps, Dottie and Madame Woo.
  7. drpaladin

    Chapter 24

    Oh no. Fah Lo Suee, Dr. Fu Manchu's daughtwr.
  8. drpaladin

    Chapter 23

    I suspect Dottie already knows where everyone is. Have you noticed everyone who matters already knows everything about Hugo and Stoker when they meet them? As to the black card, would you sell an endless stack of signed blank checks?
  9. drpaladin

    Chapter 23

    I see you changed the cover art. I like this one better.
  10. drpaladin

    Chapter 23

    Challenge? I didn't even raise a glove.
  11. drpaladin

    Chapter 23

    Aren't paradoxes unlikely since everything resets when they leave a timeline?
  12. Shall we go to tropecal climes?
  13. To paraphrase Led Zeppelin, The Trope Remains the Same.
  14. When you have to wave a sign it's n joke, it's not funny.
  15. drpaladin

    Chapter 23

    We finally get to the practicalities of being a couple. It's only doable by remaining anachronauts. What will Dottie demand in the future for the limitless credit of the black card?
  16. IIt may be a trope, but we expect our heroes to win in the end.
  17. They were still in use long after WWI
  18. I smile is an anagram, not a simile.
  19. drpaladin

    Chapter 22

    Of course it is. "One pill makes you larger..." Alice was offered the pill before Neo. Hugo says he wants out, but he already has his prize.
  20. drpaladin

    Chapter 22

    As the saying goes, still waters run deep. We, and Hugo get a new appreciation of Stoker's true depth. We also get a disturbing glimpse behind the benign masks some of the major players wear. Hugo will never trust surface impressions again.
  21. drpaladin

    Chapter 22

    "A strange game. The only winning move is not to play."
  22. drpaladin

    Chapter 9

    In the early chapters Graeme said it had been many years since he lost his squire. There must be a deeper reason than being far from home he hasn't gotten another. Perhaps it's also linked to why he doesn't remove his helmet and shuns his own image.
  23. drpaladin

    Chapter 9

    There it is. My squire.
  24. I'm going through a phrase myself. No dog and pony shows please.
  25. Why was the golfer banned from the golf course? He kept using metaphors
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