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Chapter 41 - Music
drpaladin commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 41 - Music
The song lyrics had a dark undertone to me. Whose ship is there and where are they? -
The signs weren't good and Pete's instincts were pretty solid. In the end, Mitch was trying to take advantage of a younger boy and only partially pulled it off.
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They got the bad guys. They won't poke much into who helped. My guess is those fingerprints would be as enigmatic as the forms they used.
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One can imagine a warrior dragon won't intimidate the Seandreans seeing the last dragon they slayed was 'only a true.' Now is when the triangle comes into play and Mr. Full of Himself meets real dragon slayers. Unless... Garnet thinks the young ones can take him. What is the breath weapon of Red Dragons?
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Fortunately my temptations only tend to be expensive and not ruinous.
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Full disclosure: Reading ahead is a temptation I only occasionally resist. I ascribe to Oscar Wilde's theory of the best way to overcome temptation is to give in to it.
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maudlin - Word of the Day - Tue May 7, 2024
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Fortunately, George Sanders was there with a tart tongue to put them in their place. -
Seeing them all do the rescue so smoothly makes me think Devin learned his hero routine by example.
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Another interesting fact we learn is there are thirteen dragon races, so there are still some we haven't seen.
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Rovnar, the trickster, has thrown our group into the thick of it. This Great Red rogue is a new threat we weren't aware of. With the casualness and certitude they approach fighting "only a few dragons", is victory not assured?
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Chapter 40 - The Eighth Location
drpaladin commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 40 - The Eighth Location
Souki and Lyoth were quite the swashbucklers to have settled down to such a placid life for so long. Someone dropped the ball on replenishing stores at the safe house. There are still some places which are oasises of peace. -
From the sound of it, the MIB blocks attempts to investigate his former life. So no alerts will go out and Bradley is getting the static thingy.
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Well, the ploy with Laird worked and they're in the Guild. Now they need to convince Ramsey to sell the dilapidated inn. The beggar is disturbing. He seems to see through their enchantment while knowing it's there.
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wrought iron - Word of the Day - Mon May 6, 2024
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Wrought iron is iron which has been heated and worked multiple times. -
Yep. Connor and Nathan are related brats. M is undeniably pregnant and seems to be going three times faster than normal. The only thing which shifted Connor out of his Angry Child Mode was M's seizure. Somebody please tie him down and slap the pee wallowing crap out of him.
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I don't know. Doctor Clickety-Click may wear tin foil hats in his spare time.
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I think Mitch is thinking more with his libido than his brain.
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As a site moderator, I do want to remind wveryone story comments should steer clear of debates on political things except when they are explicitly brought up in the storyline as an issue.
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Nathan may have been quite efficient and effective in his work, but knowing all about your target is part of the job. You'd need to know their resources. It's due diligence. It also should have been unnecessary and unwanted on both sides for Nathan and Helmsley to meet in person.
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I'm betting this will be a fast growing baby.
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antagonist - Word of the Day - Sun May 5, 2024
drpaladin commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
GA has an impressive array of vile antagonists spawned by the fertile imagination of our authors. -
A nine year old gave his only dollar to an unknown man he thought was homeless and got a surprise. https://www.cbsnews.com/amp/news/boy-gets-shopping-spree-after-giving-away-one-dollar-kelvin-ellis-matt-busbice-louisiana/
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Mother did warn Connor it would be hard, but it was an understatement which would qualify as a Britishism.
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M wanted it and M got the whole enchilada. And unless they beam that sucker out, it's going to be a huge pain in M's backside. The entire Doctor's visit was a hoot and a half. The doc probably already has dreams of being famous.
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And here I thought it was only in this backward place.
