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I see great promise in your poetry. You have a beautiful ear for rhythm as well as rhyme structure. I always say that great art comes from great pain. If this can be any solace to you and your pain then do take it. Make good from bad. Congratulations on your first entry. Mine was also a poem and it opened a door of great happiness here at GA. Welcome!
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Sports Hotel Lavazè: Melting Ice
MrM commented on MrM's story chapter in Sports Hotel Lavazè: Melting Ice
I couldn't leave you guys hanging anymore. I'm not Comsie! Hehehe! -
Sports Hotel Lavazè: Melting Ice
MrM commented on MrM's story chapter in Sports Hotel Lavazè: Melting Ice
Thank you for not only reading but thinking about my little story so much that you would miss it. Yes, frozen lava rocks. Funny, they turn right back into lava when the right amount of heat is applied. -
"It just hurts too much, Billy . . ."
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Snowflake ~~~~~~~~~~ "B-Brian?" My voice sounds so stupid, but then I feel somewhat stupefied at the moment. He . . . is here! This is not another dream. This is not another time when I think I see someone and, in a drunken haze, think it is him only to stumble over the mistaken person and make a fool of myself again. This is no fantasy only made real with a liberal dose of cannabis burned in the sauna or with a snort of crystal meth. He . . . has come! Yet, tho
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Not to mention Gone From Daylight, Jesse 101, A Class By Himself, etc, etc. my Comsie.
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New GFD ebook getting ready for 'hump day'!
MrM replied to Comicality's topic in Comicality's Shack Clubhouse's Cafe
That f'king gorgeous!!!! BITE ME! BITE ME! BE MY SIRE, Comsie!! -
Chapter 58 - Call Me, Maybe
MrM commented on Comicality's story chapter in Chapter 58 - Call Me, Maybe
Out of Chicago, Comsie. I wonder if they read something of yours. "And we climb all around You stare into my eyes And watch me drown inside You whisper to me softly as I lie . . ." In Your Room by. . . . Airiel -
See! It's not just because I'm drunk and stoned all the time that I see this stuff! It really happens!!!! I hooked mine to my Imgur account which seems to work pretty good for here.
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What a remarkable project, Cynus! I think I'll listen to the rest of it on Spotify!
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So, I went back and read a cute little spinoff story Comicality did called Kiss of an Angel which has perhaps the cutest character he's ever created. He is the little sweetheart called Ariel who is madly in love with Tyler, the Blonde Bombshell, who also happens to be in love with 'his angel' Ariel. Being bored and needing something new to listen to while I worked today I came up with yet another soundtrack inspired by this story. Comsie seems to be doing that to me lately. Anyway, here is one of the more beautiful love songs from the track listing. I'll post the playlist later if there is any interest. The song is a good sample of the dreamlike gee-whiz-sigh quality of this listing. This is "Dream About Me" by The Depreciation Guild:
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My signature image has suddenly disappeared and has been replaced with a ?
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Brian has been known to do that to people and their things.
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Quite possibly. I know a couple that would just love to suck his, erm, blood?
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Speaking of Cheesecake or maybe Beefcake. Brian Chesney says he misses you. He also wishes you, Valkyrie, the Happiest and Sexiest of Birthdays!
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Well, the one I chose I have no idea who he is. I looked up '14 year old boy with brown hair' and this boy came up and said 'Brandon' to me. I color corrected the eyes to be Hazel but his eye color is originally Violet . . . Very rare. Only Elizabeth Taylor had that eye color from my reckoning. Comsie's idea for Brandon is Randy Shelly at 15. I will release a cover I made with his image in later books in this series. I find it somewhat disturbing that Comsie also has Randy as his idea for 'Michael' in Gone From Daylight. Those that read that story know of whom I'm talking about.
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Thank you so much!
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"I am Pan. Welcome to my Floating Island." His mouth says between pink lips and impossibly white teeth. His smile is disconcerting being that it's punctuated with two rather long fang-like canines. It lends the unsurpassingly handsome face a feralness that is more than a little weird. It does not help that the young man's aqua blue eyes have a wild wolf-like quality to them as they bore into my own. "I - I, uh . . ." I stammer as my throat closes and goes numb. At the sound of my
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Blessed is the love I need. With rolling drums the loveless bleed. Just having an Emo flashback. Tough times make me creative so Comsie inspired another playlist out of me. He is a Muse: Loveless: The Jimmy LaPlane Experience
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Hang in there. Things change. They always do.
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I find Comsie's character Jimmy LaPlane a haunting figure. A representative of all those little guys out there that get bullied, but are, in there own way, bullies in themselves only more subtle. The obsessives, stalkers, and manipulators that want to make you the solution to their problems. At the same time your heart breaks for that lost and broken boy who just can't seem to catch a break. Perhaps he would not be so needy if he had been given the blessed love he needed. Instead the rolling drums of his broken heart bleed. In his honor I came up with this musical tribute to him. It is a setlist of songs that I think tells the story of his heart. I hope Comsie and the rest of you guys enjoy it. This is ~~~~~
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I've lost five and each one was special in their individual ways. I believe we will be with them again in a place where there is no death beyond the rainbow bridge.
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Thank you more for reading and commenting! The story burns in me, I won't stop unless I become a spirit in which case I'll possess someone and finish! I hope to make the romance between Billy and Brandon sing louder than the one between Romeo and Julius, er I mean Juliet!
