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Spectacular reintroduction to the realms and as expected our two newcomers are sufficiently overwhelmed and as always the mundane empty belly overawes the spectacular. Wonderful as always and thank you again for sharing, reading a new chapter is always a bright point in my day.
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Like an onion you are building layer upon layer of convolution and obfuscation. We hope that you yourself do not become entangled within your own Gordian intricacies. Well done as always and thank you for sharing this latest chapter with us.
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More fun and games, confusion to the enemy and all that stuff. Exhilarating chapter as usual, thank you for sharing your art. Very well done.
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Clever word scribbler, I saw not this direction in your meanderings. Another awesome chapter and I am, as always, eagerly awaiting the continuation of this convolution of move and counter move. Well done and thank you for sharing.
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Enquiring minds are curious about what has or is about to happen to the remainder of the overt/covert surveillance team? Let the games seriously commence. Well done with this exciting next installment, thank you our man.
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This is the perfect response, the smile was bonus territory.
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An awesome build up chapter, quietly wondering over here when you are actually going to get to the good bits? Again thank you for sharing with us another intriguing chapter, well done as always.
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Tank traps will stop bulldozers and so will sugar in the fuel tank, just saying. Another awesome chapter as we now expect. With the bad guys not entirely certain what is going to happen next we can only hope that ugly occurs to them in the fullness of time.
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Extraordinary counter espionage measures being exercised, now we almost wish to see aggressive reprisals undertaken to ensure the safety and privacy of the team. Awesome chapter again and thank you for sharing your wonderful story.
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Another awesome deposit or is this like an onion skin layer upon layer? The excitement is building, well for us it is, the author of course is cheating because he has seen into the future but never reveals the whole story in one hit. Poor Michael, we have no idea how he fared when the monkeys flitted off in the Ley Lines. So looking forward to the next installment, well done that man.
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Another excellent chapter, thank you. I sense a couple more "fluff" chapters whist out wily author plots evil twists and manoeuvres to outrage and entrap us with his conniving language. Thank you for sharing and leading us further into this fun and exciting world.
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You are having fun again my friend well done because that makes reading even more exciting for we, the readers. Happy New Year as well as from here at this time it is now 01-01-2024 @ 01:50
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Another awesome addendum abounding with fun and serious interludes as well as potentially dangerous ones. Thank you for sharing this latest chapter in your marvelous story.
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Penguins are smelly critters up close however still cute to watch as for seals and sea lions they are just scary monsters that need to be left well alone. Another awesome adventure, avidly awaiting audience appreciating authorial articulation. Thank you for sharing this next chapter in this tale of fun and adventure.
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I see a gathering army of wild life coming to also defend the sacred lands perhaps. Well thought out preparation for exciting things to come. Thank you for sharing this exciting tale.
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More malevolent manoeuvrings and traumatising innocents, the convoluted webs you weave keep my interest high and expectations higher. Thank you for sharing and jolly well done.
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Iced water! You are a meanie. Using other world magic to enhance the ceremonial dance was certainly inspirational, a brilliant spectacle. Well done my friend and thank you. My enjoyment continues and expectation increases with each chapter.
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Still have flashbacks of "The Joker" by Steve Miller Band LOL
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Awesome again! There are always unpleasant elements in the constabulary, regardless of what country they are from. Well done my friend and thank you for sharing your story with us.
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An interesting start, I am looking forward to seeing more of this tale. Very well done and thank you for sharing your story with us.
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Awesome start, I am so very pleased that you have taken up the metaphorical pen again and have every intention of enthralling us with you wonderful word-smithery. Just awesome cool!
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An awesome start, well paced and realistic. Please keep the chapters flowing.
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Now we just need this or its equivalent to occur in the real world. Continuing; well done I am enjoying your story immensely, than k you.
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The answer is CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! To fail to do so could result in catastrophic actions being taken against the person of the author..................
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Bloody hell! An awesome construction I now eagerly await the continuation of your tale. Very well done, thank you for sharing your story.
