Dathi
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Another excellent chapter, thank you very much for sharing this with us. I am looking forward to reading the future chapters.
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Excellent second chapter getting things off to a tentative but positive start. Very well done and thank you for this chapter. You have given yourself a very wide scope to play with as far as developing this story goes and I am looking forward to its continuance.
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Excellent start, I am hoping that the following chapters are going to equally engaging. Thank you for this story.
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Chapter 4 - "My First and My Last"
Dathi commented on Wade's story chapter in Chapter 4 - "My First and My Last"
Warm fuzzies, nicely and thoughtfully written chapter. Looking forward to reading the next instalment. Thank you very much for a well written chapter. -
You move from strength to strength, awesome. I am awaiting developments eagerly, so is this an actual attack or is the planets own meteorology just having a spit? We hopefully will find out in due course. Thank you for this awesome chapter.
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Chapter 2 - "Things Make Sense"
Dathi commented on Wade's story chapter in Chapter 2 - "Things Make Sense"
Captivating, engaging chapter. I'm hooked, very well done. Thank you. -
Exciting chapter, awesome and thank you. I am eagerly awaiting the next chapters arrival.
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Lots of Secrets in This Bar
Dathi commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in Lots of Secrets in This Bar
Well done, another engaging and interesting chapter, many intriguing possibilities can grow from this juncture. I await future developments with keen anticipation and eagerness. Thank you for another excellent chapter. -
Warm fuzzies, awesome. Nice to know that the boss wasn't such an arse(ass) after all. Thank you for another exciting chapter.
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Thank you for your story, it is engaging and believable, altogether a thoroughly enjoyable read.
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A very good start, this shows the potential for an incredibly exciting story, carry on and keep it going. Have fun doing this. Thank you.
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Wonderful, a rollicking good fantasy tale packed full of real down to earth experiences. The lucid dreams worked well at reducing the discovery trauma. Well conceived and executed, thank you.
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Cliff hangers ugh! Well written and engaging, I hope that Lester has come to a suitably unpleasant end. Thank you for your story.
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This is an amazing base from which to build and develop a truly robust and riveting story. Very well done, thank you
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Awesome, well done! I have just completed the marathon of reading the work from chapter 1, today. Wonderful, robust believable characters with believable lives, bloody brilliant. Keep going and again, very well done.
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I'm hooked, you have put this together nicely, I dislike cliff hangers but this is one that show potential for many positive ways forward. Please keep up the good work, thank you.
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What Are We Walking Toward?
Dathi commented on Robert Rex's story chapter in What Are We Walking Toward?
Bastard! Well done as always. I hope you are planning something unpleasant to that prick of an assistant director. An Alligator encounter is an early thought comes to mind! -
Chapter 9: H-Power on the Arctic Circle
Dathi commented on David McLeod's story chapter in Chapter 9: H-Power on the Arctic Circle
Extremely well considered fantasy, topical and logical in it's time flow. Well done, I am enjoying reading your story very much. Thank you. -
My only observation is that the death of the criminals was too quick and far too painless. Otherwise very well structured and a pleasured to read, I look forward to the continuance of the tale
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Well handled, the death of a friend albeit in reverse would be extremely stressful for anyone so the chaos of loosing all of ones previous life. Like all the previous chapters it is nicely structured and flows with good pace and does not become bogged down. This is an excellent read.
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You tell a great story and the characters have good depth which makes for a very enjoyable read.
