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This is an interesting start and the style of your writing certainly piques my interest I am eager to see where you take this story. Thank you for sharing and very well done.
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So now we're ready for the huffing and puffing to discommode a certain super-egotistical pest. Awesome chapter, thank you and while I impatiently await the next exciting installment I shall watch the bumble bees, honey bees and red admiral butterflies working on the cherry plum tree. Just wonderful!
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Well done and thank you for sharing, I would love to say chapter however in reality it is but an egotistical paragraph. I sincerely hope that you seriously return to complete this story not that you other tales are not good it is just that I especially like the essence of this one.
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I would like to think that there is more to this tale awaiting merely quill and ink to complete their awakening. An intriguing take on the afterlife, certainly more entertaining than sitting playing harp all day! Well done and I hope that you do contemplate continuing this very fine story. Thank you and very well done.
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Maurice! I still hear that sounding as sung in the song (the name I cannot remember), it is slightly disconcerting. A re-ordering of the power flows, revitalising the deadlands, a new realm lord arises methinks, a balancing of the energies, a moderating influence, a calming of aggressive natures! Bloody awesome chapter thank you for sharing it. Well done and whilst I shall sleep until the next one I shall be eagerly watching for it's arrival, impatiently I may add!!
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Yeah right! With a dragon adding the heat I suppose! We know what you authory types are like.
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Awesome chapter, ugly cliffhanger. I almost answered the question and then though I had better not as my insight may get me into hot water again. Thank you for this amazing tale very well done and I am eagerly awaiting the next installment!
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Well now we know what the ritual is for, waking the dragon! The extra barrier was unexpected, thankfully dreamtime know how won the day. Excellent chapter thank you, very well done.
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Awesome yet again! High King as dad that may take some serious cogitating. Deep breath and take it all in stride, bash the worst bad guy first and then deal with what is left. I am so very much enjoying this story, thank you and very well done. I am eagerly awaiting the next installment.
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Excellent, fresh water, shame the monsters are inedible. Sensible of the King to send the chaos incursions back to the instigators of them, an entirely appropriate response in my opinion. Awesome chapter, thank you and very well done.
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I was only referring to certain anatomical features however there are a series of books written that include dragons of various colours and not only by the late lamented Mrs McCaffrey.
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Comeuppance for the wretch seems imminent, good job too. Everyone opposed just needs to stick to the current game plan and all will come right in the end. Maurice had better have some large brass bits if he is going to be a decisive factor in the impending confrontation. Another awesome chapter as we have come to expect. Thank you for sharing this tale, very well done.
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i just hope that the journey is not too long as 10kg water per day just for the humans and what about the same for Krol so the water weight alone is staggering for a journey of any significant length. Reliance on snow melt can also be problematic, there are worse things than "yellow" snow, are the the dead lands desert or are they diseased, the mountain snow may be plentiful but is the water potable? LOL yes I know there is a "B" word that describes me but someone has to worry about the logistics. Excellent chapter again as we all expect. Thank you for sharing you wonderful story with us although I am still trying to get my head around Maurice the dragon.
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Maurice, Maurice!! You called a Dragon; Maurice? Belief is beggared, how much less Dragon like I could not think of. Whilst the current parlance tend to retrieve the image of an old Morrie Minor or the such, Draconic it certainly does not sound. Falstaff or Fistandantalus are certainly nearer the mark but no, we get Maurice. Well done, an awesome chapter, as usual. Thank you for sharing you story.
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Well done, another great chapter, perhaps missing some of what is befalling Ravenargar; has he been delivered to Realm Lord Maynor's Keep? The plan of action for when the party achieves the Realm Lord's Keep should perhaps be outlined as well. Thank you for sharing your story.
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Brutally inquisitive🤣
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I have studied the habits of the Inquisitors closely and have had time to improve on their processes.
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Slimy scumbag! Boil him in oil, slowly over several millennia. Mr Author; please do not delay your scripting and swiftly resolve our dilemma please.
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Interesting start please keep this on going, well done with an interesting twist.
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Me fears abseiling gear maybe still be requisite!
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Do we need to start pounding papyrus sheets for you to use or is it someone to sharpen quills that is required? Faster scribe, faster! Glorious aspect is supposed to be inspirational, go fly within the draco inspired imaginings and quickly construct a magisterial masterpiece of written wranglings to contented countenance our faces fill. Well done and thank you for sharing your story with us. D.
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Fun and learning in concert strengthen the retention of learned ability. Awesome chapter again as always and think Dead World equals Moat!? <chuckle> The realms shake up is going to be massive and I, with puppyish anticipation, await its exposure.
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Awesome chapter, very well done. Thank you for sharing your intriguing talent.
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Another glorious chapter, as always! Thank you for sharing and well done. There no secrets revealed this time LOL.
