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Dathi

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  1. A thoroughly enthralling read, any follower of the Dragon Riders of Pern will feel completely at home here. A tale told with a similar energy and verve as Anne McCaffery. This story is captivating and can easily lead one to lose track of time and responsibilities, another mark of an outstanding author. Read! Enjoy!
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    Prologue

    An interesting start with plenty of excitement and huge scope to expand in many directions that I can see. I am very excited to see where you are going to take this tale. Very well done and thank you for sharing this story.
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    Silyn

    Still intriguing, still definitely wanting much more.
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    The story

    Awesome right up until some gormless goblin snot puts vinegar on the beautifully delicately fried morsels of tuberous tastiness. An entertaining piece of fun, well done.
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    Symanthus

    Still fascinating, there is a feeling of suspense growing that makes me even more intrigued and definitely want to see more (certainly more than three!!). I am certainly curious as to how you are going to continue this tales development.
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    Jared

    A fascinating piece and I am absolutely intrigued to see where you are going with this.
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    The Tower

    An interesting start, I am looking forward to seeing how you develop this tale.
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    Chapter 1 - Cole

    Awesome start and I am eager to see where your tale goes to.
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    Happy New Year!

    Just under four hours to go as at my typing, New Zealand here for the curious
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    Chapter 7

    Were I Mahmoud, I would be sending the boss the following; " F U I quit. M. " Being part of the team that found the tomb of Alexandros would almost guarantee tenure in any University with an Antiquities department. Thoroughly fascinating tale absolutely well done, thankfully you are skipping over the tedious bits, the incessescent clearing of sand and rubble that is required just to get t o the good bits.
  11. Good start, I am now intrigued as to where you are going to take this tale. Thank you for sharing and very well done.
  12. I am hoping that Dani is able to bring a good dose of "sunshine" into these peoples lives and change them forever. Thank you for sharing this somewhat dour tale, very well done.
  13. While I am ecstatic that you are providing a sequel to Sidewinder, for me it is Tuesdays that now have me excited, mostly because by the time you issue; we here have already advanced into the next day. Having midwived horses before I can tell you that it is a very messy and stressful event but seriously rewarding. Well done and thank you for sharing this tale.
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    Reunited

    A more fitting end I would have difficulty imagining, I was so very pleased with Mallex's demise. Very well done and thank you for sharing your story.
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    Chapter 18

    Mongrels that prey on children and the mentally challenged have no place among the living. I do hope dear Author that these ones are going to arrive at a sticky end. In all other respects an awesome tale that is very well written.
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    Comfort

    A little often is better than the barren looking alternative, counting pebbles on the driveway or blades of grass in the fields. Lots of both here.
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    Chapter 34

    I was almost ready to book an optometrist and a psychiatrist, much relief to realise that it is just "Murphy" having a lend.
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    At Last

    Goths are cool and do not change your style for anyone except yourself. Awesome main characters so far well done and thank you for sharing your tale.
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    Lost One

    Excellent chapter I am enjoying this tale very much. Thank you for sharing and very well done. Please continue to write as you have an interesting style that is very refreshing. Well done.
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    Chapter 1

    I knew there would not be too long of a delay, low and behold, awsesomeness and bliss! A very interesting premise and I am excited to see how this tale unfolds. Thank you for sharing this tale and well done.
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    Chapter 13

    An awesome tale thank you. It is far too short for my liking but I understand that a piece of art has a limit. Well done and I have enjoyed reading this tale.
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    The Big Move

    As a PERN fan I have enjoyed your short stories and this is looking like being a longer tale I am eager to see where you take it. My only concern is that the estate of Anne Mccaffrey may be unhappy with your writting about PERN. Me, I am all for it very well done so far and I am hoping to see much more. Thank you very much for sharing.
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    Chapter 14

    Aye give him the old black spot, sort the mongrel out perminantly.
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    Chapter 14

    What a shame, I was hoping to see a Yard Arm decoration appear beyond the twelve mile mark. Thank you for sharing thsi heart-warming saga.
  25. Oops! Back tp the tower to find more information, this is shaping up to be fun. Thank you for sharing this saga and very well done.
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