Dathi
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Ooh! A long one that sounds like fun. Awesome chapter, thank you for sharing your story, I am eagerly awaiting developments.
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The joys of leadership, putting people into positions that they are capable of fulfilling even when they are unsure of their own ability. I am pleased to see that the Coppers are getting some training, they may never be as powerful as Chris but they can at least improve with practise. Thank you for sharing this mighty tale, very well done.
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An excellent chapter I am enjoying the intedrplay between Devyn and Jason. I am looking forward to the development of this tale. Thank you for sharing your story.
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Excellent start, I am certainly interested to see where this tale goes. Thank you for sharing your story and very well done.
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Just so long as this is not turning out like the "Mr Creosote" skit from Monty Python we will be doing well. Chris may have to spend more time in the Hall of Maktar just to catch up with himself. I cannot wait to see the final outcome and where you plan to take this tale. Thank you for sharing you story and very well done. Stay safe and be kind in these troubling times.
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Well done the lull before the storm , I have a feeling that training is going to be painfull. No chance of a low key approach from here on out the extravagance of power shown at the ascendence has put paid to that. Thank you for sharing your tale and another excellent chapter.
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Magnificenly, gloriously exquisite chapter, it if far and beyond my expectations. An interesting amount of martial black in an otherwise pastel palette. Bad folk beware your fate is awakened, abandon all hope yee of fell and evil mind thy doom is at hand. Just bloody awesome, thank you for sharing and extremely well done.
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Heard and witnessed. Yes another enchanting chapter that is setting an excellent platform to grow the important Ascension Ceremony, I almost cannot wait. Nice play witht the friendly warning about messing with family, it never hurts to let the incomers know the lay of the land, mess with one of us and the family comes calling. Thank you for sharing and very well done.
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I still want to know what happened with the artifacts in the Museum? I am fairly certain that the curator staff will have noticed the absence of display items. However I am keen to see what a "restrained" Ascension looks like. Well done and thank you for sharing your awesome talents with us.
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Plans and schemes, another excellent chapter. Well done and thank you for sharing your story. Stay safe and be kind in these trying times.
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Hmmm, must be showing my length of experience, as this has hints of "The Breakfast Club" with a twist. The young man, Finn, needs to grow a set and tell the strumpet to take a hike. Peer pressure can be a demonic thing, made worse by parental undiscussed expectations. An interesting web is being spun here and I am even more eager to see where you, intrepid scribe, are taking us. Thank you for sharing this story and very well done.
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Happiness is a new story from a favourite author. An excellent starting two chapters I am eagerly awaiting future developments . Thank you for sharing and keeping us entertained with a well crafted tale. Very well done.
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An interesting start I hope to read more of this tale as you progress it towards it's conclusion. Thank you for sharing your tale, well done.
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How Do You Like Your Potatoes Peeled?
Dathi commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in How Do You Like Your Potatoes Peeled?
Your main characters need to grow a backbone and tell the old fosil to go fornicate with himself and preferably in the middle of a motorway late at night (traffic moves at greater speed then) Otherwise great chapter and thank you for sharing your story, very well done. -
I suspect that you are plotting treachery I sense something festering this close to Denmark. A good and sound bridging chapter, thank you for sharing this episode.
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Awesome, awesome, awesome, just what was needed to righten up an otherwise dull and uneventful day. Interesting, a new house tattoo and market shopping is always fun. The ancient one sniffed him out is an unsurprising turn of events it just add more meat to the bones of this wonderful tale of intrigue. Thank you for sharing this story and I eagerly await the next episode.
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"Oh, to be in England Now that April's there,"(Browning) Grubby individuals embarrassing the parental unit in flight. LOL another entertaining chapter that keeps us eagerly awaiting the "You have a new notification" message on our devices, thank you and, as always, very well done
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Private jet to London, awesome! Delightful to have you back and another delightful chapter to keep us enthralled and entertained during our isolationist days. Thank you for sharing this tale, very well done indeed.
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Hmmmm! Short break, that's 5 minutes in my book LOL. Indeed you have achieved a fine place to take a break from this tale, which is most excellent by the way. Thank you for sharing your story and I wish you well in these trying times.
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Good Bully keep on the case! Excellent chapter presenting so many branches that could be developed, well done.
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Excellent chapter, as we have come to expect. The Elvan response means that this is a known quantity that can be cured as it has been faced before. Thank you for sharing this tale and still, very well done!
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However in the authors defense, dealing with things my way would make for a very, very short story and where would the fun be in that!
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Awesome, awesome chapter and an excellent battle sceen although I would just have incinerated the enemy, slowly of course! Thank you for sharing this excellent tale, very well done.
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Another amazing and excellent chapter as we have come to expect. Bullying aside (well done on that Etotsira by the way) we do hope that the dealy will not be too long, thank you for sharing your tale and very well done.
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Excellent chapter, I am eagerly awaiting developments and hoping to see a certain unmentionable being turned into an ash pile, slowly and painfully of course! Thank you for shoring and very bloody well done.
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