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Poor Gus LOL that was mean
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The First General 3 -reupload
Dathi commented on gabz2000's story chapter in The First General 3 -reupload
Fastingabulous! A most excellent chapter, thank you. A well crafted battle scene and a clever way to prevent the other demons from gaining more energy. Well done. -
We, (well mostly I) am wondering who is beddding down in the garage space? Curious I sense an addition to the number of inhabitants in this here tale. Well potentially anyway! Thank you for sharing this enchanting tale.
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Happy days ahead, enchanting chapter and it sounded as if the old boat was becoming unseaworthy which could have seriously endangered the lives of the crew. Thank you for sharing your story and well done.
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More like targeted Magnus layered spells geared to demons and their victims only, should be something in the tower that will fit the task at hand.
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The purist Uncle is a moron and should be bannished. The commencement of total war is at hand, no prisoners taken, scorch the earth. Thank you for sharing this tale well done.
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Monty Python's Parrot skit comes to mind. Awesome story and chapter thank you for sharing.
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Pickling brine and linament should ease the pain and harden the skin and Antipodean is an awesome word to describe this slice of paradise
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Don't stop writing but polish and publish for definite. It is good to see you back in the saddle so to speak, continually turning out splended material to keep we, the people entertained. Thank you for sharing and stay safe and be kind in these trying times.
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I was starting to get withdrawal! I am pleased and happy to have this latest chapter in the saga of Chris and Leo. Thank you for sharing this awesome story very well done.
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A prepared united front, intelligence gathering, training and equipment aquisition, the "I's" are being dotted and the "T's" crossed. Another most excellent chapter following the standard of those that went before. Very well done and thank you for sharing this wonderous and engaging story.
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To arms! Time to fall in the troops and brush up on the casting of lethal killing spell work. Lock the right wing bigot in a room with a mirror and leave him, he'll be happy with that view of reality, should keep him occupied for a century or two. I can see disadvantages to hiding away from the world, it allows unpleasant things to creep in un-noticed which in turn makes erradication and removal that much more difficult. Well done on another riviting chapter and thank you for sharing your wonderful tale/saga.
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Wonderful tale so far and I am enjoying reading it. Thank you for sharing this tale, very well done.
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The story grows in complexity, positive energy and negative energy need to be put in balance because too much of either one is dangerous in the extreme. I am enjoying this story very much, thank you for sharing this tale and very well done.
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The call of jFairground barkers comes to mind "Step up, step up and play the game." Our intrepid prince has done the very act, pressure has forced the rubbish out and left a hard sparkling diamond in its wake. Carpe Deum! Awesome chapter thank you for sharing and very well done.
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Excellent, as well scripted as the preceeding chapters in this tale. Thank you for sharing and stay safe and be kind in these trying times.
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Nicely tidied up chapter, ducks in a row and all that, just in time for the party to head out of the realm. Thank you for sharing your story, very well done and so long as you arein good health and taking care of yourself we can (mumble, grumble, snarl, hiss, spit) accept delays in production of chapters because they are worth the pleasure of reading an extremely well crafted saga.
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It's a viral trap don't do it. Gently eliminate them and mourn them as soldiers lost fighting the enemy. Okay I know I am ruthless however in my defense it is because autors keep finishing chapters with cliffhangers. Who do we think are going to be Chief of Staff and Head of Security? Someone better do some organising because two people are about to have their worlds turned upside down and will need to make arrangements before they start thier new positions. For what it is worth that damn scroll bar reached the bottom far too swiftly for my liking. Thank you for sharing your story and very well done
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Awesome tale, I enjoyed reading it very much. Thank you for sharing your story.
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Wonderful chapter, an interesting development, was the pool of power preventing the casting of an overly powerful spell due to a lack of malice in the caster for the intended target? Wonder we shall and await elucidation from the author, thank you for sharing your story and well done.
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An awesome chapter thank you for sharing I am enjoying this story and I hope you keep it going.
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Happy, happy, happy, joy, joy, joy! An exciting chapter and so much occurring, the advice about everyone else being just as or even more nervious then Chris was, was sound. His best PR person should come from one of the spooks from the "Ministry of External Scholarship" they are linked in with access to all relevant information or at least know whom to contact to find out if they do not. Thank you so very much for sharing your story, it is a fun read with believable characters, very well done.
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Ooh! A long one that sounds like fun. Awesome chapter, thank you for sharing your story, I am eagerly awaiting developments.
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The joys of leadership, putting people into positions that they are capable of fulfilling even when they are unsure of their own ability. I am pleased to see that the Coppers are getting some training, they may never be as powerful as Chris but they can at least improve with practise. Thank you for sharing this mighty tale, very well done.
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An excellent chapter I am enjoying the intedrplay between Devyn and Jason. I am looking forward to the development of this tale. Thank you for sharing your story.
