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Unfortunately I haven't learn to type without looking at my Keyboard. The Caps Lock ON light is on the far right of my keyboard and it doesn't show up well. I get so frustrated when typing to find I've done it all in Caps ON. I then have to go about redoing the typing. The Caps Lock button is on my extreme left but doesn't signify ON or OFF. I really need a keyboard the illuminates the LEFT CAPS LOCK button but haven't been able to find one. The problem is further compounded with passwords (YUK). As you know most are case sensitive and sometimes I'm unaware I'm using the Caps On. I've turned the sound warning on but that doesn't tell me the Caps LOck is on or off. I'm reaching out for help because it's really making me cranky. Does anyone have a solution?

Loved the book. As a fellow writer I thought your treatment of Sudden losing his virginity tasteful. I also loved the quote 'my mother is an alien' I think I've been surrounded by aliens all my life. Well done

If you are comfortable with your beliefs and they give you peace then there is nothing wrong with that. My world changed when I became an atheist. Suddenly I was free, free to live my life my way, not governed by someone else. I regard all anti-gay references in the bible as not coming from (or inspired by) god . . . . they're just Homophobia.

I don't know. I was enjoying the book until you brought in religion. As gay people any Bible based religion is our enemy

I suppose mathematically, we could use 50,000 words as a good medium story length with perhaps 10 chapters in all, making the average chapter 5,000 words. But it doesn’t work like that for me. All of my chapters are divided into scenes where each scene either advances the story, compounds the conflict, or introduces themes to be pursued later. This is the way I write and it’s only when I’ve attained my objectives do I complete the chapter. In my case, it’s the length of me scenes that are important. I try and restrict these to between 1,000 and 1,500 words. Sometimes smaller, sometimes larger.

Thanks. I really appreciate your nice comments. Not sure I'm worthy of your accolade. Again, could I ask what story you're reading? It's a problem with GA, when people comment there isn't a reference to a particular story.

Wow, I must be a dinosaur. The scenarios you make sound very complex. I'm one of those Neanderthals who have one partner and don't indulge outside the relationship. But wait, I'm also a flawed human and if I was presented with an opportunity to indulge knowing my partner would never find out . . . as I said I'm only a shitty human. You obviously have had much more experience than me so I'll defer to your greater knowledge. You've given me food for thought and I can see opportunities to use your scenarios in my own writing. Thanks for sharing with me. I'm also nearly finished reading your story about "Angel'.Once again great writing.

As I understand the world, it's perfectly normal to have three people as close friends. It's only when sex is introduced that problems ensue. Watching the one you love have sex with someone else can lead to feelings of betrayal. I stress 'the one you love' because three persons indulging in casual sex doesn't give rise to emotional trauma. By making Aria asexual you've avoided any emotional conflict. Am I right?

I simply love your writing. We're taught that 'conflict'is the essence of a good book. From the first chapter until the last you managed to maintain subliminal conflict. The story was indeed a page turner. Conventually, loving two people at the same time is a bit unrealistic, but somehow you created a taste of possibility. I love the way you use dialogue to keep the story moving. I've used extensive dialogue in my own writing because it's the only way to develop a character. Well done

Is there a proofing programme specifically for authors? I've been using word and Grammarly as my proofreader and I'm not happy with either. Can someone recommend a better proofing software? I've been looking at Ginger and something called 'white smoke'. They all indulge in aggressive marketing in that they push you to sign for paid subs without being able to evaluate the basic programme. I use dialogue in my stories so I need to have ready dictionary access so the proofing doesn't throw up continual and similar errors. Any help would be appreciated.

We have an Italian based Mafia operating out of the NSW state. Some vocal anti-mafia crusaders have just simply vanished. It was very active in the 1950s when we had a large influx of Italian immigrants. Both the Roman Catholic Church and the Mafia were drawn together in that period and subsequently had a disturbing impact on Australian politics. Thanks for reading - I hope you enjoyed.

Thanks again. Could I impose and ask what happened with your Dad? I've had several heart-wrenching comments from people who've had similar experiences to mine, but not one from, let's say, the other side of the coin. I've never had the guts to ask my own kids how they felt about me; too scared to know the truth. Just a moment of time . . .

It's a sad inditement on the American people that 46% still believe the bible is literally the word of god. In this environment, fundamental christianity thrives. If you have time I'd like to hear about your experiences. Sharing backgrounds, I believe, is a healthy and interesting use of time. Again, thanks for reading.

21.1 While he waited, Tony glanced at the murals on the coffee shop walls. The theme was of sand and ocean, appropriate to the location near the surfing beach. The whole atmosphere of the place induced relaxation and this is why he sat idly and unnecessarily stirring his coffee. It was a beautiful day outside, the sort of day that makes you feel good to be alive. After this I’ll contact Ryan to do some surfing. Not bad, not bad. Tastes like real coffee, not the new instant coffee currentl

20.1 “ . . . you’re kidding, wow, it’s hard to believe. I mean yer Dad is such a quiet cove, he’d be the last I’d suspect having an extra-marital affair. I mean that’s one thing, but learning Bert Cree’s yer half-brother, takes my breath away. Who’d ‘a thought?” Tony sat back completely stunned as Ryan related his talk with his father. Luckily, they were having a quiet beer at the clubhouse the morning after, so no-one could interrupt. “(Softly) Yeah I were speechless, completely dum

19.1 As soon as he opened the front door, a bundle of yelping, excited canine joy barrelled into him. Little Gus welcomed his master home. “Down boy . . . hey there, ya missed me eh? Come here matey, let me pat ya and . . . no, not that Gus - boy, ya can ‘t have sex with me leg. Let go and I’ll pick you up . . . there, how’s that?” “He missed you Ryan; he’d lay on your bed whenever he could, well whenever yer mother wasn’t watching. Fact is I’ve been walking him and we’ve become good

18.1 Life for the Nasho’s settled down into a boring routine. Special drills, marching, lectures on aircraft recognition, and other useless activities accounted for most of their time. Several tests were introduced to weed out cadets who had the ‘right stuff’ to become pilots. Not many qualified. Into this mind-numbing boredom, a free weekend offered a reprieve for these young tortured souls. Minor matters such as war in the middle east, the coming Olympic Games, the Cold War, the threat of n

17.1 After acquiring a caravan on a permanent basis, Tony and Ryan settled down to a comfortable and hassle-free life together. Sometimes they met weeknights, but mostly they met on the weekends and holidays. With Tony’s guidance, Ryan did well in his year twelve and so looked forward to enrolling in the vet college of Sydney University. His work at the Vet School only intensified his desire to be an animal doctor. Then he realized he had a problem because he’d have to leave his job to enrol

Wow, married for 31 years. How did you manage? I came out to my wife in my early 40s when I could no longer control my basic sex drive. From the time we were married until I came out [18 years], my life wasn't very pleasant. Yes, I had kids, a mortgage and a good well-paying job, but I knew my life wasn't fulfilled. I eventually settled into a stable and happy gay relationship, but my wife never got over the shock. I felt guilty at the start, but that soon disappeared. Now in my 80s life's great.

Thanks for your comments. I've tried to make Ryan's relationship with Tony realistic and I'm pleased that you approve. I love getting comments even if they're not positive. Thanks again

16.1 Another Friday night found Ryan visiting the Surf club ablution block. In the weeks following his first visit, he’d experimented, finding Wednesday, Friday, and Saturday nights the most popular. He’d met the young man again several times and enjoyed the chemistry between them. He still didn’t know the bloke's name and contented himself that they should remain anonymous. The system worked. He’d also become popular because, his good looks, muscled frame, and tanned skin, seemed to attract

15.1 For several weeks now Ryan concentrated on getting his Bronze Medallion. Because he’s passed his Surf Rescue Certificate, his course requirements for the Bronze were eased. The physical test required him to swim 400 meters in under nine minutes which he passed easily. Tony tutored him on academic issues, so in passing the final test without any difficulty, he became an accredited Bronze Medallion holder. Then one Saturday morning, before he went on surf patrol, the Club Administrator han

Thanks. I'm still learning who to be a writer. IT gives me great satisfaction to hear from readers.

Again, wrong author

I believe you have the wrong author. Comicality wrote this story