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5.1 Aftermath Sunday Billy lay passively on the quilt cover, his eyes opaque with lust. Completely naked and whimpering softly, he offered himself completely to Karl who, by now, was rock-hard. Bending over the boy’s inert frame, Karl gently brought their lips together, at first tenderly, but then morphing into passionate aggression. Their tongues duelled as each sought dominance over the other. The elder boy’s left-hand caressed the lad’s right nipple causing an ecstatic moan to escape
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Sometimes I get frustrated having to post each chapter separately. The book is completely finished but I can't publish it all at once. I thank you for your patience.
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I might add that my motive in writing this book was to expose the hypercritical nature of so called 'good' christian' families. Christianity as practiced by many in today's world has nothing to do with the original christian message. Now I'm an atheist - a very happy one - and therefore don't indulge in any form of worship but I do know that today's Christianity has lost its way.
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Thanks for your comment. It's great to hear from readers. That's what was done back then to make us normal. Be thankful it's now illegal. Sadly I watched a movie the other day that was labeled 'Gay'. To my horror I soon found it was extolling the virtues of one of these 'religious' conversion places. The dialogue was pathetic and it angered me that something so awful could be disguised as a gay movie.
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Thanks for commenting. Jason's character is very complex and he has a rocky road ahead.
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You're right. A solid, religious, accepted normal family on the outside but totally fucked up in reality.
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Thanks for commenting. Like all relationships it's going to be a rocky road.
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Sorry to hear about that. Guys don't talk about the subject as it carries an emotional traumatic memory. It unfortunately happens to too many. Thanks for commenting. I love hearing from people even if they dislike something.
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4.1 Margo’s Party . . . Saturday night Even before they arrived at Margo’s driveway, they could hear the sounds of revelry coming from somewhere outback. Notices then directed them towards the rear. By now, at 9 pm, the party-goers were loud, boisterous, and well into the booze. The scene itself centered around a large floodlit pool, festooned with balloons and other party decorations. Two enormous speakers blasted dance music from the top of the pool. As well as dispensing hard liquor, the
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3.1 – At School . . . Monday ‘Karl, Karl, wait up. Can we talk?’ Arriving at school the next day, Karl turned towards the sound of Rhonda’s voice. Around him, and from all different directions, some in cars and some from buses, students converged on the school. Mondays were the worst as kids faced the drudgery of five long days of learning. The only bright aspect being the fast-approaching summer school holidays. Catching up, Rhonda grabbed his arm possessively as he was about to go
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Thanks for your comment. It's great to hear from readers. That's what was done back then to make us normal. Be thankful it's now illegal.
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2.1 In Church . . . Sunday ‘. . . it’s clear in the Holy Bible, that marriage is between a man and a woman. It can never be a union between persons of the same sex. As I speak, yes as I speak, there are those who want to change, no . . . more, to destroy the word of god, as set out in the Holy Bible. These creatures, called homosexuals, challenge our Christian way of life, seeking to extend the virtue of our faith to include their disgusting behavior. To cloak their sordid habits, they’ve co
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‘. . . I must thank you for your kind and elegant introduction. (sigh) If only even part of it were true (general laughter). As President of the Baptist Council of Victoria I ‘m asked to deliver many messages, some good, some not so good. However, on this occasion . . .’ Against the quietness, the assembled guests could hear the clinking of waiters subtly serving dessert course dishes. Especially for speeches they dimmed the lights of the restaurant, leaving a soft glow around the room. A sp
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Prologue At first they stressed how free he’d feel if he didn’t have these negative feelings. To live a normal life, to be accepted, to be free of fear both emotional and physical. To not be a sinner in the eyes of God; to be able to walk tall and respect yourself. Sign up, that’s all he had to do and undertake any processes that the program may require. Easy. Page after page of written testaments to the success of the program followed along with notes from prior participants thankin
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Ignoring his dad’s sermon, a new sensation gripped him. He had the uncanny perception of someone watching him. Initially he just shrugged the sensation aside, but it just grew more persistent. Eventually he looked about until . . . . . . eyes, eyes watching me, beautiful brown eyes. My god he’s looking straight at me. He . . . he’s beautiful . . . those lips . . . cupids bow, so, so kissable . . . he, he has the face of an angel . . . oh my god . . . The angel winked.
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Loved the book. As a fellow writer I thought your treatment of Sudden losing his virginity tasteful. I also loved the quote 'my mother is an alien' I think I've been surrounded by aliens all my life. Well done
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If you are comfortable with your beliefs and they give you peace then there is nothing wrong with that. My world changed when I became an atheist. Suddenly I was free, free to live my life my way, not governed by someone else. I regard all anti-gay references in the bible as not coming from (or inspired by) god . . . . they're just Homophobia.
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I don't know. I was enjoying the book until you brought in religion. As gay people any Bible based religion is our enemy
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Thanks. I really appreciate your nice comments. Not sure I'm worthy of your accolade. Again, could I ask what story you're reading? It's a problem with GA, when people comment there isn't a reference to a particular story.
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Wow, I must be a dinosaur. The scenarios you make sound very complex. I'm one of those Neanderthals who have one partner and don't indulge outside the relationship. But wait, I'm also a flawed human and if I was presented with an opportunity to indulge knowing my partner would never find out . . . as I said I'm only a shitty human. You obviously have had much more experience than me so I'll defer to your greater knowledge. You've given me food for thought and I can see opportunities to use your scenarios in my own writing. Thanks for sharing with me. I'm also nearly finished reading your story about "Angel'.Once again great writing.
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As I understand the world, it's perfectly normal to have three people as close friends. It's only when sex is introduced that problems ensue. Watching the one you love have sex with someone else can lead to feelings of betrayal. I stress 'the one you love' because three persons indulging in casual sex doesn't give rise to emotional trauma. By making Aria asexual you've avoided any emotional conflict. Am I right?
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I simply love your writing. We're taught that 'conflict'is the essence of a good book. From the first chapter until the last you managed to maintain subliminal conflict. The story was indeed a page turner. Conventually, loving two people at the same time is a bit unrealistic, but somehow you created a taste of possibility. I love the way you use dialogue to keep the story moving. I've used extensive dialogue in my own writing because it's the only way to develop a character. Well done
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We have an Italian based Mafia operating out of the NSW state. Some vocal anti-mafia crusaders have just simply vanished. It was very active in the 1950s when we had a large influx of Italian immigrants. Both the Roman Catholic Church and the Mafia were drawn together in that period and subsequently had a disturbing impact on Australian politics. Thanks for reading - I hope you enjoyed.
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Thanks again. Could I impose and ask what happened with your Dad? I've had several heart-wrenching comments from people who've had similar experiences to mine, but not one from, let's say, the other side of the coin. I've never had the guts to ask my own kids how they felt about me; too scared to know the truth. Just a moment of time . . .
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It's a sad inditement on the American people that 46% still believe the bible is literally the word of god. In this environment, fundamental christianity thrives. If you have time I'd like to hear about your experiences. Sharing backgrounds, I believe, is a healthy and interesting use of time. Again, thanks for reading.
