grahamsealby
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Ha ha! Mate you are very good. As I said, I've been writing for and reading GA for a long time now and that's the best book I've ever read. My contributions pale against yours. Your writing is very succinct and precise. You've done us proud!
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Wow. What a story! I haven't commented on previous chapters. I thought I'd wait until the end. Jeff you must get this published; I believe I've just read the new John Grisham - it's that good. I'm a scribbler too but I'm not in your league. I note that other readers have called for a book 2 and I definately agree. Am I correct that there might be a romantic connection coming between James and Josh? As a Aussie I hope our government never becomes as complex as the US, but I suspect it's heading that way. If you ever get the time could you tell me how you developed your ideas - the concept. I take it you're well knowledged in IT. Anyway - well done!! Graham Sealby look but
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Thanks mate, I've got a couple of videos from eBay, being careful they will play here in Australia. I'm just surprised that there isn't an app dedicated to Gay males.
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I've got Tubi here in Australia. Sure, they are the best streaming platform for Gay movies, but they're still mostly Lesbian. I just can't believe that there isn't a site that caters to/for gay males. I've looked on EBAY but you have to be careful, the movies aren't region specific. We had a bookshop here in Melbourne, Australia, but it closed down when streaming became popular. I've got about 50 videos acquired from the bookshop before they closed, but now they're getting old and dated. Is there a site that lists gay movies along with relevant data? I'm not averse to buying from IMDB
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I'm keen to watch Gay MALE videos, but I'm not having any luck with the usual streaming services such as Netflix, Stan or Prime. Sure, they have Gay videos, but they're mostly Lesbian, Gay theemed or short grabs of around 15 mins. I don't like the latter because the time restriction doesn't allow for characters or themes to develop. Obviously, I don't want to watch Lesbian stuff because, all due respect to our female cousins, they (the movies) don't turn me on. My benchmark is a movie called "Latter Days", and I'm trolling to find similar movies. Is there an app or a website that contains movies like "Latter Days'? If so, can you let me know, 'cause it would be appreciated.
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I need to update my credit card . I searched every ware and couldn't find how to.
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I can't read any further. I take offense to training underaged kids to use guns. I'm totally opposed to guns of any kind and anyway what have guns to do in a gay story! ;
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Sorry but I don't know where this story is going. I'm really uncomfortable with the militarist tone of the story? It seems that doing militarist things is more important than helping gays. It's starting to get booring
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I don't know where this story is going. I'm disturbed by the level of homophobia which is apparently accepted. Our community approach is that Adam doesn't have a problem . . . all the other homophobic jerks do! I'll keep reading . . reluctantly
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I don't understand the obsession with the color black. It's a depressing color. -
Why did you do that? If I'd known the story had such a tragic end I wouldn't have started reading. The ending was so unessasary
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Well I finally finished. I thought the ending was a little drawn out and Theo the use of a first name as a family name (Marcus) had me confUsed at times but a wonderful story and well written. I intend to follow you. I've written quite a few stories for GA and have to do my own editing. I looked around in the past and found that editors charge 3c per word. Is this what you pay? Thanks for an enjoyable read.
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I don't usually comment on a story until I've finished reading but I need to tell you that you're an excellent scribbler. I'm enjoying the story and your writing style. You write clean and efficiently. Congrats!
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Thanks for your comments. I thought a lot about that and finally decided I didn't want the relationship to imapct on the basic story. Thanks again.
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I really loved this story. You are a very good writer. Your sensitivity shines through in every chapter. Well done!
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Thanks!. I've often thought about writing a gay detective series. Something with a financial investigation background would be interesting.
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. . . and thanks for your interest. As I mentioned Jaimee got inside my heart and I'd like to write a sequel. I'm thinking . . . I'm thinking . . . thanks again.
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Thanks for reading and your interesting comments.
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Epilog Jaimee hastily ended Paul’s call and, making some excuse, hurried home. Trembling with anticipation he had difficulty getting his key in the front door. Paul waited in the lounge room with a smile writ large over his handsome features. They simply stood looking at each other. Weeks of frustration and fear dissolved as they collided in a passionate kiss until their hunger for each other demanded physical relief. After hours of amazing sex, Paul and Jaimee acknowledged that their love h
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Chapter Thirteen 13.1 Time passes. ‘I hate this waiting. It’s been several weeks since you visited with the Attorney and the detective, yet we’ve heard nothing. After I gave you Simon’s number did anyone contact him? Can’t you call this Norman and get an update.?’ ‘What good would that do? He’ll call me when he’s ready.’ Both Paul and Jaimee fell into a depressive mood after the visit to Norman Gibson’s office. It had been several weeks and they’d heard nothing. At work, they w
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Read on. Simon has his own problems . . . coming up. Thanks for your comments
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I think the final chapter and epilogue will make things clear. Thanks for commenting
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Jaimee was distraught at the dog's death but I wrote about his despair after he'd settled down somewhat. I didn't want tot clog the story with unnecessary hysteria. He eventually suggested planting a tree over the dog's burial place as a permanent reminder.
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Chapter Twelve 12.1 Simon reports to Lan ‘ . . . so, you’re absolutely sure he understood your message. It’s important Mr. Pearse that our malcontents understand completely what’s going to happen if they don’t comply. We don’t make idle threats. We’ve found . . .’ ‘(hastily interrupting) But you wouldn’t do anything to Jaimee, right? I mean it’s just a threat and I’d never forgive myself if Jaimee suffered any injury. He’s just an innocent kid and hasn’t any pre-involvement with thi
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Chapter Eleven 11.1 Simon visits Paul ‘Well, how did it go? What did the attorney say?’ ‘Before I get into that how about you fix me a strong martini . . . a double vodka.’ ‘Bad as that eh? (mixing the drink for Paul) Well (sigh) we knew it’s gonna be tough Do you want a lemon twist (Paul nodded) Here then, have a guzzle, and let’s hear the good news.’ Paul had just got home from visiting an attorney recommended by an old school friend. Now nearing dinner time on a Friday
