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  1. The one thing that those at the Castaway Hotel have going for them is the love of family, that all got started when Josh started taking in boys who were later adopted by him. Of course there was a lot of love before that when his biological children were younger and before he lost his wife. There seems to be a lot going on at the home with three adult couples and all the boys living there. I’m sure Josh had tears rolling down his face when Frankie said that no one had done what he did when he took Frankie in to his home twice with the second time being the one where he made the turn around from being a delinquent to a model person. I wonder what Richard wants to talk to everyone about?
  2. I hope Robbie is able to cheer Nathan up even if it involves x rated things. I’m sure that Nathan needs a friend right now especially if Ginny is the one supplying him with the methamphetamine which wouldn’t surprise me since she’s always so moody.
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    Truth Time

    I’m glad that they were able to stop and bathe, eat a warm meal and air out the skins they were wearing. This was thanks to the children of Lilith. They were informed that tomorrow they would be in the presence of Wahkooha. I hope that they will make it out alive and in one piece all of them. Thanks for the great chapter.
  4. Fantastic chapter. I’m glad that the boys like the tree house and deck along with the new transport system that Jake added so the boys could take snacks up as well as Doby and Flash. I think Josh will be impressed with the tree house as well.
  5. I’m glad that Josh is enjoying his time with Frankie & Carolyn they have been to some great places such as the train museum. Josh is trying to get to know Carolyn at this time as well due to the fact that she hasn’t been able to get the time off work so she could go with Frankie to his old home for thanksgiving, it looks like it will happen this year because they have both put in for the time off. I’m really enjoying this continuation of the original book.
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    PS Ch 21

    What a great story about a boy who is given an assignment for his history class at school he finds out that he’s a descendent of nobility and winds up with a title himself. I’m glad that the first trip for the year eleven top two students from the six private schools in Tasmania went well even though they had some trouble with the media. I would definitely read a second book to go along with this one, I saw that you may do it but you have a second book for another story that you’re doing first. I look forward to reading any story that you write.
  7. The tree house is finally done and it has it’s own pulley system for hauling supplies as well as Dobie & Flash up. The boys that along with Brandon and Dion in Texas are going to be home today and I’ll bet they’ll be happy to get home too. It’s great that Ryan has learned to cook by Trey and he’s shown his cooking abilities off to the ones that are at home and received lots of praise for the meals he’s fixed for them to eat.
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    PS Ch 20

    The school holiday trip was a great success except that Edwin didn’t have as much time to spend with his friends other than the hikes they went on. All three of them are in the pictures that he took and added to the posters about the December trip, Brad & Craig have accepted the invitation to become temporary crew for the trip and were told not to tell Lucas because he would probably be one of the two from their school selected for the trip. I hope that Edwin and his family can go home soon and that the media will leave them alone. Fantastic chapter by the way.
  9. Great story so far and I’m sure that there’s still more to come. The tree house is getting finished by Elliot, Ian, Ryan and Owen, Jake is helping them out with it when he has time after work.
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    PS Ch 18

    Edwin now has a new yacht to use instead of the company catamaran so he media won’t figure out where he is hopefully. I hope they have an awesome trip for the school holidays. At least instead of losing a grade by not attending school for the rest of the term Edwin was able to get the school to allow distance learning with video conferencing for his key subjects. Which seems to be working well for him.
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    PS Ch 17

    The media has found out that Edwin is the new Baronet of Wigan and were stalking the church at the school. The family made a change of plans and went to a new church which was dedicated or something like that by a relative of the 4th Earl. As they were on their way home to their new home Edwin received a text saying that the media was outside his old house behind the school, so it was decided that they would have to get away from everything for some time. I hope it all works out for them, as Edwin won’t be going back to school again for the remaining school term. He told his mates to be sure to keep the school breaks open as he was still treating them to a great time. I wonder who informed the media of the fact that Edwin was the Baronet. Can’t wait to read the next chapter, as the story is really getting better as everything is in constant motion around Edwin.
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    PS Ch 16

    I’m glad that mum was able to get the business sorted out after the previous manager went crazy. Mum was able to locate and purchase a new location for the office as well as a permanent docking location for the yacht, after a bit of searching she found a very good lady to run the office for them and she stayed until she got settled into a good routine. I’m glad that Jacques is alright after suffering a mild concussion. Great chapter as usual.
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    PS Ch 15

    Edwin is definitely going to make a great business man if he chooses that as his vocation. I hope that between him, his mum, and Robert they can get it all straightened out and if necessary they can hire someone else for the office person. Someone who has the experience and won’t question the captain of the yacht if he makes a booking for Edwin. The lady they have now has canceled the reservations Edwin made, because he wouldn’t give her his credit card number over the phone, also she didn’t know that he was the owner of the charter business. With Edwin’s mum going to the office to find out what the problem is and possibly find a new location for it since right now it’s in a commercial area that I don’t think is visited by many tourists. I look forward to reading about the week coming up as Edwin’s mum gets into the business to straighten things out.
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    PS Ch 14

    Thank you for that. It was just a bit confusing. Very excellent chapter I’m really enjoying the story.
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    PS Ch 14

    None of your beeswax idiot, so be on your way like a good little turd that you are,” Lucas said in response, and they both stared at each other, before the bully walked away, and Lucas sat down with a big grin on his face. “In that case, you had better get you bags packed, and we will take them with us, I will go and suggest the same with Lady Alexandria and Lady Beatrice, as they will have to come with us for the day trip, so they don’t get stranded,” Charles said as he went to organise the rest of the family. There appears to be a break in the chapter here, where the bully is trying to start trouble at lunchtime. Then it goes back to where Edwin was at the retreat, and they were getting ready to go for a trip up the Gordon River. The lunchtime incident takes place after another student in their class who is pretty smart, after hearing his dad who is a Park Ranger talking to a coworker about Edwin but not knowing what it was about. He confronts Edwin as he and his 2 bodyguards walked onto the school grounds.
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    Chapter 37

    I’m very happy that Tony and Mitch had such a great time on the cruise. They met other men who were like them and they became friends along with their waiter Sasha. I think they made a great impression on him when he was asked to join them in drinking and eating their cake topper from their commitment ceremony a year ago. The way that they were greeted the first night of the cruise was special with all of the waiter’s joining in song to welcome them to the ship, and then the finale was another song only shorter and when Sasha sang he turned to the table so that they all could see him and he sang from his heart. I’m glad that I came back to the story for a second time as I’m finding a great many things I may have missed during my first time reading this incredible story. The love between Tony and Mitch is very beautiful and it shows in the way that you wrote it.
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    PS Ch 11

    I hope Edwin will be alright and make it back to the retreat before it’s time to leave for home. I hope that Alexander is doing well after going to the hospital, which caused Richard to alter his plans and return to Scotland immediately.
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    Chapter 21

    I’m glad that Mitch’s dad and mom have changed how they think of their relationship. His dad has come a long way from when he first met Tony and found out about their being a couple. It’s too bad that the rest of the family can’t let go of the bigotry that they have toward anyone who isn’t as as ignorant as they are. I’m happy for Mitch and Tony wanting to have this commitment ceremony to show their friends and family how much they love each other as well as proving their commitment to each other.
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    The False Prophet

    The journey only gets tougher the more they learn about this Tawa. It all comes to an end in two days that’s when they’ll meet Wahkoowah and put an end to his attacks on the three countries.
  20. This is my second time reading this story. I don’t have anything in my background either but I can relate to the character’s in the story because of the easygoing banter between them. I’m not a very open person until I really get to know you, once I get to know you we have a great time telling about how we were raised and when you or I found out that we’re attracted to men. I thoroughly enjoyed the story when I read it the first time I’m sure I’ll enjoy it more now.
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    PS Ch 10

    I like Edwin’s project idea it sounds like a great idea for the senior boys to begin with. The holiday home is perfect for the family with enough room for Hunter and Robert as well as the caretaker couple.
  22. I’m about as stressed as Randy about telling his mom that he’s gay and not knowing what her reaction is going to be. I have a feeling that she’s not going to change how she feels about Randy, she’ll tell him that she already suspected it as much time as he spends with Ryan.
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    Chitto: Part One

    In reading the comments after reading this chapter I have to agree with droughtquake Eric is one of the best authors who uses the comments as means of seeing what the reader thought about the chapter. I am also part native although I don’t know exactly how much I have but I have been told that I have native blood in me so the use of the natives in the story is very excellent and I can’t wait to read more about the meeting of Eric and Chitto and possibly even Harjo who are Christian and Eric’s cousins. I’m glad that Demetrius has told Eric and Seth that this Tawa is not a child of Lilith but a child of Eve.
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    The Creid

    Toby’s conversation with his dads was very thought out and he brought up good points saying he knew there were things he couldn’t do because he was hearing impaired. Erik & Seth both told him that he could be a doctor and study things that a regular doctor would miss because they didn’t have the knowledge that they needed to help the patient. They told him he could be practically anything he wanted to be. The men that King Yannick sent to the Royal Valley to train the people who wanted it to be able to help protect themselves and the valley from the intruders. I’m glad that Erik is starting to trust them more as they have become great ally’s.
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    The Lie

    Very excellent chapter. I hope that they find out who the child of Eve is and a way to stop him or her. Toby might have the answers they need.
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