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Fantastic start to what appears to be a very interesting story. I think Colt and Apollo are becoming very good friends and the idea of a new gym in their part of town seems to be a great idea. I can’t wait to read more about the gym idea and the two main characters in the story.

I too am enjoying the story, it keeps getting more interesting with every chapter. I’m glad that Victor has answered some of Chris’ questions about him being a vampire. I’m sure Chris has more questions to ask as well, although I think they’ll have plenty of time to get to them. I think it’s great that they are boyfriends and Victor showed him that he wouldn’t let him be hurt after they were going to be robbed by 3 men who were in trouble with the police anyway. I have a feeling that Chris’ dad is the liaison that Victor was talking about in an earlier chapter.

What on earth is Brian thinking about as Rob’s trying to use the bolt cutters above their heads so he can get him free. Brian is hitting on Rob now all of a sudden when they have less than a week left of camp. I hope nothing comes from this because it could only be because he’s drunk.

The guys are going to be in so much trouble when Brian gets back with Rob. I hope Rob is able to find Brian and his clothes so he could get dressed again after the guys took him out to the island and handcuffed him to a tree branch after taking his clothes off him.

Interesting chapter. Brian’s girlfriend Julie shows up unexpectedly and surprises him. He thought it was a joke at first but then as soon as he drove up to the front gate he realized that this wasn’t a joke and she was really there. After introducing her to Rob it was settled for him to meet her after the dinner service at her motel room in Norwich.

An enlightening chapter. Rob and Andy finally do something about their urges, Brian is talking to an older girl named Laura.

Camp seems like it’s going to be a very interesting time for the waiters.

I’m glad that Jacob is healing after the injury and surgeries he had to repair the damage. I can understand why he felt bored sitting at home with nothing to do to ease his boredom. I think his idea to do a research trip to the U.K. is great as he will be able to get a first hand look at the different designs that Ten Fold has and how they could be used for both the training of army personnel and civilian scientists as well. Great chapter, I’m glad you decided to do a second book with Simba and the other characters.

Fantastic chapter. I think it’s great that they have Demetrius, Lucas, Dara, Ceto & Martha to help them to defeat Wahkooha or at least get him to stop the attacks on A’dore, Blethos & Creid. They also found out from Toby about the two items of jewelry that Wahkooha wears is the source of his power as they are magically infused with the power of his ancestors. They just need to come up with a plan to be able to do something to make sure he’s stopped for good.

Very great chapter. I hope the operations go well for Jacob and they are able to fix his leg. Lumbasi had a big mouth and even after being warned about what he said and when he said it he kept at it until he and Jacob were summoned to the Colonels office where Lumbasi was ordered to step forward and then turn around and read Jacob’s id badge and then Jacob explains what it means after that he is dismissed and Lumbasi is told to stay. The next morning he was gone. I’m glad that uncle Nathan is going to be there when Jacob comes out of his first surgery.

I thought this chapter was well thought out in regards to TJ and the fact that he’s a preme and hooked on oxycodone as well. I’m glad that Dion & Trey are able to spend time with him even though he’s still in the NICU with his weight so low compared to full term babies he has a way to go yet. The questions they were asking were great because it gives them the opportunity to learn as much as they can about how they are going to help him as much as they can, it doesn’t hurt to have a pediatrician in the family either this way if questions arise they can ask him right away. The way they spoke to him and made contact with him will be a very good thing when they are able to hold him because he’ll know their voices. I really enjoyed the way the other boys came to this entry at the house so they could hear all about TJ, you could only tell they were excited about another brother coming to live with them. The pictures and video of him will be a reminder of how fragile he is now and then they can show it to him when he’s grows up some, they’re also going to be able to show Josh & Jake when they get home from Georgia.

It’s great to see how Xander is fitting in at the Castaway Hotel, the boys have all made him feel welcome and even told him they knew about his problem and they would protect him if anyone started picking on him as well as making sure he is included in the things they’re doing. The boys all enjoyed the sleep out in the tree house including Xander who said that Doby slept at his feet on the sleeping bag.

I’m glad that Jaden and Chance have made up, at least for now. If Chance tells him what’s going on it might end their friendship altogether. I hope that Chance and all of his friends have a great time at the event that Chance was able to get tickets and VIP passes for them.

I agree with your statement of holy crap, I think it sums up the chapter.

I’m glad that Jacob was able to see his parents over Christmas and New Years but was sad that they were going back to Canada and had arranged to stay another 3 years. Jacob asked uncle Nat about the idea that he, Will & Chris came up with about the collapsing storage container saying that they had been researching a UK company that made them but the cost was out of their range. Nat asked Jacob if he was talking about 10 fold company and he said he was, Nat called his boss and asked if he could meet with him as he just had an idea about the project they’re working on, he told Jacob they had an appointment in 90 minutes and they had to go home and change clothes first. I’ll be looking for more about the meeting and the project the guys are planning. It’s going to be nice to have Afya come for a visit saying that she missed her favorite person since he moved back to Australia.

The boys seemed to seal their friendship even more by the time they finished their first of many sexual experiences. The package arrived from his uncle and he now has the VIP badges for him and all of his friends. They should be happy now that they’ll have their badges for the big event, I’m like Chance in that I can’t help wondering if Reizal will try anything during the event or if Samael will show up and try something.

It’s true that Mr Evans aka Samael is very easy to hate due to the fact that he’s taking out the people who he believes is responsible for his mother being the way she is. He expects Nikki to get what he needs to get his mother back and he says he’ll give Nikki’s mom the antidote for the poison he used on her. I hope that Nikki doesn’t fall for the trick, and then he can tell Erin what he found out in hopes that he would be able to get the antidote.

I like Trevor aka Ventus he has a great way to keep Jaden in check. I think it’s great that he’s the one who has the honor of being a protector for Chance. I’m loving the story a lot.

Chance is a very nervous right now and learning more about Israfil. He’s in awe of the world he’s in now where the mages live their lives when not in the human world. Even though the story is complex it’s still a great story to read.

This story is very intriguing and interesting. I find the characters Chance & Jaden are an interesting pair of friends. Jaden is so open and seems very happy all the time, while Chance is the laid back type who keeps to himself, the friendship started when they were younger. The style of your writing is very interesting because it shows the strengths and weaknesses of each character it’s very easy to follow. I’m thinking that somehow the two friends wind up together to fight whatever’s coming to their town.

I believe that this story is going to be as good as the first one. I’m glad that Chris & Will are going to be living in Jacob’s family home with him and his uncle since they’re all attending the same university. Jacob has a tough road to get down with double bachelor degrees in science with biodiversity and conservation and science with wildlife conservation biology. He’s just the guy who will get it done. Thanks for the great start to the new story.

Another fantastic chapter in the continuing story of the Castaway Hotel. Xander is going to be in a great place for the problem he has especially since Danny is a pediatrician and he can hopefully do a lot to help him and possibly even get him to be able to control it a bit more or even find a medical reason for it and treat him for the condition. I’m glad that Josh, Dion and Trey sat down with the boys after breakfast and explained the situation with Xander as well as the new baby that Dion & Trey are going to adopt. They explained that the baby is addicted to the pain medication as well as the mother was, she died during the birth which maybe was a blessing in disguise since I seriously don’t think she could have been able to take care of him. I’m glad that the boys are all understanding about Xander’s condition and they have all agreed not to tease him about it or embarrass him. I can’t wait to see how things go when he comes home with Brandon after his check up with Danny.

Randy finally got the nerve to tell his mom that he is gay. Even though he didn’t exactly say the words he told her that he and Ryan were boyfriends. She told him that she was not disappointed in him or upset that he isn’t interested in girls and that she loves him no matter, all she cares about is that he’s happy with his life and his choices. I’m glad that he finally told her and that he feels like a giant weight has been lifted off his shoulders. Great chapter and story, can’t wait for the next chapter.

It seems to me that Fergus has a long way to go before the pack truly trusts him. Does the wolf doing the killing have to be male or could it be female because I’m thinking it could be Shayna could be the one because she tries to force her way no matter what the situation is. I hope they catch the rouge soon then Jimmy can become a full member of the clan.

Ariel & Tyler are really starting to become a great couple, I think they both have things to tell each other about only fear is getting in the way. I wonder if Tyler’s mom knows about them being a couple and what they do in his room together? Fantastic chapter to the story of the love that two boys have for each other.