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Now that the whole group is in the elven realms they’re in for a very interesting few days. After they all were reunited they realized that they weren’t in their world they knew they would have to find shelter first then they would worry about food. Now they’ve got to worry about the thing that caught Kieran in the rope and caused him to not be able to move in case there are more of them. Kierans power is gaining strength the more he uses it, he has already increased the amount of strength he had for the personal shields he made for everyone.
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To me I think this is where a lot of the bonds friendship begins for the guys, they’re all back together again after Woorawa showed up and started asking about Rhys. After everyone had their memories back again they started to remember more especially Kieran as every time they did something it would trigger another memory that he didn’t have before Woorawa started his questions. I’m glad that they have Kieran practicing the different things he can do with the help of the opal I think it’s helping him to remember more about the trips that he went on with Mr B. and Rhys especially the trip to Alice Springs where they met Woorawa and Kieran was gifted with the opal.
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It appears as if something has changed within Woorawa since Kieran tried to get through the shield he built up when he was chanting like his uncle taught him and it’s only been within the past day. This does give Kieran and Ranevargar something to think about, as to what might’ve changed in Woorawa. I’m interested to see where the lines of questions get answered and in what way.
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Lord Maynor is messing with Kierans mind and it’s what’s causing the migraines he’s having. Now he doesn’t even remember his best friend Rhys Woorawa is trying to get him to remember him although Kieran says that it’s all giving him a migraine. Woorawa is going to talk to his uncle about the fact that Kieran nor Tan can remember that Rhys was a very good friend of theirs.
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I think that the people who are following the ways of the first Australians have come to welcome three people who are visitors who just happened to have found a sacred place that most of the people who live in the area have not seen or have forgotten it. I think it’s incredible that Rhys is able to stop the supposed migraines that Kieran gets when the triad is trying to get him to be something he’s not. This all started because his father is the High King in the other realm of the elves and they found that he is Widderkin and they can’t have him be that way if he’s supposed to take over for his father at some point. Kieran, Rhys and Mr B. will hold a special place in the hearts and minds of the people because Woorawa was cured of his blindness after he was zapped as Rhys calls it as he was helping Rhys rub Kieran’s temples to help him get over his migraine. It knocked all three of them out for twenty minutes after they were zapped when Woorawa woke up the light was so bright he had to turn away from it. This is a fantastic story of friendship across three different people being Elf, and two humans and one of them being an ancestor of the first Australians.
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It’s great to see that Chipper has his mom and sister with him for the finale, he might even have his dad and the man he’s always thought of as his other dad. Chipper needs to be careful with the amount of stress he’s feeling right now because of the way that the competition is getting more intense now that they’re in the finals. I think it would be great to have some of the squad there as well because they have always been close to each other. Fantastic chapter as usual.
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This was an awesome chapter. I’m curious as well as to what hit Kip when he went into the water to do a bit of looking around the area. When he was slammed against the hull of the swath cat and then went unconscious I was afraid that he would drown, luckily Joshua saw him floating on the surface and unconscious. Apart from the extensive bruising all over his body and a couple of cracked ribs he’s very lucky, the injuries are going to take some time to heal. I’m waiting for the next chapter to see what they discover about the cause of the injuries he sustained.
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The trio was off on one of their adventures that started to include Sonic only some kind of meeting put a stop to him going. Sonic advised them to go without him even though Calen thought he should be there for the meeting as well which would have put a halt to the whole trip to the asteroid known as K137 which was supposed to have a giant hole in it possibly caused by a comet hitting it making the hole. Things were going great, until while Wirrin was on watch a blue light suddenly went red and a message came across the display that a emergency holo was requested and after reading the message he ran to wake Thom and Calen before going back to activate the holo. I hope that this doesn’t make them miss the trip because as busy as they are who knows when they’ll get another opportunity for this trip.
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Tyler is in a great state of shock right now and he has no idea how much his life is going to change for him or his parents since he is now an Earl. This was a very unusual way of delivering the news to him as he is summoned to the headmasters office and sees his parents there and his mothers hands are shaking a lot. The headmaster excuses himself to allow them time alone when he’s given the letter and told to open it and read what it says. Then he’s informed that his great uncle who is a retired high court judge will be arriving that evening so they could talk about his becoming an Earl, when they meet him in the Hotel restaurant he asks his great uncle what it means and he’s informed that they will discuss the details later when they have more privacy. It’s definitely going to be very interesting to see how Tyler handles all of the information he needs to be able to do what his title is supposed to do. Thank you for the great beginning of this new story of a young man who suddenly became an Earl.
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Why is Don causing so much trouble for Robbie? First he tells the police that he witnessed the whole altercation between Robbie and Alex and that it was Robbie who attacked Alex, not the other way around. Don also said he had to pull Robbie off of Alex, and that Alex was the one that was injured. I’m under the impression that Don has set the whole thing up and really doesn’t want anything to do with him. The way that the preacher, his wife and Mr Symmonds showed up at the house all because Don wasn’t’ in church for one service and they come looking for him, I’ve never heard of that happening before but knowing what I do about this church anything’s possible.
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The wedding, coronation and reception are now over now it’s off on the honeymoon for the newlyweds as well as Boris & Yuri. Helga may be pregnant but she’s worried about the fact that she would be an unwed mother, she was told that they would deal with it either way she won’t be alone in raising the baby. Olek told her that if she is pregnant she didn’t get that way alone and she would have lots of help and support from everyone. Peter and Eric are excited about the possibility of becoming uncles of Helga and Olek’s child. This might be the best time to announce the proposal for Olek & Helga so that they can get married next year. Can’t wait to read about their time in Venice and Greece, fantastic chapter as well.
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The dolphins are sure enjoying the games that Sonic comes up with for them to do in order to make moving their pods easier on them and the babies. I’m glad that the trio got to go exploring while at Titania and they were relaxing at home watching the scenes of their travels and talking about going to find Sonic so he could see it as well. The playback stopped when it was only halfway through it and then the holo’s of 4 figures appeared then a few seconds later the holo of Akama appeared and they were told that the AI from K74 sent a distress call and before he could transfer himself he went off line and they were told that for the first time in over a century an AI has died, he conveyed to Pirramar that his processes and programs at the core of his consciousness were being attacked. I hope they can stop the scientist from K74 before he really starts causing trouble for Attunga and Warrakan.
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Very excellent chapter. This was the greatest wedding I’ve ever heard of and it seems like everyone is having a fantastic time, except for the missile that was launched at Makarovia. It either missed or was brought down and where it came down it caused numerous deaths and destruction. I’m glad that Yuri and Olek have an alternate plan for the honeymoon they’ll fly to Venice get on the yacht that belongs to Boris and Yuri and go to Greece. I’m very happy for Peter and Eric because they are both in love with each other and they show it with their words and actions every day.
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The trio has really become more important compared to other young people their age. Ever since Sonic was introduced to the people they have been involved with just about everything he does and it shows because of the way that they handled themselves while on earth to get the dolphins from the research centers and take them back to Attunga and Warrakan, they were able to do their individual jobs and save 6000 dolphins from being killed by the cadre from K74. Sure they had some close calls but they were able to hold their own and keep not only Sonic but Calen and the dolphins as well from the attacks coming from K74. Warrigal just told Wirrin that he, Thom and Calen had all gone well beyond their basic studies and they had possibly even gone beyond their 2nd level as well. He also said that Akama has been thinking of Wirrin as a leader which he tried telling Warrigal he wasn’t a leader only he was the one who keeps the trio together.
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I totally agree with everything you said. It’ll be interesting to see where this goes from here and what Kieran will make his realm look like. I’m waiting for him to tell the others that Mr B. is the one he was in love with before Maynors interference and sending them to the outer world. So many possibilities for the champions as Philippe calls them. Thank you for the great chapter in the continuing story of wonder and amazement.
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Excellent chapter. The wedding has finally come and they are now Prince Pedro and Prince Eric of Makarovia. Eric went from being just a college student who was asked to help Peter with the project that was assigned to them by the instructor of their very first class. Peter was very shy and had a problem with acne which covered most of his body. As they spent more time with each other they quickly became friends and then lovers. The people of Makarovia are lucky to have Eric as a life partner to Peter because he has already done a lot for the country and he will be continuing to do more to help the people make their lives better. Congratulations to Prince Peter and Prince Eric Ivanov as they begin their lives as a married couple. I loved the little joke that Eric pulled when they were supposed to be telling each other what they mean to each other, that was a bit funny, although he made a commitment to Peter, Olek, Alla and the people of Makarovia to help the people by making their lives better.
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Things are moving quickly for the trio all because of their special relationship with the dolphin pod as well as Fluke, Puck and Sonic. First they move to a temporary home in the dolphinarium then they are told they have 2 weeks to work out how they want their new home to look like before construction would begin and then they would move into it after 3 weeks of construction. One thing that they had to have was a indoor pool with dolphin access since they were going to be working with them especially Calen who has been studying zoology for 7 years already and he’s still a teenager.
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One thing I realized by rereading the story of Jarra and Mirri is that not only did they become best friends but they were also like brothers because there were times that they were never apart from each other. Sure Jarra was busy at Alkere and Mirri had his explorations but there were times when they both would go on the exploration of someplace. As they grew up I believe their friendship just became closer especially since Mirri knew when Jarra would need to rest for awhile as he had since they first became friends as young boys. They have both made considerable strides in making the world a better place to live, with the planning and building of the very first independent AI Yirgella or as Mirri called him Yirgy. I think the most important thing that happened for them was the fact that while they were on a holiday doing some exploring with the twins Akama and Barega as well as Karmai when they were in the middle of a solar flare they didn’t have a connection to Yirgy but with the combined work of the other AI’s he was able to get a message to Jarra that there was a group of men out there that were going to abduct him. Jarra went to find the others to let them know that they have to get to a safe place that Yirgy had said would be safe until help would arrive, as they were trying to get away Jarra’s personal carrier was disabled because one of the men shot the rear end of it and also shot Barega in the back, after realizing what happened Jarra passed out from the magnitude of the emotions he was feeling and Mirri wound up giving him a pig ride as he called it Karmai was grazed in the arm and he carried Barega to where they could stop and rest Mirri said that he needed to get Jarra connected to his machine to give him his treatment for his weak muscles when Karmai started to object Mirri said he had to get him hooked up or he may not make it. I’m very impressed by the way that Mirri saw things differently and he chose his friends very carefully, the way that he cared for Jarra and the way that he would be when he was guiding people through certain areas as well as the way he explained things and he kept them involved in the trip by showing them different animals and then in his own way singing to the animals. Jarra’s contribution to the world were his ideas for the betterment of mankind be it through his work to build the independent AI or the things he came up with from his time with Yirgy. This was a very very inspirational story of friendship that never faltered only gained in strength, thank you for the opportunity to read this fantastic story.
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I feel bad for Mirri and Jarra because now they’re separated from each other for the time being, because a new lift tunnel has to be dug out and then built. The loss of so many people at one time is staggering which is weighing heavy on Jarra’s mind, but he knows that he can’t do anything about it at the moment. I’m sure that he’s going to have a rough time trying to rest because of pressure he’s feeling right now. I’m glad that he and Mirri were able to talk to each other making sure that they’re alright, and a promise from Mirri that he’ll be the first person he sees when he gets off the train.
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Fantastic chapter. I’m sure Kipling enjoyed having his family come see him for a week holiday from their work on the station. I’ll say that when Kip decided to stay aboard the Silver Cloud when she went to drop his parents off so they could return home and help with the supplies for the MV Researcher, only he didn’t have time to help with getting the supplies as Joshua decided to take him to lunch and Kip was surprised to be led to the table where Mr Hamysh Lloyd was sitting. After he got over his shock of meeting Hamysh they had a very nice lunch and then he was given the opportunity to see the inside of the Aquaria with Joshua as his guide while they were sailing out to the Abrolhos Islands which would take one and a half hours to get there. It seems like they’re making progress with the clean up of the damage to the islands from the cyclone, they also have set up the building of temporary housing for the fishermen to use beginning of the next fishing season. Fantastic story, I look forward to reading the chapters as they come out.
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Oh what it would be like to be young again and do the same things these 2 boys are doing.
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I’m thinking that Ezra wasn’t as good a friend to Adam like he says he was. I mean if you see your friend struggling wouldn’t you want to help him in some way even if it’s just to be there and be a soundboard because that might actually be all he wants or needs. Ezra doesn’t know what Adams father did to him much less said to him so he shouldn’t be saying anything about him like he was to Artie and Dizzy. To me Ezra saying that he’s praying for Adam isn’t the same as being his friend whom he said was like a brother.
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It’s exciting to see how Mirri and Yirgy get along so well with each other. I’m sure that Mirri really thinks that Yirgy is a real person especially when he stated that Mirri is his friend. Now that Jarra is going to be spending at least 4 days a week at Alkere so he can work with Yirgy to make it possible for him to go exploring with his friends Jarra and Mirri. They’re going to set up a residence of sorts so that Jarra can spend the night if he needs to, it will also have room for Mirri, Dari, Karmai and Baradin as well. I think it’s great that Jarra is now a part of Mirri and Baradin’s family which is a big reason why he has such a huge support base especially since he has an incurable disease that doesn’t allow him to be as active as other people, because he has to rest more than he would like to he knows his limitations and he tries not to exceed them.
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This was a fantastic story to read. The fact that Kohen was saved by the captain and crew early in the story and then it evolved from there. I’m glad that Kohen went back to the captain even though he was still mad at him for lying to him. Thanks for the fantastic story
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I’m sad that the story has come to the end and that I won’t be reading anymore about the two main characters of Mirri and Jarra. I also had tears of joy during the Dreamtime Concerto and it’s dedication to Mirri was a fantastic thing to happen. Jarara was letting everyone know that Mirri was his Muse and the inspiration for the whole concerto. I’ll miss reading about all of the fantastic things that Jarra came up with first of all the totally independent AI, Yirgella, Yirgy as he was known as by Mirri then other things were happening as Jarra became focused on them. I think this whole story was very well written and true there were some not so great parts but I believe it had more fantastic parts than not so great ones. Thank you for the great opportunity to read this fantastic story that has taken me a reader to great places in Australia, l would love to visit there at some point although I don’t think it will ever happen for me. I have enjoyed the story so much that I am probably going to go back and read it all over again. The author is a fantastic writer with a very interesting style of writing.
