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You’ve done it again Carlos, you’ve written another great little story about CJ and his family. In this story he isn’t really the lead character although he did do something that he thought about when he got involved in politics, he became president of the United States. Liebe is basically the lead character in the story because it’s about her getting married to Fabricio who is the son of Thiago. Not only do CJ and Owen have Liebe but they have three sons as well, two in the navy and one a junior in high school. This was a great story about the wedding planning and then the wedding day, I always enjoy reading the stories about CJ and family as well as his friends.

This was a very interesting story/chapter about the wrongs made against homosexual men in the 1950’s. They were persecuted for being gay and having a lover of the same sex, how were they a threat to anyone unless they were attacking other males on the streets in order to have sex with them. The undercover police officer who was killed by Michael was just as bad as the men he was turning in for being gay. The government figured out that he was killed by a man because of the silk tie and the fact that he was naked as well as other things. I’m glad that the persecution of homosexual men was stopped and those who were prosecuted for the crime were pardoned although for some it was too late.

They found Garjah now they have to just get out of there and then back to the rebel base and figure out what the heck is going on and what they do next. Bouncer recognized one of the guards from the house that they saw on the mech view screen and he acted on his own and took him out permanently. I’m really loving this story and look forward to seeing the new chapters each week.

This was a great start to the new story of Devlin. Although he lost his parents in an accident he was able to finish his schooling and graduate with some honors and then due to him having a small education trust he was able to attend TAFE and get some training in cabinet making and wood working as well as his apprenticeship even though he was doing this all while living in a youth hostel and then in a mens hostel for a month until he was able to get housing in a dorm at the university even though he wasn’t able to attend it. Since he was homeless after his parents death due to his older siblings being homophobic. His two friends from school tracked him down for his 21st birthday asking him what his plans were although they caught him after he had gone out to dinner by himself, they took him out sailing for the weekend on a yacht that the two families own together, he even talked them into giving him some training on how to operate the yacht, which they taught him before returning to the port.

This was a great story. I’m glad that Kit’s settled into a routine with his brothers as well as going to school for himself. With the help of Mrs Gantry for the house and the boys things are going well for all of them. Their dad is out of his coma and is recovering from being poisoned by their mother who has been sentenced to 12 years in prison for it. I’m glad that Marcus at least is emailing Kit again to let him know how he’s doing with his university studies in Zurich although I’m wondering if he had an alternate motive for the email. I’ll miss reading about Kit and his brothers until the next story about them. Thanks for the great story.

I guess Marcus thought they were just going to be going back to Perth to check on Kye’s brothers and then they’d be off to Zurich to attend university as they had planned. Kit is doing the right thing as far as his brothers are concerned and his father as well. He found out that he wasn’t really aware of their ages when he decided that he would enroll them in his old school now he has to find a daycare for his youngest brother as well as a play group. He needs to check on his father as well soon so he knows his condition as well and an approximate amount of time he will be in the hospital, he will probably need some help and care after he gets released as well. It’s to bad that Marcus couldn’t see that Kye had responsibilities now with his dad in the hospital and his mom in prison it fell to him to care for his brothers.

Excellent chapter R. Eric, I’m glad that both Joel and Hank are doing better after being hit by the boulders. Especially Joel since he got the worst of it by getting hit with the biggest one that fell, while Hank only received a broken arm from being hit by a smaller one Joel had a couple of broken ribs that punctured a lung causing it to fill with blood. Luckily they were both in suits that were able to sustain them until they were able to get back to the ship and then to the medical center for their own treatments.

What a great chapter and beginning to the new story. The memories of Josh and Sawyer from the time they helped out their friends with and Eagle Scout project to build a park for kids to be able to have a place to go to play. I think I’m going to enjoy getting to know a bit about these two young men as you can’t really call them boys anymore because it’s been three years since they helped build the park.

Kit makes some good friends at school and one friend Marcus invited him to spend some of their school holidays with him and his family where he meets Marcus’ cousin who is the reigning prince of Liechtenstein who asks them to be the hosts of a youth forum. After this goes well they spend time hiking and then sailing just having a great time together. Then during the winter break Marcus teaches Kye how to ski and snowboard which he likes the snowboarding more than skiing. Then he goes on Christmas holiday with his uncle Mathias and he has a serious accident that puts him in the hospital for quite a while for reconstructive surgery on his face as well as surgery to repair other broken bones in his arm. Once everything is done and his recovery is done he’s released from the hospital only they couldn’t leave the UK until he got a new passport due to the plastic surgery on his face after his facial bones had to be reconstructed. When they finally got back to Milan he only had 4 weeks left of school until the summer holidays so it was decided that he would continue to do remote learning until school starts again in the fall. He went to the school to reenroll for the fall term and then he went to look around the school and runs into Marcus they make plans to spend the weekend together only when Mathias comes home he’s got some bad news and it ruins the plans the boys had as he and Kye have to go back to Australia to attend the funeral of a relative.

Great start to the new story. Kye seems to be doing well since he was kicked out of his home by his parents for being gay. He is living with his uncle Mathias who is an accountant and travels a lot for his work. This year they’re spending Christmas in Italy with Mathias’ former college roommate who is gay, and his family. It appears that they’re going to be moving to Italy as Mathias has been offered a position to work full time in the Italy office of the company he works for and he wants to keep Kye close by, which is why he is going to be looking at two different schools near where his uncle is going to be living and working.

This is really getting to Essell because he doesn’t want to wait until dark to go get Garjah. Despite his feelings he has to wait until dark so that the rebels can go get Garjah from the security building and bring him back to their location underground. I hope Timok is telling the truth about everything and he’s not going to be getting the rebels,Essell and Ases captured along with Garjah. This is all because the Kardoval are not getting their way and keeping the planet under their control where they stay away from other races.

Great chapter and story so far. I’m really impressed with the way that Joel is leading everyone, he’s not being a dictator or anything like that he’s simply trying to get everyone on the same page at the same time. They’re getting closer to their intended destination of Gaea and they will have a week back in stasis after this time and then they’ll wake everyone up and have a welcome to the planet party before returning to stasis to be ready for when they arrive at Gaea then they’ll start getting the equipment out and set up and operating for the terraforming to take place. While this is going on they’ll be back in stasis again.

Great chapter and story even though the ending was a bit of a cliffhanger. I’m glad that CJ was able to make his resignation stick this time and he found out that Northman is being transferred to Angola, he said he was going to call Simmone to find out what the scoop was on the transfer. Oz isn’t leaving the nature conservancy yet but is being reduced to a contractor type of employment with them.

Great start to the new story of CJ, Owen, Liebe. The way that CJ put the Fox reporter down was something that you don’t see very often if ever, he had already said that they weren’t going to be taking any questions and then she starts yelling out a question about Liebe. I liked the answer he gave to president Biden about the offers he was going to be getting from different agencies that wanted him to work for them, he said he was going to decline all of them because he couldn’t get the position he wanted at State, the CIA wouldn’t give Owen the same security clearance as he would have, just to name a couple. He said he was going to return to school to get his advanced degree which was encouraged by Dr Biden (the First Lady). On the way out they were offered invited to join the President and First Lady for the independence day celebration and they declined the offer saying that they had obligations with family first.

I’m glad that those that are awake at particular times are trying foods from different cultures to keep their awareness of their culture alive so to speak. As far as Joel’s Charleston dishes they’re memories of what used to be since it is no longer there due to catastrophic weather conditions that destroyed it. I’m glad that they are able to talk to each other about their future and where they might be making their new home. They have chosen a name for their new planet as well as a name for the first settlement on the planet. We’ll see what happens in ten years when they’re awakened again from stasis and will be able to get better scans of the planet and then be able to determine if it’s suitable for them to make it their new home.

What a great surprise to see a one chapter story about CJ, Owen and family. In this story he goes to speak to a college class and meets a young man who is in a wheelchair due to a accident while water skiing during his summer between his junior and senior years in high school. He was paralyzed from the neck down and has since regained the use of his upper body just not his legs. While speaking with CJ, Brion mentioned that if he were to ever run for office he would like to be able to work on his campaign, and three years later Brion gets a call from CJ asking him if he would like to come spend the weekend at their house in DC and then he would finally get to meet Ozzie and a few other friends. He asked CJ about clothes because he was worried he didn’t have the right ones to wear to be having dinner and meeting CJ’s friends, he was told just slacks and shirts were fine and the reason for the dinner is that he’s running for office although it’s not a federal one right now. Looking forward to more about CJ and the rest of the group.

Someone is trying to get rid of Essell, Garjah, Bouncer as well as Ases. They’ve already captured Garjah and they thought they would be able to get the others just by using Garjah’s ship as a decoy the only thing they didn’t count on was that Essell wouldn’t be gullible enough to fall for the ship being there and Garjah not coming off of it. They escaped from the house before the capture’s got to them and now they’re hiding in the forest and using Ases’s tech to watch them destroy Garjah’s house looking for a hidden room that isn’t even there.

Well he’s going to have an interesting presentation and 1800 word paper on what he did during his summer break. I’m sure after he does his presentation he’ll be bombarded with questions about his adventures aboard the different ships and then the yacht he was on. This was a great book to read and I hope that there’ll be a book 2 some time soon for us to enjoy and see what adventures await him once the Stingray arrives in Dongara so it’s closer to him and he’ll be able to watch over it making sure nothing happens to it like what happened to Jordan’s other yacht.

I’m glad that they made it to Australia from New Zealand without to much trouble from rough weather. Even though their plans changed a bit once they were asked to take on paying customers for the journey. Now that they’re in Port Lincoln Tim answers the satellite phone and the marina office is calling and they have a special request as they have some vip’s arriving and they have no executive style accommodations. So I’m thinking that they would like Jordan and crew to have them stay on board the yacht while they’re there. Great chapter and story so far I can’t wait to see what Jordan decides to do and who the passengers will be.

Great chapter. I’m glad that Robbie, Daniel and Rory all made it back to shore in one piece even though they shouldn’t have been out on the lake in the first place, except the pastor refused to take reasonable care and return to the marina when they had the opportunity before they were in the middle of the storm. Everyone of the kids except for Robbie and Mathew the pastors son got sea sick because of the strong swells caused by the storm, Robbie even wound up throwing his shirt and raincoat overboard after Rory got sick all over him. I’m wondering what the pastor is telling everyone about the reason for Robbie going to church and it’s not because he’s becoming straight like Hannah seemed to think.

Great chapter as always. Although there is one part that didn’t make sense to me, I’ve attached it here: Unfortunately, shortly after confirming with me that it was indeed my yacht and that it was over 1,000 kilometres south of where it is supposed to be, and after it was reported to the police, the yacht was sailed out of the Marina, heading south, but unfortunately the into a dicey coastal area, and ran the yacht aground on reefs. ‘’After unfortunately it says the into a dicey costal area and that’s what I didn’t understand, I’ve never heard or read anything like that before. If I’m missing something please let me know what it is.

The way the other boys on the soccer team kept looking at Trey and Dallas they were trying to figure out what was going on with them. After practice while walking home when the question is asked about how it works for them to be boyfriends and Dallas said he had no idea as he had only read stories on nifty.org and they didn’t say anything about how it works. He said that in the stories they just wind up having sex with each other and then the story ends.

Great chapter, the way that Aric and Blake are going about the kiss I wonder if they’ll get anywhere else without a lot of back and forth between them. The conversation that Aric had with his mom was kind of cute especially when he said he didn’t know any mom, when she asked if he wanted her to call when they got to his grandparents house so he could say something to them, he told her no just to enjoy themselves and to bring him home some freshly baked cookies and he’ll be good. I hope that Aric can convince his parents to let Blake stay with them because he has nowhere else to go and he can’t go back home since his parents kicked him out when they found out he was gay, it’s the same way that Aric is being treated by his grandparents.

This was a great chapter as it gave us a bit of background on how Robbie came to be a part of the family. He was originally built by Joel’s grandfather to be a companion and tutor for him and then he kept him when he grew up and became a father and made sure that Robbie was the same for his boys. Now Robbie has a bigger body with the same memories and programming.

Great story even though it was just a chapter long. I’m glad that CJ, Owen and Liebe are doing well and are all back together again after what happened in Mexico. I don’t blame CJ for not wanting to go back to Mexico to work in the embassy there processing visas for people. I hope the visit with the Bidens goes well and it might help him get a better position within the government sector of jobs. I’m glad that they didn’t want Brad to move out of their house when they get home. It sounds like they’re going to have a busy few months with weddings and other things now their going to have to be doing interviews about the issue in Mexico. Now they’re also going to be suing the American Firearms Federation for using the kidnapping of Liebe to get more money by using the picture of CJ and Liebe without his permission. That’s not a good idea to do especially since he has the funds available to go after them and put them under the mat.