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What a way to start a new story. I don’t think those two people need to be working together anymore, especially when it comes down to one being stabbed and the other one being choked and possibly having a broken back if not a severely bruised one because of the one that was stabbed.
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A very beautiful chapter in the continuing story of Makarovia, very well written. I am very proud of Katrina Sams for the way she put Helga’s mother in her place, that woman is a great pain and she has no idea what she’s missing out on in Helga’s life because she’s so emotionless. I loved the proposal and was shocked when the mayors said no to accepting her as their new queen. They went on to explain that they didn’t want to wait another year for her to receive her crown because they had already been told that she would be accepted as the queen so they had the coronation ceremony right then instead of finishing the proposal ceremony. Even her own mother bowed on one knee and said along with everyone else “All Hail, Queen Helga. Long may you reign.” This made her cry tears of joy, then she was helped up by Olek who then bowed to her and called her his Queen.
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Young love is something that you can never forget. Trey and Dallas sure seem to be falling in love with each other although Trey is having a harder time with it because he hasn’t told anyone about him being gay, especially his mom. She might surprise him and be totally fine with it and he would have been fretting over nothing at all. I hope their date goes well for them.
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Two yachts blown up in a short period of time, things are getting worse for Edwin and his family (may as well call them that). It almost seems like the company that they were able to get rid of in Australia is up to their tricks again and they won’t stop until someone is killed by their bombs. I know there’s no proof that they are responsible for the destruction of the yacht but it is strange that as soon as Edwin called the sat phone and spoke to James they were coming back to the yacht club and it blows up, luckily everyone made it off safely with some minor injuries.
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It looks like Edwin is going to be involved in the boys lives from now on and they’ll be living a better life because of who he is as well. Julia has already gotten a taste of what it’s like to be related to Aristocracy since she was taken to lunch by Robert,Edwin and Hunter, then taken to look at a private school for the boys to attend and then they went to look at a few houses. They chose one house with 6 bedrooms for Julia and the boys to live in. I can’t wait until Edwin’s mom finds out that she has 4 grandsons in two different countries when she finds out about them she’ll be on a plane to visit them in no time.
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Richie is like a kid who has to learn how to do things all over again. He’s so excited to see what his extra is going to be. He has to remember not yell or raise his voice because it hurts his ears when he does that. I wonder how he’ll take the news about Justin and Taryn being a couple?
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I thought it was strange that Edwin was a father of two boys and then he finds out that he’s actually the father of four boys two in Canada and two in the UK. The only reason he found out about them was that the six year old was looking for him for his 5 year old brother who has cancer and needed a bone marrow transplant so he had written a letter and put it in the paper in a few different countries hoping that Edwin would see it and he would help his brother. Edwin did go to the sperm bank and was informed that he had the four boys and he was needed for a bone marrow transplant. He went to the hospital to get tested to see if he was able to donate to his son and then went through the procedure and after recovering from it he and Hunter went back to Geneva by train. Once back there they moved from the hotel to the new house and then Edwin told James and Anton that he had a surprise for them so they could keep busy while living there, he informed them that they were the owners of a 65 foot catamaran sailing yacht that they could use for charters.
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I’m glad that Mark and Stan decided to go with the serum because it would be harder to explain their deaths to their families especially since they don’t know what they actually do with Collin and Devon. It’s bad enough that Chuck had to die and Rubin wanted to start an investigation into his death which would be a big mistake because it would bring a lot of attention to the area at a time when they don’t need it. On top of that the reason why Kuyvashev was curious about the area was because he kept getting reports about certain activities that were happening in the region, then when the VUN came in and started working with Yuri and his teams he sent Efrim to investigate what was going on and get him some proof of what it is. The only problem was that Efrim used a truth serum that his grandfather invented only he didn’t read all the information that was there from his grandfather and it killed Chuck and almost killed Mark and Stan as well. I’m glad that Colin and Devon are going to take not only Dan-D but Cookie as well until they see if Amanda wants him because he was going to be Chuck’s puppy which would make him partially hers as well.
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Well it looks like Ethan is getting his friends back after making a fool of himself and telling them that he was gay because he thought that their other friend Jermaine told them he was gay which he didn’t. So Ethan just opened his mouth and inserted his foot by making a big deal about the situation even though Joey and Billy had no idea what he was talking about until he was finished and Jermaine told him he hadn’t said anything to them. Now he has to include Drew in his plans with his friends so they know that he’s not pushing them aside for him.
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It’s great to see another chapter in this story and to be able to see what the guys are doing now. It’s great that they have guests in Makarovia from England. The guys from the Big Bar have come to visit and were only supposed to be there for a day and now they’re going to be there for a week so they can attend the proposal banquet and see what it’s like to be brought up before every person in Makarovia so they can say whether or not they think that you’ll be a great addition to the ruling family. It’s Helga who is the one who the people are deciding on this time even though she and Olek are already married and are expecting a child. I wonder what it’s going to be like for her if her mother comes for the proposal since they don’t get along ?
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Interesting start to the new story. It seems that Edwin is involved in another project with his cousin Robert the Earl. Since arriving in Queensland and giving his crew some time off Edwin and James are relaxing on the top deck watching the sunset after watching a movie, when Edwin gets a text from Robert about enjoying the sunset, when he frowns at the message trying to figure out how he knows what he’s doing at that moment he gets another text and then a call from Robert asking for them to join him for dinner at the hotel just behind the marina. Robert is telling them that he’s here as a Scottish tourist trying to stay away from the press, and he has a bit of news for them as well. I can’t wait to see what he says to them and if he can stay away from the media.
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Great story, I’m glad that Rebecca and her boys are safe and happy. They’ve been doing charters for 2 months now and have been enjoying it. Marc has even been working right alongside the rest of the crew and Rebecca and her boys.
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Another fantastic chapter in the story of the Ark II. I can’t get over how much they’ve accomplished in the short time since they arrived at Gaea and yet it’s still going to be another hundred years before they can actually get to live on the planet. With all of the brilliant minds on board it’s not a wonder that the children are just as smart as their parents.
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They’ve made it this far, although I don’t think it’s going to be safe for anyone to around that area for quite a while. Especially when Cyrus and his goons get his scent from the area leading to here. I hope that Wesley will be able to convince his family to leave rather quickly once they get to the church campground to keep them safe and to keep him and Issac safe as well.
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Great chapter and story so far. I’m saddened by the fact that they lost Chuck to the effects of the serum that was brushed on him. Devon and Collin have notified Rubin of Chuck’s death and the circumstances of how it happened, at the same time they also told Amanda. She and Chuck had been seeing each other for a few months now and they felt they had to notify her at the same time as they did Rubin. Chuck donated his body to science so they’ll have a funeral for him before his body is sent back to the US, Rubin said he would notify Chuck’s dad about his death. Rubin wanted to notify the president about the death since he was an FBI agent even though he wasn’t in Russia on official business, Collin and Devon said that would only cause an international issue and would bring more pressure to this part of the country and would be an issue for them because of their involvement with trying to get the vampires in the area on the serum that way they wouldn’t be dependent upon the blood for their survival. I hope we can see more soon as I want to know if Stan makes it as well as Mark, and also if Stan still has the mental abilities he had before he was attacked with this so called truth serum.
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Deke better be careful with Sarah looking for him especially if she’s looking at him as a suitor. With Gideon Priest and his gang around he really needs to stay away from Colby and his friends or he might be considered one of them and get killed right along with them.
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This was a great chapter. I’m glad that the children were the ones who received the medals in honor of their mothers, they even learned to bow and curtsey for the Queen. It was a short ceremony and a solemn one, although it was a very nice ceremony and a very special day for the children who were able to meet the queen of England. After the ceremony they went to Achnacarry where they stayed for a few days, while they were there they made daily trips to Beth and Nicky’s graves which was a very nice resting place for them but also a beautiful place.
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Zach really blew it this time, he crossed the line when he physically attacked Will and threw him across the room. He really thinks he’s going to get back in good graces with Will after what he did, he’s lucky all he got was the black eye and cut on his face all because he has a jealous streak and he can’t deal with it.
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Henry has a lot to lose by this rumor and the police going around asking questions about it. He said he would have to go back to New York and then he’ll wind up attending Northfield Prep School which he doesn’t want to do. He gave Elana his parents phone numbers for work, home and cell and said he would call them to let them know that she would be calling them, and he would begin packing to go home before returning to attend Northfield. Elana told him to hold off calling his parents to allow her time to talk to her boss and some other people at the precinct. We’ll see how it goes from here.
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After the trouble they had after arriving at LHI they finally get to the yacht and Devyn feels like this is where he’s going to be in his future. Although I’m like other readers in thinking that they aren’t out of trouble yet. I hope I’m wrong but somehow I don’t think I am. Devyn finally meets Brody’s sister and her three sons.
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What happens after Zach wakes up?
Butcher56 replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Topics
This is a very interesting topic for discussion. I think it’s going to be hard for Will no matter what option they choose because I really think that he’s going to be on the losing end of this whole situation. 1. He’s got the relationship with Zach and he’s blowing him off so he can meet up with Travis and they can have sex. Zach doesn’t want to have just one guy who he’s having sex with especially now that Will knows about him and Travis. 2. With Travis having ADHD it’s going to be very hard to get him to be with just Will and not Zach. 3. What will they be like after the 3 way if they choose that route instead of the others. I’m sure that Will doesn’t want to lose either Zach or Travis out of this situation. 4. There’s another way for Travis and Zach to get out from under the constant surveillance and that’s to have Mr. Buck arrested and charged for the crimes he’s committing. -
One thing I can say about this story is that Liebe takes after her fathers. She had every right to defend herself from the bully and then she gets suspended from school for defending herself and her friend who happens to be overweight or just fat. The parents of the bully then try to sue CJ and Owen saying that Liebe had taken away their sons ability to procreate and that she was the aggressor of the whole situation not him although the video proved them wrong and the judge ruled that they had no case. He also allowed the counter suit of CJ and Oz to go forward against the bullies parents. I feel bad for CJ in that because he’s the mayor he’s in charge of the schools and he appoints the Chancellor so everyone involved in the situation is suing him on behalf of the city. I hope that they win the counter suit and then donate the money to an anti-bullying group. It’s great to see everyone together and ready to start their vacation on a yacht.
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Jake is going to continue to be a problem for Devlin as long as he stays working there or the boss gets rid of Jake due to his being such a pain in the rear and a trouble maker for anyone who is hired to work at the station. I hope something gets figured out soon for Devlin’s sake before he winds up having another panic attack due to Jake and his constant need to be such a pain to others.
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I’m sorry that Chuck died because some fool was trying to impress someone who he thought would do something for him. Yuri found a vampire that wasn’t on the serum yet to bite Stan and Mark and now they’ll become vampires only because it was the only way to save their lives after the truth serum that they drank in their coffee started working on their nervous system and their brain, after 24 hours they would have been dead like Chuck only he had it smeared on his forearm and it took a little longer to start working on his body because he was so healthy and always took care of himself. I’m glad that Kuyvashev and Efrim were made to see Chuck die from the affects of the serum and then see Mark and Stan get bitten to save them. Maybe they’ll stop and think about what they’re doing to people that they think they need to investigate and get answers from in the future. Maybe they should get bit as well but that would only make them feel immortal. Great chapter hope to see more soon.
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It’s too bad that they lost out on the one charter and then gained another one really quick from some guys they knew in school who are getting married. The two grooms and their brothers are already aboard the yacht and the others in the group will be joining them at Lancelin Island where they are sailing to overnight. They’ll have a full two days of fun for the bachelor party as they’ll be able to play on the sand dunes and in the surf as well as other things.