Emi GS

Wow!!! That was a heart wrenching story. Up until the end I thought it was linked with previous chapter. When I read the last, I get the light of the story. It was cleverly written and presented here. There is love and as well as the sadness. You sparked in this story... ~Emi GS.

Aww... Sammy!!! You are so cute to take good care for Nostic. And this post can say how you care. Many More Happy Returns of the Day Mrs. Blue... And Congratulations On Your Marriage You Have Got A Nice Lad Here

Another mystery??? Carlos and his war tales... I love photographic memory. I wish I had a boyfriend with that. Finally you are giving some info about each and everyone. That's something good. And very importantly You are writing very short chapter, which I loved a lot. It has given me chance to read them quick. But when I need more, you have to write more... ~Emi GS.

You preserved every important moment with you poems. The whole journey just has its display like and projecting presentation. All are lovely and some are breath taking situations. You proved that not only a picture can save the edible moment into its jism, but we can preserve it through these beautiful poems... As I am a huge fan of Cinquain, I loved the Reverse Cinquain too. Well done my friend, you have done a great job. ~Emi GS.

24??? Wow!!! Your surprise caught be off guard, but made me settle down with something I have a off mind about. Those three are definitely are interesting characters. As two younger got their attention by those jocks, can I have this Toby character for myself...? Wonderful chapter Caz. Loved it... ~Emi GS.

After all these chapters, I am still feeling uncomfortable accepting the age concept relating to a dom and a sub. Other that that, it was really a wonderful chapter for me. I really like the way how lovers turned to fall for each other, in a story. And I liked it here too. But the age gap giving me a little,very little, flick for the concept. Lovely chapter again... ~Emi GS.

I have to agree with Gary here. Silas might have take all the torture and be silent about it. And the serial killer would have succeeded in killing Silas. Even though the mistake those subs did some good, but their arrogant behavior and thought of themselves as superiors was definitely a nasty thing. Now with clear picture these three fellas from club would help those three brother to find the killer and be safe. As usual a nice chapter. ~Emi GS.

Two different emotions, two different people. Their main motivation and strength is Love. Their fear and darkness is the thought of loosing that Love. Love is more than air and water sometimes. You have shown it well. I loved those too poems. Really solid as Ben said. Thank you for sharing. ~Emi GS.

:wizard: Many More Happy Returns of the Day B... :wizard:

Its always makes me smile to know more about the authors/buddies. Thanks to Dark, Renee and Cia for making this possible...

I have to agree with Gary. Sometimes we definitely need a break. Take care buddy. Its you who is important here, not some stories or novels. Take good care of you first. *HUGS*

Nothing other than the age differences are hitting me hard. Everything is so neat and calm, as everybody saying. Nice chapter Caz... ~Emi GS.

I have to accept with Aunt Def. I loved the bonding between those three brothers. Its really special for this chapter. The mysteries you have held in this chapter, I hope, they will be unfold soon. Oliver and Carlos are (much) older than these triplets, right? I appreciate their care towards these brothers. Lovely chapter Caz... ~Emi GS.

Is pain gives pleasure!!!? I have to agree with it after I read this story. And the way you added the caring dom and obedient sub, its nothing but love-making on mutual terms. Though, I would never support BDSM(my personal opinion only). Wonderful chapter Caz, you have done well on this... ~Emi GS.

OMG!!! A psycho/serial killer!!!??? Caz you are taking this to next level and its so far too. Don't worry, I'll just tag along with you. Nice chapter of play back of what happened on the phone that day. Thanks to Tim for that. Ok, I am going forward(tagging along )... ~Emi GS.

Toby is getting along with what was happening in the club. Its the side he never knew more about his brothers. I hope he will learn more about his siblings and will understand/adjust what they were doing. And I appreciate Toby's concerns towards his brothers. Nice chapter and Moving to the next one... ~Emi GS.

You are giving bad ideas to me with those no shirt, leather pants and tattoos on Toby. And that too, they are triplets and hot. Am I a bushing mess!!! I am. Everything is going as planned. Was that shit head going to show up??? To know that, I am moving to next chapter. BTW, Nice chapter... ~Emi GS.

It felt like a JamesBond movie kind of investigation or planning. It was interesting chapter so far. I was hoping everything goes under planned way... Well done Caz... PS: Am I reading it wrong. Tara assigned pairs as 'Oliver~Silas' and 'Carlos ~ Danial', right? Why are others saying it otherwise!!!??? ~Emi GS.

A first chapter full of attachment. I liked the love between these siblings. Indeed a great chapter. As I am wishing for that bastard to get punished, I hope Toby won't do any thing out of anger, which he will regret later. Next chapter; ahead... ~Emi GS.

Like everyone said, Triplets!!!??? I think I am gonna like it with three hot guys looking alike. Now I am wondering what you have in for us to surprise us more. I liked almost all characters other than that dom who abused Dan. Does he have any more in this story??? To find that, I am moving to next chapter... ~Emi GS.

Now I understand the system of 'Master and Slave'. The predetermined training was behind this all. I some what liked Tara's commanding-ness and caring concern. As per the assumption, I have to agree with Lit about Carlo and Silas interest towards one another. Now, next chapter... ~Emi GS.

A simple investigations over the rotted situations; nicely written. The introduction of more characters. And a twin, a quite surprise. Nice work Caz. Now I can say a nice chapter with lots of questions to be answered. Going to hunt down the answers, moving to next chapter... ~Emi GS.

Ok. I'll tell the truth, that I can't say its nice chapter. Its only because it turned out to be my first story(along the way) of this type of theme, BDSM. But yeah nice turn of events, though. You neatly introduced both main(if I am right) characters of your story out of rusty situations. I hope that bully gets what he deserved, by Oliver. Well done. Ok, moving on to next chapter... ~Emi GS

We readers, while reading, will get attached to the characters of that particular story. But I am so confused right now that is it a good thing or a bad thing. Because on some occasions we will start to read more of the story because of that character and sometimes we completely stop reading a story because of that character. So guys, is it a good thing or bad thing ~ getting attached with a fictional character???

Oh!!! That was unexpected. You made twins's relationship typical again. Yeah siblings have that kind of situations 'understanding and again not understanding completely' as well as 'accepting and not accepting ones thoughts'. Siblings. Or in this case I have to say Twins. I can't blame either of two, because I know how school life will turn nasty or lonely. So its normal to sibling have different thought over friends. Mine have too. There isn't much of Donny as you said to me. Coming to Brent he should really have to taste Angie's 'Taekwondo moves.' And Travis!!!??? Woaw! I never expected him and almost blamed him for being an ass and I thought he outed Donny and Clint. He is really needed someone's help and Clint gonna be there for him. But I don't think its a good idea for Clint to through himself for saving Travis, but I appreciate his concerns towards Travis. There might be other options or other ideas, right? Star wars!!! God, Clint's dad has terrible likes... But I really do like him, even thought he had odd tastes... Nothing much out of this chapter, for frank to say. And as always, I am eager to know more about what happened to Donny and what Clint gonna do to save his relationship with his twin(or is it reverse from her to him, right?) or to save his friend and himself from bullying and about Donny, who is in the hospital. So remember that I am waiting... ~Emi GS.