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Emi GS

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  1. Yeah, it was a small idea I got. I am glad you liked it. I liked Damian here a lot, he is such a sweet boy... Thank you for the review my dear Fairy Tail Queen Love, ~Emi.
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    Thank You Caz

    Thank you Gary and in my opinion she deserves more...
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    Thank You Caz

    And for the best gift of my life...
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    First Surprise

    Whoa!!! Lots of questions already!!! First of all, there are lots of people and mentalities in this world. Tys is one of them too. His social status was very poor, so he don't have another alley than Elli. So he stick to the kiss and the promise made by Elli. Secondly, Everything is always a surprise if your best friend is the one you love. Even the betrayal. I hope you understand what I am trying to say here. And the second to final, Elli and Jacob!!!??? I never thought of that. And finally, thank you for the review. I really appreciate your concerns. ~Emi.
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    First Surprise

    Tys hates running away. Thats why he sticks to Elli for so long and did everything to impress him. He will do anything to impress him. Even if he has sacrifice his love. Okay I already said more than intended... zips my lips... Elli lied!!!??? You have to stick to the story to know that... Thanks for the review... ~Emi.
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    First Surprise

    Wow!!! I didn't expect this type of enthusiastic review either. I felt for Tys too. And its always good to hear I am not the only one. Thank you for all those comments and compliments given for my writing. You made be blush like hell. Thank you for that too. Thank you for the review and for following up... ~Emi.
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    Thank You Caz

    Yeah, She is...
  8. For the first time in my life I got a package through normal mail, a gift from my friend here, for my birth day. It was not simply a gift, but for me more than anything in my life. My first ever printed poem. I don't have words right now and don't know how to thank properly other than the way I knew, writing a poem for them. And Caz, this is for you... Sometime simple 'Thank You' was not enough to say our gratitude towards someone special Sometimes a simple 'Smile' was not enough to give how fortunate you made me feel special Sometimes this simple 'Verse' was not enough to tell how, much, fond I got of your gift and you. Thank you so much For Giving me The best Gift of My Life My First ever printed Poem...
  9. I am sorry that you have to go this painful way. I hope there is another remedy rather than pulling of the tooth. Why don't you look for some Ayurvedic remedy for it!!!? And I am sorry I can't resist it...
  10. You have showed brutality has its sensitive corner, if I absorbed correctly(at least this time), and your detail description was alway what I like. Another good poem from you.
  11. :wizard: Many More Happy Returns of the Day Stannie :wizard: :wizard: I hope you are doing fine and wish for all the happiness in your life :wizard: :wizard: Enjoy the day well :wizard:
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    Chapter 9

    I know! I know it was going to be a disaster too. And you proved me right, right? I know his coming out was becoming as a natural disaster. So I wish Clint to try 'hard' this time, take the clue... And you surprised me with Angie. Sheila now knew that its not her winning area. And Brent!!! Was it jealous??? Or it is the whole drama of blaming Clint for all this??? And Travis?! I don't know. All guys in my life, who like to experiment. But all I got hurt. Not physically though. I don't know what to say about him. But what I like him is; he somewhat care for Clint, as his best friend. And I'd say I am happy Clint committed there. A full of fun, intense and some what corny. This chapter, as usual, you brought best out of it. Do you know I am waiting for the next chapter... ~Emi.
  13. :wizard: Happy Birth Day Bill... :wizard:
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    Fools: A Ballade

    When I first read it, I felt some what sad and yet powerful. As I am one of the shy guys, I can see myself there. As for me, as Gary said, it is uplifting and yet made me confused. As I know personally, 'life won't be fair always'. I can say, I will personally like a boost like this. Such a wonderful poem, Parker. Thanks for sharing with us... ~Emi.
  15. :wizard: Many Many Happy Returns of the Day Cia :wizard: :wizard: All the happiness rejoice your day. :wizard: :wizard: Enjoy Well :wizard:
  16. Awww!!! Sad to hear the news. Really gonna miss him...
  17. Sorry for being Late... My Friend; Special Angel and Sweet Heart All Happiness stands at you Feet Enjoy the day well As for the days to come along... Many More Happy Returns of the Day CAZ...
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    First Surprise

    First Surprise "I'll come back for you! ..." Those words were exactly what he spoke before leaving me, this town, this country itself! He may have been far away, but I could still feel his lips on mine. I could still remember the warmth of his hug, the softness of his kiss and the hardness of his wood against mine. God! That was a perfect moment in my life. It had been almost seven years we were apart. It wasn’t like we weren’t in contact. He called me, sent the occasional letter and text
  19. Here is my Prompt Response for 520'th prompt... Hope you guys like it... http://www.gayauthors.org/story/emi-gs/e_w_p_mgk/3
  20. Blind Date This blind date has been a lot of hell for me. I don't know why my son, Damian, was so eager to push me to go on a date. Actually he was the one who set it up. He put my profile on some dating site. He chose the guy and arranged for a blind date. He even managed convincing me to go, I don't know how. My name Adrian Ray. I live with my parents and son in Backwood Hills, Atlanta. And I work for a local law firm. It’s not like that I don't like to date, I am 28 after all. I’m an unmar
  21. Such love. Such pain. I felt for you each and every word. And I personally known this feeling of 'crumbled to the earth'. Here I have to accept with Parker, last line is just, Wow. Excellent poem Asamvav...
  22. Images drew onto my mind's display as I read each line. I can see and feel the pain and despair. I liked the view of the picture despite the sadness; the rain, the sea and a naked body. Wonderful Adi. Just wonderful. ~Emi.
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    Chapter 8

    Ok. I just wanted my review as descriptive as I was given the last review. But I was emotionally shaken by the scene between those father and son. Their love. Trust. Honesty. That care. Everything was just flawless. The emotional flow was genuinely immense. I have to agree with Parker here, you are building up the character of Clint so that we understand him better. He is turning out as great character as you wanted to be. Some more characters introduced ha!!!, both lively shown here and lively H*I*D*D*E*N. Yeah, I am not going to leave those blue petals, am I??? No, I am not. So you have to answer it. And, you know this, I am waiting(EAGERLY) for Operation Shiela... ~Emi.
  24. I am sorry, I don't know where slipped it and forgot to reply this. Citrine. She is quite little Beauty. I've never shared anything about her than this. And she is always a quite special. And this contribution for it is worth something. Thank you for the Review... ~Emi.
  25. Sometimes people do some things which they never meant to and never want to. But they can't control themselves from doing that. I think Kendall's father has rode this way. And Kendall's mistrust on him, is a possible fair thing because of what he had been through. I really liked Agnes here. She is the sort of lady, I watch as a mother. And Micheal was always a charmer when he is in present of Kendall. I am glad everyone is settling down and trying hard to forget about the past. This is a new beginning to all. Its Lovely and intensive filled chapter. Loved it Gary.. ~Emi GS.
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