Victor Gutte

interesting start , I'm looking forward to meeting Dillon and see what's in store for them .....a nice introduction to Lor as well ....a nice chapter overall Caz

I didn't realize I missed this story of yours . I am going to read it slowly though, so that I would be able to leave a proper review for the chapters

I don't understand poems normally but I still see how much Michael loves you ......the commitment you both have is really inspiring ......I thank Michael and here's a for him from me and another for you

I have glasses too ...looks like we match in many ways ....I haven't changed mine in years, the colour is starting to fade now .....maybe I should consider getting one myself

I don't know why but for some reason unknown, I expected it to be you to post a story when Gary spoke about an "exciting new writer" .....the first chapter was really nice ....and left a lot of questions in my mind about Jensen's "memories" ......now I am going to start bugging you for a new chapter if you don't post soon ....just ask Drew how bad I can get .....anyways congratulations on posting your first story Lit and wish you all the best

I just have finished catching up this story and liked it so far .....though I am not really a fan of a tri-mating ,your reasoning for having one worked pretty well .....waiting for the other chapters anxiously

I actually did not enjoy reading this chapter as I kept crying all the way through it , it kept reminding me of myself in my teenage years and my parents as well ....this well reflected my fears and feelings on the matter and reading them had my emotions in a wreck , .......I am sorry I am not able to write a better review but I still am unable to get myself into control ......in a really bad shape bawling like a baby .....but anyways you wrote a brilliant chapter Gary and thank you for it

Onkel Tim , you don't have to use cliffhangers to make us hungry birds want another chapter ...we would have wanted a new one as soon as we complete a chapter besides I was not really surprised by Rob having books in his room , some of my friends in real life are like that as well .....I found the title funny and I could understand the feelings of both Eric and Nelson .....for Eric, it must be scary about being out in front of so many people who can be quite judgmental ....let's not forget that he's only fifteen .....and I feel I understand Nelson's fears as well .... anyways thank you for the chapter Onkel Tim

I still haven't stopped , but these are happy tears ......Michael seems to love you so much , and it is evident by the way he was stubborn and how he never gave on you ......the wedding was amazing and so full of love ..... give Michael my for taking care of you dear brother .....and I wish you both all the happiness in your future ......gosh, I seriously need to stop right now or I'll end up with a running nose

this chapter is definitely an emotional ride , it was sad to see the normally happy Aceto family sad , but I believe that every grandparents who love their grandchild feels that way ..... on a positive note, I'm happy that Nate is is better now and surrounded by people who love and care for him ..... I'm pretty sure he'll turn to be a strong young man some day , and hope is a really strong thing Gary , it makes you do a lot of things ......I'm looking forward to see how Colleen reacts to M & K's engagement .....thanks for the chapter Gary

I did feel that something bad is going to happen when I read the title but didn't expect to meet a new character .....I get a feeling that Nate is going to be the prime focus for the neat chapters .....I expect to know more about what went on with him ......since you have told that a new chapter is soon to come, I am unable to type a coherent review right now .....I'll try to do a better one for the next chapter ...so, thank you for telling me that I missed the chapter

thank you Drewbear .....but I feel that I would never be able to replace their mother

but it was kinda sad as well when I think of their mother .....but thank you well I didn't want it to sound like a really sad one though

...... ..... ..... ..... ....... After reading the chapter, I am unsure of what to say..... let's start from the beginning .... when I read the title jackpot, I sort of expected ....it to happen ..... and your warning about the chapter containing sexual situations ....but I should say that you're a master at writing love scenes , the way they are concerned about each other is wonderful ..... and the love meaking feels like an extension of their love and not a sex scene and as far as the baby is concerned, Michael was being right in saying that the baby is the son of both ..... I somehow have a feeling that the baby will grow closer to Kendall than Michael ...... and besides relations are not made by blood, they are made when we think of the other person as our own ........ okay enough ranting ....... this was such a beautiful chapter Gary , thank you for giving us this

Hey Carlos!! , I found this story today and found that it is part of a series ...I just caught up and really love the story ......BTW....I don't really remember meeting José-María or I might have missed him ...... and I really liked the way you got The Trevor Project into the story ....thank you for such a nice story

....... .......okay! I seriously don't know what to say ......the date was really nice though what I remembered the most was K's previous date with Amanda .....it was nice to see that K was mature to understand himself and didn't want to drag someone else into his mess ......I felt that Amanda was an intelligent woman as she showed no real surprise when K talked to her ...... the sex talk (oops! the love talk!! ) they both had showed the anticipation for the act to happen as well as for it to be a memorable and pleasurable experience...it also reaffirmed how much they cared for each other ..... and as far as Candy is concerned , in the beginning I saw a selfish, manipulative woman who doesn't like it when people messed up with her plans .....but now I see an ignored daughter who wanted the approval of her father, someone who doesn't know what a real relationship is like ...... in the ultrasound, I got a feeling that she was purposefully trying to detach herself from the baby as she knows he is not going to be with her .....because it is hard to not get attached to someone growing inside you.... my sister got really attached to her baby even if it was for a few days and took it really hard ..... and the baby is a boy???? A BOY!!!! .....I was so hoping for a girl , she would totally have both her dads on their heels .....anyways, thank you for the fun but somewhat serious chapter , love ......Victor

wow Drew!!! , it was exactly similar to how it was like mine. though in my case I was not really bothered by the help box ....there were times I found myself staying awake the whole night to complete a story as I was unable to sleep since my mind was full of the story . I've read so many stories as a ghost...oops! i.e. guest though after becoming an actual member, I really did not do as much reading as in the past both due to me not having much time in real life and my time on GA is spent socializing rather than reading but both are equally fun anyways ^_^ . there are so many awesome stories as a ghost I wanted to review or read again but I've forgotten most of their names or some of them became premium ....I might need to get a premium membership at one point .... overall, I just wanted to say that I never expected to find so many nice friends and such a great family in a reading community I guess things happen in the least expected way but in the best way possible

well onkel Tim....I didn't really expect you to be scared by my but any ways I think that this chapter shows how much of a protective older brother can Rob be ....and how much supportive all the parents are . you also provided a good insight of GSA ... overall a good and slightly serious (in a nice way) chapter ....thank you onkel Tim

dammit Gary!!! you made me cry so much ( tears of happiness though) .....when Mikey stared to propose I pretty much ran into the bathroom to squeal even though I'm quite sure that I was well heard all things aside I'm really happy for Janine and Lanny , they deserve to be happy and this conversation between both of them though totally accurate ....... the love between two couples is exactly same regardless of the gender and sexual orientation ......it is unfortunate that gay people have to fight for the recognition of their love and about marriage.....totally relatable.....I totally keep dreaming of getting married , maybe it's due to the reason that it is happening since so long and makes us feel that our love and relationship is complete .... Anyways, thanks for the cute and yet meaningful chapter Gary

this time I don't really have many words to say Gary but this poem is really beautiful

sorry for not being able to leave an elobarate review Gary but I just am not in a stage to leave a good review now . reading this chapter today got me the required smile today and I am really thankful for it . P.S. you can bring a bigger smile to my face if you give me a scene where Ace and Deuce take another step in thier love-making *hides behind a curtain* and also explain the context of the names Ace and Deuce

these series are fun to read , I loved these li'l snippets say, is officer Espinosa named after Drew? I just felt that both are quite similiar

this letter was really touching Gary. Caitlyn achievements before her accepting herself and transition have inspired me to achieve something in my life and follow my dreams. my mom says that people always try to go out of their way to be mean and insulting to those persons they are jealous of. I may not be from the 1900's but being from a country where you can go to jail for sex with a person of same gender, I do understand a little bit of what the LGBTQ+ people during that era might have felt. if you haven't sent this letter to Caitlyn, then you should consider doing so . it was a beautifully thought and written letter Gary and thank you for sharing it with us

well I wrote a nice and elaborate review but lost it just before posting *THANK YOU internet connection* so now I am just saying that this is such a nice story and I'll do an overall review in CC forum later Tak for den dejlige kapitel og elsker dig &

I really wish that some day candy realises what she sold away because then the guilt inside her will kill her slowly, after all feeling guilty is the biggest punishment a person could ever face. I understand why Michael has difficulties talking to her, anyone would be disgusted to face such a heartless and selfish person. I almost felt like jumping right into the story, pulling the phone from Michael and telling candy that both our men would make her regret the day she was born if anything happens to the baby . anyways bad things aside, seeing Lanny become a better person is a nice thing and Kendall has proved that he is good with people and this time Kendall made me feel like him this time, though I wouldn't as I don't want to incur the wrath of a fat ass...oops...badass police officer . loved the chapter Gary