A very well done and engaging story. It isn't pretty, in fact sometimes it is brutal. It will anger and frustrate you but read it all. It is worth your effort and time.
i don't believe in muses ... only our spirit, that's where our words come from; our spirit, and our hearts.
While i like the poem, i prefer the prose, your descriptive paragraph is beautiful.
This is priceless...
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