Mikiesboy

Thank you for reading it. Matt's life will soon change. How is the question, and what will happen when it does? I'm so happy to see you again.

Many thanks, Parker. I'm readying the next as soon as I finish here! I appreciate you reading.

Thank you, Gary L! ❣️ I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Would a shipwreck be a good thing? Mmmm, I'd say there is likely at least one lifeboat. Kanaan is an odd character. He lives a double life and seems devoted to his children, sort of. Because of his wives, he's likely bisexual, though he's typically chauvinistic. It doesn't mean he wants to kill them. On his ship, he can be the dominant sadist is his. But after he caned Matt, he does tell Ahmet to care for him so Matt's pain is reduced. He does threaten, but I think if he wanted Ahmet dead, Ahmet would have been killed. Thank you for your comments, Michael.

Your comments are spot on. Matt has much more coming, and ten more chapters remain! Thanks very much for reading and your comments; I love them.

If I have to say something, I'd say it was the cold-blooded option with a drop of mercy. I like suggestions, though!

I'm afraid I'm guilty of making Doreen and Robert the parents I didn't have but wished for. My mother was a saint, but the other one, not so much. But I think there are lots of parents who are truly on the same page. Kanaan is another man who is both a monster and still has a bit of heart. We all have good and bad sides. Regarding Ahmet and Matt, I like what you think. Human traffickers use old buildings and condemned places, most likely... they don't own property. LOL. "Come on down to the Used Folks Emporium!" Thanks for your comments, Weinerdog!

I think I wrote that part before we really started conversing; however, I can see what you'd think it. I think for many, the children's burdens are hoisted up by their parents. Sometimes there's no other choice than to leave a character in limbo, or else you need to post all the chapters at once. I'd do that if it were allowed.

Perhaps you shouldn't read it if my work/style, whatever, is a problem for you. As I have mentioned in the Private messages you've sent me, I write my way. If you or anyone else would rather not read my work or don't like it, simply don't read it. Easy. Your comment makes no sense. Dante says Black sold Matt ABOUT two years ago, meaning that he's not sure about the timing. So, where did I say Ahmet was locked up for two years? You're making inane assumptions.

Happy Saturday and International Moon Day. I've written several poems about the moon.. here's one: Summer’s cool evening breeze found us Sharing wine, bread and cheeses; hard Our laughter could be heard o’er the glen and echoed softly in the old churchyard When the harvest moon, its light did share We’d meet and then, after a glass or two O’er this tidy, rolling path, we’d wander Marveling at the orb’s glorious orange hue Most winter nights were never clear And the moon’s soft, reflected glow Would lighten the grey, woolen skies As arm-in-arm, we walked below Now full circle, has our life come This path, again, I walk on my own Above, the moon is full and bright But March winds chill me to the bone The moon aloft is my only company While I add fresh flowers before your stone I’m lonely, my heart hitches, and I know Soon, you’ll no longer reside here alone You and I will have eternity together Fulfilling the promises we each had made We’ll stroll this path forever and always Under the moon’s brilliant cascade. Have a great Saturday!!! Happy Moon Day!!

Robert and Andrew had expected Maeve to react with horror to the news the writer brought her, but she hadn't. Much later, Robert would say to Andrew, "We should have known better." Maeve listened with a heart that held only love and compassion. "Aw, the poor lad. Of course, I’ll not say anything. I’ll help if I can." Maeve’s common sense and organized nature took over. "When will he arrive? What will he need? I think it best we sort that out now, with the weather coming." "Aye, Maeve

Thank you, Michael. xo

Thank you, Alexmugs. Many people agree with you about how Andy saved Matt. They'd probably feel the same way about speeding. Robert is so stalwart, and Andy is lucky to have him and can count on him. Thanks again!!

Thank you for the comments. I usually try not to do what is usual. That said, the use of italics is the writer's choice and is a well-known writing style. It's also a well-known industry standard to eliminate quotation marks, as these are internal thoughts and not spoken words. Using italics makes the character's thoughts stand apart from the narration. Allowing the characters internal dialogue often reduces the long-winded narration required to explain their thoughts. I hope that the above clarifies the use of italics.

Extremely late... don't ask. Hope you're all having a nice Friday.

Thank you! Chapter 6. I've read it a hundred times, and I still can't get through it unfazed. There is no need for a favourite. Like flowers, they do better in a bunch. Well, the exceptions are orchids and a perfect rose. Thanks again for choosing to read this. Since I am being shameless, if you can handle a little otherworldly stuff—it's mild, believe me—try The Searcher. That is my favourite, but it's just slightly ahead of Changes. Whatever you decide, thank you again for your comments and reading both these stories!!

Thank you. You are right; this is a transitional chapter. We needed to move on a little bit. Andy is getting on with things, as you say. Matt and Ahmet are not a good idea on the boat. Maybe off of it? We'll see. Thanks again for your comments.

Money truly is the root of evil, and not only in Gulf states. Many wealthy people in North America treat 'regular' people poorly, and many don't as well. Hmm, drugging your boss. I like it. Thanks for reading and your comments!

Thank you, Alexmugs. Boat registration and international waters confuse things further. But don't quote me. I didn't write about all of that for several reasons. Andy is a decent guy, who screws things up, makes mistakes, follows his heart, and tries to do the right thing like most of us. Matt does have a hard road. Thank you for reading!

Sherye, I have to offer my sincere apology for not replying to you before now. 2020 was a terrible year. I was badly affected and wasn't on GA much. That's the only excuse I have. Thank you for sharing this lovely anecdote. You're so right about talking and sharing memories, it does help so much. Thank you for your comments. ❤️

Eh, we all have feelings and see things differently. Louis is basically me, and my Husband, who isn't wheelchair-bound, is sort of Don-ish. He leads, and I follow, and I knew that when I signed up for our relationship. We're pretty damned happy, though He does frustrate me at times. But it works. Other people may look from the outside and think I'm a doormat. I'm not, and I have ways of letting Him know how I feel when necessary. Ch 6 is likely the hardest thing I've ever written.

Interesting. Louis is a submissive guy who knows his husband is a steamroller. He says he was frustrated and upset when he was told this news. But he's also the kind of person who puts his needs aside for others, even though he says he's selfish. Let me know if you like the rest of the ride.

Hi, Al Norris... aw, thank you so much. These two are a pair who are very special to me. Shamelessly, i'll mention there is a part two.. Changes, Again, if have interest and some spare time. It's still Don and Louis but it's longer. It felt real for Don to charge in and tell Louis to take a lover and then be jealous. And I think natural for Louis to lean toward Harry as he was afraid and stressed and just needed someone. This story brought home to me how 'real' and getting things right, is important.. it hit me when a reader said they'd gone through the same with their husband and a motorcycle accident and Don and Louis' situation was very close to theirs. That hit me like a slap. I hadn't thought about that possibility. I'm glad you read this story and i appreciate your comments. Thanks again.

people are just dumb sometimes... oh he's a real adventurer that one

Aw, poor guy. Why would you separate him like that? I watch a few horse rescue things on youtube and i'm just horrified at the cruelty these poor animals endure. They are alive, breathing and intelligent creatures.