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Great beginning to the story, leaving you wanting more. Where was the story posted previously? I will definitely be back for more. Thanks

Very well done. We see the similarities coming out between the two men. Andy might be the priest but Marcus is the comforter to the young man who holds so much pain inside. It seems the hard shell and denial is opening to a new acceptance and understanding that all his old feelings and beliefs may have been wrong and a new awakening is about to break through. Marcus begins to see himself differently as so vulnerable to having his heart captured by the young priest who doesn't know he is about to do it. I really hate having to wait and see.

Found this story with today's post. Read all eleven chapters and enjoyed your story. Wondering if Melvin is being abused at home which could explain some of his behavior. I will look for your next installment and hope it won't be long in coming.

This is a great beginning to what should be developed into an ongoing story. Please do not let it end here with so much potential that would be a shame.

I have read the other stories whose characters are coming into this story. Have enjoyed all of your stories and look forward to seeing how evil doers disrupt this heretofore uncomplicated developing love story.

Great story, look forward to seeing the bad guys get what they deserve. Great love scenes described in details that make you feel the love they have for each other. Impatiently waiting for the next chapter.

Always happy to see a new chapter, never disappointed. Pauls past very intriguing. A little mystery added to the mix and a clue to who might have had a motive of revenge makes waiting for the next chapter more interesting.

I read the first three chapters today. Liking the story and the great character development. Will Tom cause trouble? You are off to an interesting start. Where are the other two stories posted?

Great story, wasn't sure I was going to like it at first but didn't see where it was headed until near the end. Enjoyed it a lot.

My first time reading your work, enjoyed the first chapter and hoping to see more soon. The story shows lots of potential for a great friendship to develop between the two young men. I always like to see the potential develop in a young man like Shawn.

Wow, what a great beginning to this story. I hate waiting for next installments when I find a great story. The beginning is always the same, man meets man, but you are not wasting years or months of time trying to figure who is gay or not, whether or not it is ok to look at each other's body and touch each other. What a great beginning and what great insight into human nature.

I always enjoy each installment. Hoping Nathan's calls are an indication that he cares for Robbie more than he has demonstrated in the past.

Your story is interesting and timely considering the current political campaigns. This latest meeting will probably tip the scales to get charges filed against the two young men. Looking forward to your next installment.

I found your story this morning and read all five chapters. Enjoying the story, not sure why I hadn't seen it before. Interesting how you have developed the relationship between the boys and glad to see it progress so quickly. Looking forward to next chapter.

Glad to see a new chapter of this great story. Things are beginning to work themselves out, I am looking forward to the beginnings of a relationship between Rob and Nathan.