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    Another awesome chapter, there us that old saying "it takes a village to raise a child" it seems most appropriate now the caring hearts and minds of the steadily growing group, will help rescue and care for the boys , who are rescued and no will be rescued, soon i think they will run out of places , the unsaid problem is how to keep them safe from the mob, who has no problem disposing of people. This operation is going to cause a lot of underworld characters to end up dead or in prison, the head of the snake needs to cut off
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    The Love of Money

    Wow a very intense chapter, it had everything you could think , just rewards to everyone concerned good and bad. I somehow think dear Roger is going to be needing a much , much bigger house. Melissa and sam it loks like are going to become parents very suddenly
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    Agitation

    Wow, this was quite an intense chapter, it seems a lot of the cops and people involved have baggage that they carry around and slowly but surely that baggage is going to fall off and more than 1 can of worms is going to be opened. Rizzo is going to be falling onto his egos knife and he will suffer as he must for his indiscretions, i cannot wait to see heads roll one cop down more to follow
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    Awakening

    Wow Juan and his crowd were just but just in time to "save" Charles, I certainly hope that the session with the 2 corrupt cops was recorded, if ever there was damning evidence that works be it , Charles is going to face his actions and deserves to tell his story , regardless his life is done.Brendon and Thomas are most definitely in need of some therapy, they need to come to terms with their past to open up the future, I feel sorry for poor Roger he is also in a quandary about his future,
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    Enemies and Allies

    Wow young Juan is certainly not alone in this mess, he called a friend and suddenly he has all the help and assistance he needs to bring down the cartel, he also now has friends in very high places, this group is going to be a tremendous help with this case . This keeps getting better and better, more please
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    Choices

    Wow a brilliant chapter, Thomas is a bit lost , now that things for him are back to "normal" Brendon and his mother have a lot of soul searching to do i think his mother is a bit bi more left than straight, time will tell, i think Juan was thrown in the deep end to start with , I think someone was hoping he would fail , he has however done the opposite, he now knows that he has uncovered an humongous hornets nest , the implication are that it will expose a pyramid of despicable pedophiles, this will eventually crumble down , and a lot of deserving low lives will be taken down, interesting times ahead, I cannot wait for this twisting tail to continue
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    Chapter 2

    Wow and wow again, the joining of souls , lets celebrate and hope it lasts , congratulations
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    Chapter 1

    So the niceties are done lets get down to business, yum yum
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    Prologue

    Interesting start, a lot of information, we will see what happens
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    Battlelines

    Another awesome chapter, so we have a bigot for a nurse and a sister, well i think both are in for a time from others, her sister is going to have a battle on her hands when the kids want to see their "new" aunt, Thomas has a sharp sense of humour, i think that a few chapters are going to be rather explosive . I say bring it on
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    Dazed and Confused

    Well a rollercoaster ride doesn't do this justice, there is a lot of soul searching that needs to be done, the hurdles for all will be overcome i think collectively,the team "Casio" or Rogers family has just grown by another 2 it makes one wonder how big the "family" will become, we have a very long road to travel I think ,. This was a very emotional chapter, enough buckets of tears to feed the angels, i loved reading it , this keeps getting better and better
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    All In

    Read thanks and commented in thanks for that
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    Resolved?

    Wow and wow again, that was a bit if a bombshell in the court, dear uncle really and truly got his just rewards, he now will take the place of Thomas in prison, an ironic twist of fate, I however doubt he will survive very long in prison, pedophiles tend to have a very short shelf life once within prison walls. So Thomas is a free "man" he most definitely has a very exciting life ahead. Roger and Thomas can now heal each other. An amazing story. I can't wait to read more of the 2 of them , lets not leave Melissa and sam out of this growing happy family
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    All In

    I wholeheartedly agree with Cane23, i cannot wait for chapter 4 , a lot came out in this chapter, Thomas is slowly realizing the Roger is most definitely on his side , Roger has read the uncle perfectly , get him to think he has control , but payback is going to be do sweet, the uncle not only abused Thomas but his father as well, the uncle made his brother into the hateful person he became and added to the way he treated Thomas, this is going to be really entertaining cross examination,the pedestal he is on is going to crash down, I cannot wait read about it. Thank you again for such an awesome story
  15. Well the previous defense lawyer certainly did not like being tossed out , the ADA thought he had this wrapped up, Roger made it clear that is not the case , Thomas has shown to be very scared of his "uncle" he obviously is no friend , he is a wild card that will I hope explodes on the stand , he immediately came across as someone who wants to take charge and control everything,, intimidate everyone worked before so why not now. This rollercoaster ride is only just beginning, a wild ride ahead. Another awesome chapter.
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