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Wow what a stunt and they pulled it off , they hoys are off the farm, a few pawns are dead, the 2 in the limo need to be removed from the equation, they are killing men with information, Rogers life is about to explode or implode depending on the new arrival, good or bad the courier has information which could be vital to the investigation, Melissa suddenly became a mom to the twins , however it happened she is overjoyed, now Sam needs to buy into the equation. It looks like the the deck of cards is starting to collapse, a lot of the deck are in for a shocking surprise when they realize it is over for them, On another note " May peace and goodwill be with all over this festive season"
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Awesome chapter, the net closing in on the "pigs" 1 boy rescued now let the war begin, Juan has has opened the door to prosecutions, now Roger is going to get a big surprise or bad news , this keeps getting better, every boy rescued makes the journey seem worth it , there are a lot of caring people out willing to help
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Wow retribution has started, the cards are going to start cleaning up but the they are going to hit a brick wall sooner or later, the boys are safe ,i hope it stays that way now the farm is going to be under siege,by both sides, Roger is going to be dragged deeper into this mess . Melissa finally admits to herself that the twins mean more to her than we he expected and that they are falling into a family group. This story is getting better and way more intense
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Everything is going well with some , however those involved are going down the bung hole slowly now but it will gather steam very rapidly, the boys in danger are close to getting rescued and another whole can of worms and the investigation is going to get bigger and bigger and more self important men are going down. This story is getting better and more intense, I cannot wait for the next chapter. Thanks for this story
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Melissa is a bit lost about what to do, she though is handling it well micah needs a lot of help and understanding to come through, roger I think is going to be key to a bring a lot of the cartel down, everything is getting very intense, the more perverts in custody the more boys that will be saved. Interesting times ahead,
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The net of boys is getting bigger and bigger, every available helper is being called in to help, somehow I don't think there are enough homes to house the boys , we see a lot of caring about the boys going on, an even bigger picture is the number of adults who have lived through abuse in their younger years , i think that a few more phycologists are going to be needed, this story is getting better and better and more emotional as we go on, but this story still is amazing
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Another awesome chapter, there us that old saying "it takes a village to raise a child" it seems most appropriate now the caring hearts and minds of the steadily growing group, will help rescue and care for the boys , who are rescued and no will be rescued, soon i think they will run out of places , the unsaid problem is how to keep them safe from the mob, who has no problem disposing of people. This operation is going to cause a lot of underworld characters to end up dead or in prison, the head of the snake needs to cut off
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Wow a very intense chapter, it had everything you could think , just rewards to everyone concerned good and bad. I somehow think dear Roger is going to be needing a much , much bigger house. Melissa and sam it loks like are going to become parents very suddenly
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Wow, this was quite an intense chapter, it seems a lot of the cops and people involved have baggage that they carry around and slowly but surely that baggage is going to fall off and more than 1 can of worms is going to be opened. Rizzo is going to be falling onto his egos knife and he will suffer as he must for his indiscretions, i cannot wait to see heads roll one cop down more to follow
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Wow Juan and his crowd were just but just in time to "save" Charles, I certainly hope that the session with the 2 corrupt cops was recorded, if ever there was damning evidence that works be it , Charles is going to face his actions and deserves to tell his story , regardless his life is done.Brendon and Thomas are most definitely in need of some therapy, they need to come to terms with their past to open up the future, I feel sorry for poor Roger he is also in a quandary about his future,
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Wow young Juan is certainly not alone in this mess, he called a friend and suddenly he has all the help and assistance he needs to bring down the cartel, he also now has friends in very high places, this group is going to be a tremendous help with this case . This keeps getting better and better, more please
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Wow a brilliant chapter, Thomas is a bit lost , now that things for him are back to "normal" Brendon and his mother have a lot of soul searching to do i think his mother is a bit bi more left than straight, time will tell, i think Juan was thrown in the deep end to start with , I think someone was hoping he would fail , he has however done the opposite, he now knows that he has uncovered an humongous hornets nest , the implication are that it will expose a pyramid of despicable pedophiles, this will eventually crumble down , and a lot of deserving low lives will be taken down, interesting times ahead, I cannot wait for this twisting tail to continue
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Wow and wow again, the joining of souls , lets celebrate and hope it lasts , congratulations
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So the niceties are done lets get down to business, yum yum
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Interesting start, a lot of information, we will see what happens