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I loved that ending. It was so unexpected I laughed so hard. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

A very short chapter but a great start. I'm liking this a lot already. Your writing is so diversified. I don't think we'll ever get bored.

A very Different story, yes. But interesting. Not in my favourites of your stories, but sometimes a writer does need a break, doesn't he. I'm looking forward to the next one.

This is really getting interesting. Agood story is suddenly getting even better. Way to go Rick. It shows what kind of character he has. Obviously he has a lot to lose with this deal not going through. But seeing Heinrich Sr. and Rita get the shaft is well worth it.

This is a cool story. Because I've enjoyed all your other stories I know this one won't be a disappointment. I looked back on all of your stories and found one I hadn't read before (Home away from Home). I just finished it yesterday. I really enjoyied it.

Great chapter Carlos. Getting to like Ritchie more and more. Not that I never liked him. He's grown into a fine young man and a great role model for anyone his age or younger. He'll do the Air Force a lot of credit. I thought we we're going to hear a bit more about CJ and Ozzie's experience in Mexico - and we did. Only not enough. Give it up already! Please? You need to know that while we've probably all grown to like straight guy Peterson we still love CJ and really need to know these things. LoL.

Wow! An unexpected (or maybe not) cliff hanger. I sure hope Hunter is ok. This is a great story and I look forward to the next chapter.

An appropriate ending to a great story. I don't know how many times I looked up what some of the food actually was as well as where some of the places were - I was so taken in by it. Thank you, and I loook forward to Book 2.

Couldn't have said it better.

It's been so long since the previous chapters, but when I read the first sentence in chapter 19 I remembered the entirety of the story (I usually forget after a long time). But it was great to read the last two. A very interesting and good story with a happy ending. Cheers

What an interesting start to this story. I'm looking forward to reading further. Well written too.

This is a great story and I'm enjoying it a lot. I hope Jaimee keeps being careful around Paul because even if he is interested in Jaimee he does seem to have ulterior motives. If he came clean with Jaimee right away he might be able to get help and Jaimee would safeguard his relationship with Simon. It would be a shame that Paul would come between them, because he has a sh** load of problems personally.

You got me. I'm hooked already.

A really good and uplifting story. Thank you for ending it with the updates, etc. I'm looking forward to your next story.