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Chapter 37 - We are family
Terry P commented on Zenith's story chapter in Chapter 37 - We are family
I enjoyed the little trip into the lives of Don, Marco and Gwyn. But I missed Derrick and Gabe and am happy to back to them. -
I'm enjoying this story very much. As far as the editing is concerned you're doing an excellent job. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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I'm looking forward to more from this family. What a great one at that.
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Hope you're well Mark!
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That ending sure took me by surprise. Although, Think I know the answer to the question Grandma Asta asked. Great story.
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This was an amazing story. Thank you for it. I also appreciate that you didn't drag it out over a long period of time. Looking forward to a new chapter every day was really nice. I know you put a lot into making that happen. I look forward to more from you.
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This chapter brought so many emtions. WIth David learning about his grandson, to him and Jacob - at least being friendly towards each other (friends) Andy and Brian. So good!
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I sure didn't see that one coming. Now, I'm looking at finding out the circumstances of that night. I'm betting it was a one time thing (hoping anyway). And Brian and Andy? Not a big surprise. We saw the signs before. Its something how some things can really fuck up a person's life isn't it? I'm looking forward to the next chapter with the reunion and everything. Thanks for this story.
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This is a great story. Thank you. You really have me in suspense about what the adult Kyle and his father went through that they are estranged. And what about Jaob. I iknow, all in due time. But your chapters are definitely not too long, so please don't give us anything shorter.
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Really? Is it April 1st yet? (You know April Fool's Day?)
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An excellent chapter with so much happening. I love it when chapters are on the long side. I am concerned about this "United Sates being brought into God's Kingdom" bit. I hope that doesn't happen because I don't think it is necessary to resolve the underlying issues that the United States faces (even in real life today). But, it's only a story, so if it does happen it's not for real.
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Chapter 1 - Welcome to Whoseville
Terry P commented on Pmsingtiger's story chapter in Chapter 1 - Welcome to Whoseville
This is hilarious! I can't wait for the next chapter. But, what is all this "Mama" bit whenever he talks to an older woman? Perhaps you mean to say "Mam" Saying Mama to someone you don't know sounds a bit rude to me. Keep up the story. It's great. And you say you're going to be working on it till Christmas? Sounds like something to look forward to.
I hope you have a great day 