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Great chapter, the family has settled down well and times have moved on , it will interesting to taste the new fruit even if I have taste it in my minds eye. The kids have grown up by quite a bit
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Interesting chapter, I wonder how James is going to be drawn into the web , the two if them are in for a huge surprise I think
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Chapter 7: Abhorrent Alpha
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 7: Abhorrent Alpha
Awesome chapter, so both his teachers leant something new about Vinnie, I think that he will need to learn fast about to store more energy, and of course trouble on Horizon, I think that the threat is going to involve Stefan to some degree , and I suppose that Vinnie will learn how to kill -
Great chapter,a chance the boys have taken and excelled at, they certainly proved that they can do it and did , help that they needed was just never given, a really sad reflection on humans in general
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Great chapter, so the family expands and soon I am sure it will swell with 2 more boys who I am sure will be very helpful on the farm with everyone else working
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Interesting, so they were slightly more prepared than her, I wonder if they are going to take her to "father" , I hope that the boys stay safe
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Congratulations are definitely in order, he is a welcome addition to the farm and family , he will be spoilt, but then all babies need that. Glad your move was successful
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Interesting chapter, hunter certainly knows how to find someone but Casper was wise to not give in , hunter did not do well by starting to loose his cool, Casper is in a spot of bother knowing he is now being watched
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Great chapter, so he is literally thrown into the thick of things, I no better way to test him , no doubt he will be become a hero of sorts
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Interesting facts about finding Tasha, I wonder how long before they realise that she had help getting off the roof, that James wants to could be a bit of slow down for her, big trouble ahead I think
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Great chapter, Miranda is like the weather, cold,hit easy and damn temperamental, I almost want to say she needs a good screw, but that doesn't seem to be in the pipeline (ha ha) Rich is cut out to be a daredevil
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Interesting chapter, so his powers have increased but he has somewhat, lost some weight in the process, rather strange
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Great chapter,so the farm is running like a well oiled machine, Amalia is getting the house like she wants it. Good luck with the move
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Chapter 6: Healing Heart
mikedup commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 6: Healing Heart
Amazing chapter, it was really emotional between Kaplan and Cyrus, really tender but that is why they are drawn to each other, Vinnie is growing by leaps and bounds, he is gaining knowledge and skills with frightening ease , Stefan is In For a certain power battle -
Interesting chapter, Tasha I think needs to upgrade her accommodations , great that he mastered flying so fast ,
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Great entertaining chapter, a great time in Mexico, I suspect something is going to happen on the trip
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Great chapter and an awesome wedding, happy holidays and unfortunately back to the grind stone,
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Interesting chapter, talk about learning fast to use your gift , I think that it will be interesting to avoid the "others" I wonder if they are going to fly into a sh*t storm
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Congratulations to them and a wonderful life ahead, a fitting celebration to the family that spans generations
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Awesome chapter, and definitely congratulations to all involved, thanks for an awesome and entertaining story
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Great chapter, so the new in-laws arrived and big changes are going to happen to her family, but change can turn out to be a good thing, it could get quite expensive to bring the family over
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Great chapter, I think that he could become a permanent fixture on the farm ,he is going to get an eye opener when he reads the history,
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Great chapter, so congratulations are in order , I think it will be a drawn out wedding , then the farm will come to life with children I hope
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Chapter 4: Friend or Foe?
mikedup commented on C. Henderson's story chapter in Chapter 4: Friend or Foe?
Interesting chapter, so he has way more information about himself and the others, no doubt that he will have learn fast to get up to speed, maratoni is not going to let up I don't think -
Oh sh*t Trouble just hit in a major way,I wonder when they will be able to get everyone together to sort of calmly talk things through
